To Make A Wish Chapter 11

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 © September 2007-2012

Chapter Eleven

    The girls had woke on the Sunday morning and sorted out some breakfast before going up to get ready to leave on their shopping trip into town. They were all dressed in simple dresses that would make it easier for them to try things on. They were all sat at the kitchen table waiting for Karen to take the ring off Josie’s finger so Sara could put the other one on that she controlled. Sara knew for a fact that the ring Josie had on at the minute wouldn’t last all day, and she didn’t like the idea of Josie reverting back to Jo in the middle of a busy town centre.

     “Morning girls!” Karen said as she entered the kitchen and saw them all sat at the table looking pretty and ready to leave.

     “Morning mum.” Sara said sounding happy. “Can you do the business with the ring, so I can put the other one back on? We can go and do some serious shopping and introduce Josie to the wonderful world of clothes buying! Girlie style.” Sara added with a giggle.

     “Oh I’m sorry dear, I’d forgotten all about Josie being stuck with that ring on.” Karen said as she stepped over to where Josie was sat and then held out her hand so she could take hold of the ring and remove it so Sara could slip the other one on. “I have something to give each of you before you leave the house as well.” Karen added as she went over to her purse and pulled out some white envelopes and walked back over to the table and handed each girl one of them with their name written on the front in a very posh looking script.

     “What’s in them mum?” Sara asked with a puzzled look as she sat looking at hers.

     “I’m not sure what’s in them sweetie.” Karen shrugged. “Hypatia handed them to me just before we left. She said to give them to you this morning before you all left to go shopping.” Karen added as she went over to put the kettle on and make a pot of tea.

    Eager to find out what was in the envelope, Sara was soon ripping hers open to find out what was inside. Sara let out a gasp when she pulled out a stack of new crisp twenty pound notes. Sara counted the money and found there to be two hundred pounds in there. The other girls all ripped theirs open and found that they all had the same amount in theirs as well. Sara found a hand written note in with hers, so she pulled it out and opened in up and saw it was from Hypatia.

 

    Dear Sara

    I hope you don’t mind, but I just wanted to give you and the other girls a little spending money for your little trip into town. Please remember to buy sensible clothes only, but if you can’t do that, then at least make sure you have a wonderful time, and please keep an eye on young Josie for me. I have a feeling that girl is going to be a little trouble magnet for you while you’re out shopping.

    Love

    Hypatia. XXXX

 

    Sara found herself giggling as she read through the note again before handing it around the table for the other three to read before they finally handed it over to Karen so she could read it as well.

     “That’s not fair!” Josie whined. “Why does she think I’m the trouble magnet?” Josie added with a pout.

     “You must just look like a trouble magnet baby.” Sara pouted back as she wrapped an arm around Josie and kissed her on the cheek.

     “Only because you and Sheana made me look this way.” Josie pointed out with a grin as she counted the money in her hands.

    Sara didn’t need to link minds with Josie to work out what she was thinking as she counted out the twenty pound notes in her hands a couple more times. “You’ll need all that money to build up a wardrobe of clothes for yourself while working in the cafe when it opens. I think we will all need some cute, but tough wearing clothes for working in the cafe.” Sara pointed out to the others as they all sat counting out the two hundred pounds they each had.

     “I’m sure I can use some of it to treat myself to a new playstation 3 game Sara.” Josie said in whiney voice. Josie got her answer when Sara just started to giggle at her. “I take that as a no then.” Josie added with a pout as she put the money down on the table and sat back in the chair folding her arms across her chest, or trying to, but not having much luck with it. Josie finally gave up trying and just let her hands drop down into her lap and let out an angry sigh.

     “Sara has a good point Josie.” Michelle said in agreement. “I need to buy a lot more clothes if I plan to work at the cafe.” Michelle added when she thought about the small wardrobe of clothes she had back at home.

     “It doesn’t sound like you’ll have much time for playing video games anyway.” Karen pointed out as she took her seat at the table after filling the tea pot and putting it on the table to finish brewing. “Michelle will need help keeping an eye on the men in black while Sara and Sheana go out on missions trying to keep the fools from getting themselves killed.” Karen added with a frown.

     “Speaking of going on missions together sis.” Sara said looking all excited as she remembered something she’d been thinking about while taking a shower earlier in the morning. Sara had been letting the water wake her up as she playing with the locket around her neck when she thought that Sheana would need a disguise if she was going to help her and not get seen doing it. “We need to come up with a disguise for you as well.” Sara pointed out.

     “I hadn’t thought of that Sara.” Karen said with a worried look on her face. “We’ll need to give it some thought before you go out on another rescue mission.” Karen added.

     “I could use the invisibility spell until we have something worked out, if we need to go out before we get it finalised.” Sheana said as she thought Sara had a point.

     “Hypatia and Samantha gave me their numbers yesterday, so I’ll give them a call and see if they have any ideas.” Karen said as she reached over and got her purse off the side and then pulled out the card that Samantha had wrote down all of her and Hypatia’s details down on. “I’ll call them after you leave.” Karen added as she put the card down and then set to work making herself a cup of tea.

     “We’re going to set off now and get an early start on the shops, so we can work out who has the best offers.” Sara said as she got up from the table and then helped Josie to her feet. Michelle had done the same for Sheana.

     “Okay dear, but remember to keep an eye on Josie until she gets the hang of shopping for girl clothes, and don’t force her to try things on she doesn’t feel comfortable in.” Karen warned Sara more than the other two.

     “I’d never do anything like that mum.” Sara said with a little hurt in her voice. “I just want to have a fun day out shopping with my new girlfriend.” Sara added with a grin as she stepped closer to Josie and wrapped an arm around her waist.

     “Please don’t worry about me Karen.” Josie smiled. “I’m looking forward to trying on some of the things I saw Sara and the others trying on last week. Even more so now I’ve been wearing some of these new materials the past day or so.” Josie added with a grin as she ran a hand down her dress to feel the soft fabric as it brushed against her leg.

     “Well I hope you all have a good time, and try to stay out of trouble.” Karen looked at Sara and Sheana when she said the last bit, referring to the pair of them using magic, or letting anyone see that Sara had special gifts of her own.

     “You know you can trust us to be the perfect children while we’re out mum.” Sara smiled as she gave her mum a quick hug before letting the other three all do the same.

    Karen just made a humming sound as she looked at them all once more before waving them off out the door so she could enjoy her cup of tea in quiet.

    The girls all giggled as they picked up the money Hypatia had given them, and they all put it in their purses before they skipped out the kitchen and then out the house. They got to the bus stop at the end of the road just in time to catch the bus into the town centre.

     “How you feeling Josie? Nervous?” Sara asked as they sat on the bus heading towards town.

     “A little, but it’s hard to feel too nervous after being like this for a couple of days now.” Josie said in a whisper as she held Sara’s hand down between the two of them where no one could see it.

    Sara could understand that feeling, she’d felt more at home in her new body as each day pasted, but then she did have some cool super powers to help her feel safe. Sara knew that for Jo it must be a big change going from being a protective male to a helpless little girl as he use to think Sara and the other two were. There were some other people on the bus so Sara didn’t say anymore about them all once being boys, so instead she started pointing out some of the shops she wanted to visit, and also some of the things she’d like to buy now she had some more money to spend. Most of last Sundays shopping trip had been window shopping and just trying stuff on, but the three girls had had a fun time doing it. Now it was going to be the four girls having a fun Sunday out shopping and buying this time.

    Once the bus got to town the girls were in the first clothes shop looking at the racks of clothes and pulling out items to go and try on. Josie stuck close to Sara and the others to begin with, but soon started seeing things she’d like to see Sara in, and also herself as well.

    Sara smiled when she saw Josie pull her first dress off a rack and hold it up to get a better look at it. “That’s a nice looking dress Josie, but I think it looks a little old for you yet.” Sara pointed out as she looked at the sexy little black cocktail dress Josie was now holding up to herself.

     “I thought every girl should own a little black dress?” Josie asked as she struck a sexy pose while holding the dress up to her body. Josie had remembered the other three sat under the tree one lunch time at school, as they talked about the perfect little black dress they would all like to own.

     “Yes, every woman should own a little black dress, but we’re not women yet honey.” Sara said with a grin as she took the dress back off Josie and put it back on the rack where Josie had gotten it from. “Who were you planning to wear it for anyway?” Sara asked with a grin and a raised eyebrow.

    Josie blushed as she realised that Sara had a point. Who would she wear it for? Would Sara want to go out and eat a nice dinner with Josie wearing such a sexy little black dress? “I’d only wear it for you Sara.” Josie said in a whisper so no one else could hear what she said.

     “That’s sweet baby, but don’t you think people would talk if the two of us went out to eat wearing sexy little dresses like that?” Sara asked as she moved Josie down to the more suitable clothing for girls their age.

     “I’m sorry Sara, but I just can’t help looking at things I’d like to see you in.” Josie pointed out, as she blushed some more thinking she’d made another mistake.

    Sara saw the blush in Josie’s cheeks and realised that this was all new to Josie, and Sara was treating her like she should already know and understand everything about being a girl. “No I’m the one that’s sorry Josie.” Sara said as she turned around and walked back to the rack with the little black dress on it. “Let’s have some fun.” Sara giggled as she pulled the dress off the rack that Josie had been looking at. Then she found one she liked and headed for the changing rooms so the two of them could try them on and see how they looked in them.

    Josie looked scared as Sara walked straight past a woman on the entrance to the changing rooms like they were just two normal teenage girls about to try on some clothes. Josie did look puzzled when the woman handed Sara some other things to take with her. Josie later found out that you had to have three items to enter the changing room. Sara had no idea why that was the case, but it was the same in all the shops she’d been going in since first becoming Sara, and Sandy took her and Sheana out shopping for the first time. Josie thought Sara looked like a seasoned pro at shopping now.

     “Are you sure they don’t mind us just trying stuff on for fun Sara?” Josie asked as Sara pulled up the zip on the back of the black dress Josie had just slipped into.

     “They don’t know that we don’t plan to buy them silly, or they probably would mind.” Sara said in a whisper as she took a quick peek through the curtains to make sure the woman standing guard over the changing room hadn’t just overheard what Josie just said. “And keep your voice down before you get us kicked out the shop.” Sara giggled as she playfully slapped Josie on the arm.

    Josie was soon giggling as well as she looked at herself in the mirror they had in the changing room, or the larger room that led off into all the smaller rooms the customers went to get changed in. Josie had watched as Sara slipped out of the dress she'd left the house in and then slipped into the little black dress she’d picked up when she got the one Josie was now wearing, then they had both gone out into the larger room to get a better look at each other.

     “You look amazing in that dress Sara.” Josie said it, but Sara could tell that it was Jo thinking it.

     “Do you think Jo would find me sexy in it?” Sara asked as she struck a sexy pose with her hip pushed out to one side with her hand on it.

     “I just know that Jo would love to take you out some place fancy for dinner with you wearing that dress.” Josie said with a grin.

     “I know that Simon would love to take you out wearing that dress as well girlfriend.” Sara said with a grin as she looked at Josie now stood next to her as they both stood looking at each other in the wall of mirrors in front of them.

    Josie soon caught on to what Sara was trying to say, and this made her grin even more as she thought about Sara liking her in the little black dress she was now wearing. “Well it’s too bad he’ll never get to take me out in it.” Josie sighed as she turned around and made her way back to the changing room to take the dress off and then put her dress back on. Josie was sad to be taking the dress off, because it felt really nice against her body, but she wasn’t about to blow nearly half her money on a dress that she’d probably never get to wear.

    Once Josie and Sara were back in their own dresses they took the little black numbers back to the rack and then went to find Sheana and Michelle in the section where the clothes were that they wanted to look at and buy. They spent the next couple of hours looking and trying stuff on, some they wanted to come back and buy later in the day, and other stuff they just tried on for a laugh.

    Josie had completely relaxed and got into the swing of picking out stuff she thought looked nice and then she would follow the other three to the changing room to try it on. She was glad when the girls said it was time to go get something to eat because her feet were killing her. She wasn’t use to walking in heels like the other three were by now. Sara led them to a small pizza place and they all picked what they wanted on a pizza before deciding on drinks and then going to a table to wait for the waitress to bring over their drinks and pizza when it was ready.

    They were just talking about some of the things Josie liked when a group of four boys decided to show an interest in them.

     “Hey girls!” One of the boys said trying to look cool in front of his friends.

     “No thanks, we’ve already ordered a pizza.” Sara snapped at the boy, as she made fun of his use of the word ‘hey’.

    The boy looked puzzled for a couple of seconds before he finally got what Sara had meant. “Oh that’s a good one.” The boy chuckled in a dumb, I’m really cool way. “I’ll have to remember that one.” He added with another chuckle.

     “Be careful not to strain yourself, but it would be handy for you to use it when a boy starts bugging you.” Sara said with acid in her voice. She was hoping that being so abrupt with the boy would help him realise him or his friends weren’t welcome at the table, but it didn’t seem to be working.

     “I noticed that there are four of you, and there are four of us.” The boy doing all the talking said as he blanked the fact Sara didn’t like him very much.

     “Wow! Now I am impressed.” Sara said heavy with sarcasm. “You can do some maths.” She added with a growl.

     “I was thinking we could double up.” The boy said, still trying to take no notice of what Sara kept saying.

     “Thinking really isn’t your strong suit is it?” Sara said with a nasty looking smile. “I’ll say this in very simple words that even someone like you can understand. Fuck off we’re not interested.” Sara said as she looked the boy right in the eyes as he’d pulled a chair over and sat down like they were already dating.

    The boy looked ready to try another approach on Sara when a waitress walking past with a tray of cold drinks suddenly tripped and sent the drinks flying all over the four boys, but none of it went on any of them. Sara saw the smirk on Sheana’s face and knew that she’d made the waitress trip.

    Sheana had made one of the boys stick his foot out as the waitress walked past, causing her to stumble as she tried to stop the tray of drinks spilling, but in the end she’d spun around and ended up throwing the drinks all over the four boys who were now dripping wet.

     “What’s going on over here?” A man that looked like he’d been making the pizza’s said as he ran over to the area where the four boys and the waitress were stood, after hearing a lot of out shouting from the soggy looking boys.

     “Your stupid cow of a waitress just threw drinks all over us!” one of the other boys said as he tried to shake off some of the pop he was now covered in.

     “What happened Jane?” The man asked the waitress as she tried to pick up the pieces of broken glass off the floor.

     “One of them tripped me and as I tried to stop myself falling I ended up covering them in the drinks I was taking to that table over there.” The waitress called Jane said with some anger in her voice.

    Sara was probing the boy’s minds as she tried to hear what they were all thinking, and to also see if she could get them in a little more trouble. She found the mind of the one that had tripped the waitress.

     “Is this true, did one of you trip her on purpose?” The man asked looking even angrier now.

     “Yes I tripped her.” The boy that had been forced to stick his foot out said with a little help from Sara, just before he got a look of horror on his face.

    The boy’s friends all looked at him in shock that he’d not only tripped the waitress, but that he had just owned up to it as well. They were all soon making a break for it and running for the door, but a couple of waiters had the exit covered and with the help from the man covered in flour, they were made to pay for the spilt drinks and also buy replacement ones too.

    Sara and the others were all giggling as they watched the manager and the waiters forcibly remove the four boys from the pizza restaurant. The four boys had forgotten all about Sara, Sheana, Michelle and Josie by the time they left the place.

     “What a bunch of jerks.” Michelle said as she watched the four boys run off down the road as they tried to put as much distance between them and the pizza restaurant as they could.

     “Why do I get the feeling you two had something to do with the spilling of the drinks and then the sudden attack of truth telling.” Josie whispered between giggles.

     “How could my sister and I do anything like that?” Sara said in a sweet little innocent voice. “It’s not like we can use magic or anything like that.” Sara added with a grin which told Josie that they had.

     “I’m glad you did what you did Sara, Sheana.” Josie said looking worried. “I was scared we’d end up having to sit and eat with them there for a couple of minutes. Especially when he didn’t seem to take the hint that you didn’t like him very much.” Josie pointed out the way Sara had been talking to the ring leader for the little gang of boys.

     “I thought I was going to have to draw him a diagram just before they took their little shower.” Sara giggled as she thought about them getting covered in the tray of drinks. “That was a nice move sis.” Sara added as she looked at Sheana.

     “I thought I’d better do something before you got mad and threw him out the restaurant.” Sheana said with a grin. “It looked better if they just had an accident. It was a nice touch getting the boy to own up to the tripping up of the waitress.” Sheana added.

    The girls carried on talking about the things they liked and the look they wanted while they served at the new internet cafe. They soon stopped when their pizza arrived. Sara left a good sized tip for the waitress that served them because it happened to be the same one that had all the trouble with the four boys earlier. Then the girls went back to looking at the other clothes shops and they started to buy things now time was getting on.

    Josie looked dead on her feet by the end of the day, and Michelle wasn’t looking much better. “Can we please go home now?” Josie pleaded with Sara as they walked out another shop with yet more bags of stuff. “I don’t think I can carry any more bags.” Josie added as she tried to lift her arms up, but she just didn’t have the strength.

     “They’re just a couple more shops I want to have a second look in before we head home.” Sara said jokingly.

     “A second look?” Josie asked. “We’ve been in every clothes shop at least four times today already.” She whined.

     “I was just teasing you Josie.” Sara giggled when she saw the look on her face. “Yes we can head home now.” Sara added.

     “I think it would be easier to get a taxi with all this lot.” Michelle said as she looked at the others all carrying several bags in each hand.

     “That sounds like a great idea Michelle.” Sara said as she started off down the road towards the local taxi rank.

    The girls were soon sat in the back of a taxi being driven back to Sara and Sheana’s house so they could start the fashion show part of the day. Josie had no idea about this little bit though. Sara wanted it to be a surprise.

*****

    Josie had just dropped all the bags she’d been carrying on the floor in Sara’s bedroom and fell on the bed when they got back to her house.

     “Why do girls call that fun?” Josie asked with a mumble, due to her head being part buried in the bed covers.

     “Because we now get to try everything on, and do a fashion show.” Sara said sounding all bubbly about it as she squealed and clapped her hands together.

     “Knock yourselves out, I’ll just lie here and fall asleep.” Josie groaned as she closed her eyes.

     “Oh no you don’t young lady!” Sara said as she pulled Josie up to a sitting passion on the bed like she was a stuffed toy that weighted next to nothing. “This is all part of the weekend that you signed up for.” Sara pointed out.

     “We never did this last weekend.” Josie scowled.

     “Sheana and I did, but I wasn’t about to let Jo sit in my room while we got changed.” Sara looked shocked that Jo, even as Josie could think such a thing.

     “Well I’m still Jo inside all this girl disguise.” Josie pointed out hoping to get away with not having to do a fashion show with the other three. Sadly she wasn’t going to be that lucky though.

     “Yes you are, but you will still look cute in all these wonderful things you brought, so strip and get started with the show baby!” Sara said as she pulled Josie to her feet and walked her over to the bags of clothes she now owned. “Still think women are the weaker sex?” Sara asked with a smug grin.

     “No I don’t, and I also appreciate all the effort girls take to keep looking so beautiful.” Josie said in some hope that Sara would just let her lie on the bed and rest.

     “That’s so sweet of you to say so baby, but we still want a fashion show from you.” Sara said as she gave Josie a hug before she turned her to face the sea of shopping bags. “Now get a move on.” Sara added as she started to help Josie get undressed before Sara set to work getting herself undressed so she could try some of her new things on as well.

    Josie was reluctant at first, but she was soon dancing around and doing some cheesy walk up and down Sara’s room with one of the others as they showed off the item of clothing they’d brought. Josie ended her fashion show wearing the only pair of trousers Sara let her buy all day. Even though the trousers were actually a pair of black wet look leggings that Sara had told her to buy after Josie had picked up a vest style t-shirt dress in black. Sara had also let Josie borrow a pair of suede boots to finish off the look.

     “I love the feel of these leggings.” Josie said as she ran her hands over the slick shiny material as she sat on the bed next to Sara watching Michelle and Sheana modelling their final two skirt and top combos. “It feels like there hugging the whole of my lower body.” Josie added in a dreamy voice.

     “They do feel wonderful to wear don’t they?” Sara said with a grin as she sat watching Josie stroking her legs. “Do you think Jo will ever wear female clothes?” Sara asked when she got bored of watching Josie stroking herself.

     “No I don’t think so.” Josie said as she screwed her nose up and shook her head from side to side. “Jo would just look silly in female clothes, but I’m beginning to think Josie will like looking pretty.” Josie added with a grin.

     “And feeling pretty as well.” Sara pointed out as she looked down at Josie still stroking her hand up and down her black shiny leg.

     “Sorry, but I’ve never felt feeling like this while wearing clothes before.” Josie blushed as she moved her hands away from the leggings that now encased her legs from ankle to waist. “I think you look really cute and very piratey in your outfit.” Josie commented as she looked at Sara sat on the bed next to her in a pair of normal black leggings with a loose fitting white button up shirt with big baggy sleeves and a black leather belt with a big gold buckle at the front. To finish off the pirate look, Sara was wearing a pair of long over the knee black leather boots that had a loose collar that made them flare out slightly at the top.

     “Thanks Josie. I call it my Pirates of the Caribbean look.” Sara giggled.

     “You can rape and pillage me anytime you want captain.” Josie giggled.

     “A female lesbian pirate. I can’t see Disney ever making a film about that.” Sara said with a giggle after giving it some thought.

     “I’d pay to see it, but only if you had the leading role, and I was the lover in it.” Josie giggled some more as she rested her head on Sara’s shoulder while they watched Sheana and Michelle finish their last walk up and down the bedroom.

    Sheana was wearing a denim skirt and orange t-shirt with matching orange leggings on underneath, while Michelle was wearing a pink t-shirt with white denim skirt with matching pink leggings on. Both girls were also wearing white sandals.

     “I guess we should see about letting Jo come back so you can see about getting home.” Sara said with a pout as she looked at the time.

     “Can I please just stay as Josie for a little longer please?” Josie asked as she covered her hand with the ring on it. “I just want to feel these amazing clothes and feelings for a little longer.” Josie added with a pleading in her voice.

     “I don’t mind Josie, but remember that it takes an hour for the spell to wear off and for you to become Jo again.” Sara pointed out.

     “I know that Sara, but I just want to be with you like this for a little longer.” Josie said as she started stroking her own leg again. She soon stopped when Sara started stroking the other one with one hand while stroking one of Josie’s nipples with the other. “MMM that feels nice.” Josie purred as she fell back on the bed with her eyes closed.

    Sara lay next to Josie for ten minutes before she got up and changed into something a little more practical before going to see if it would be okay for Josie and Michelle to stop for dinner. Sandy and Prue had already worked Josie and Michelle into the number they would be catering for, so Sara skipped back up stairs to let the two of them know they were stopping for dinner.

    Josie looked a little over dressed for dinner, but Sara couldn’t see the point of making her change when she’d have to take it all off anyway once dinner was out the way and it was time for Jo to return, so they all got their hands washed and then went down to eat dinner and tell the others about the fun day they had.

    Sara told the story of the four boys in the pizza place being a pain until one of them tripped a waitress and then got soaked in the process. Sara wasn’t going to say that it was Sheana that made the boy trip the waitress, but Karen could almost read it on her and Sheana’s face, so they told the whole story.

    Karen told them off for doing what they did, but she did seem to giggle at the story, so Sara and Sheana didn’t think she was really upset with them over it all. Josie got grilled by them all about her first time out shopping as a girl and what she thought about it.

     “I had a lot of fun, but I never realised just how much work us girls have to put into looking so good all the time.” Josie said between mouth full’s of food, which she was now taking much smaller bits of at a time. Josie was also being doubly careful not to get any on her new clothes. Jo never would have been this careful, but as Josie she cared about her beautiful new things.

     “Do you still think women are the weaker sex then Josie?” Karen asked, but looked like she already knew the answer before Josie said a word.

     “No I don’t Karen. I think women are the stronger sex for all the cra... Stuff they have to put up with day to day.” Josie said as she had to remember who she was talking to.

     “Do you think you’ll be able to cope as Josie while working at the internet cafe when it opens then?” Karen asked blanking the almost slip Josie had just made.

     “I hope so. I know I still have lots to learn, but I also know that Sara, Michelle and Sheana will help me do the best job I can.” Josie looked at her three friends with pride as she said it.

    The girls told the others about some of the things they tried on and even the little black dresses that Sara and Josie got to try on in one of the more expensive shops on the high street. Dinner was over to soon for Josie’s liking and she was soon back in Sara’s bedroom getting undressed and then slipping on the bathrobe so Sara could slip the ring off and then let Jo return.

    Josie sat on the bed feeling a little sad as she watched Sara slip the ring off her finger. They sat and talked about school and what they would spend some of their wages on once they started work at the cafe. It was dead on one hour later that Josie started to feel funny as her chest started to shrink and she felt herself getting taller, then she felt something happening between her legs and Jo started to make his return felt down there as well.

     “This feels really weird.” Josie said just before she doubled over in a little pain from her hips reshaping to those of Jo’s.

     “Jo! Are you alright?” Sara asked with worry in her voice as she sat on the bed next to a half Josie, Half Jo. Sara looked into the face of Josie and watched as the hair shrank back into the head and changed back to Jo’s natural colour, and the face changed back to the boy she loved.

    Jo didn’t notice the last of the changes because Sara was kissing him like mad by this point. Jo felt a little glad that Sara had missed him being around enough to smother him in kisses like this. “I take this to mean you missed me being around just a little bit then?” Jo asked with a grin when Sara let him up for air.

     “Yes I did, but I still want to spend lots of time getting to know my new girlfriend still.” Sara pouted as she laid her head on Jo’s chest and let out a contented sigh.

     “I’m glad to hear it, because I just spent two hundred pounds on new clothes for her.” Jo chuckled.

     “You better see about getting dressed before my mum comes in and sees you lying on my bed wearing nothing but a bathrobe.” Sara said as she got up off the bed and helped Jo to his feet, so he could grab his school bag and put on the change of clothes he’d brought with him.

    Jo thought his boy clothes were rough and scratchy now after spending all weekend wearing the underwear and clothes Sara and Sheana got to wear all the time now and Michelle when she wasn’t pretending to be Mike. Jo was also finding it strange being back in his male body as well, he’d got use to having a larger chest just like Michelle had said he would, and he also missed the feelings he had as Josie.

     “You okay Jo? You look sad about something.” Sara asked once Jo was dressed again and ready to go home.

     “I had a fun weekend being close to you in a new way Sara. It also feels a little strange not having the breasts and ass I had before.” Jo said as he put a hand on his chest and the other on his backside, or where Josie’s backside use to be.

     “I’m sure you’ll feel like your old self in an hour or so.” Sara said as she stepped closer and wrapped her arms around Jo’s neck so she could reach up on tiptoe and give him a kiss.

     “I’m not sure I’ll ever feel right when I’m not with you Sara.” Jo smiled down at her when they stopped kissing. “But I better walk Michelle home and then go home and face my mother’s wrath.” Jo frowned. “I still can’t believe that you dropped me in it with her.” He added with a whine in his voice.

     “I’m sure she’ll forget all about you not spending as much time with me as you should once you give her that letter to sign and return to the headmaster.” Sara said as she reminded Jo about his detention all next week.

     “Crap! I’d forgotten all about that until now.” Jo said as he suddenly remembered all the trouble he got in after he started wandering round the school acting like some macho guy. “I was acting like a real jerk on Friday wasn’t I?” He asked.

     “Yes you were, but Josie more than made up for it, and she also showed me that you do have a more gentle caring side that you need to show me a little more often.” Sara said with a sigh as she wrapped her arms around Jo’s waist and rested her head on his chest as he wrapped his arms around her shoulders and kissed her on the top of her head.

     “I’m going to blink the two of you to Mike’s house, so no one will see you leave here and work anything out.” Sheana said as she stood in an open clear spot of the bedroom floor with her other arm out for Jo to take her hand, while Michelle had the other one.

     “That’s a good idea sis.” Sara said just before she gave Jo one more kiss before letting him join Sheana and Michelle. Sara stood and watched the three of them vanish. She let out a sad sigh and then took one last look around her room to make sure everything was in order, and then she made her way down stairs to let her mother know that Jo and Michelle had left with Sheana.

    Sara found her mum, and the others all sat watching some quiz program on the telly, so she took a seat on the empty sofa and was soon joined by Jenna as she jumped up on Sara’s knee and cuddled into her.

     “I miss spending times wiff you Sara.” Jenna said with a pout in her voice.

    I’m sorry Jen bear, but you have me all to yourself now.” Sara said as she pulled the little girl into a tighter hug with her. “Sheana’s just blinked Jo and Michelle to her house. She thought it better to keep the coming and going to a minimum. She should be back soon.” Sara explained the reason for the way Sheana took them to Michelle’s house.

     “That’s good dear, because we need her to blink us over to Hypatia’s when she gets back.” Karen said.

     “What for mum?” Sara asked looking worried.

     “No need to look so worried sweetie, Samantha got to thinking about a disguise for Sheana after we left yesterday, and she has one already sorted out.” Her mum said with a grin.

     “Why do I get the idea that Sheana may not like the disguise Samantha has sorted for her?” Sara asked still looking worried, but for how Sheana would react to the costume Samantha had for her this time.

     “I’m sure Sheana will be just fine with it dear.” Mum waved off Sara’s worry. “Samantha said it was a black version of what she designs and made for you, but it’s not made from Dragon skin, just plain old black leather instead.” Karen explained.

     “I’m sure Sheana will be thrilled to hear that.” Sara said still looking worried.

     “I’ll be thrilled to hear what?” Sheana said from the doorway as she entered the room.

     “Did you get Jo and Michelle back to her house okay sis?” Sara asked as she tried to step around the question Sheana had just asked. Sara was hoping it would be someone else that got to explain the new look she’d have when going on missions with her for Hypatia.

     “I got them home just fine sis, now tell me what I’m going to be so thrilled to find out?” Sheana asked with a frown as she realised that Sara was keeping something from her.

     “Mum’s been speaking to Samantha and she has a disguise for you to wear already.” Sara said with a weak smile. “She wants you to blink us over to Hypatia’s place so she can get you fitted for it.” Sara added.

     “Oh, is that all?” Sheana asked looking more relieved now she knew it wasn’t something bad that had happened. “Shall we go now then?” Sheana said as she held out her arms for Sara and Karen to take hold of.

     “You promise that I have you for rest of night.” Jenna pouted as Sara got up off the sofa still holding the little girl as she walked over and placed her in Sandy’s lap.

     “I know I did Jen bear, but I didn’t know about needing to do this when I said that to you.” Sara said with a sad look. “I’ll make it up to you at some point.” Sara said as she leaned down and gave Jenna a hug. Jenna hugged her back and was smiling when Sara stepped over and took hold of Sheana’s right hand while Karen took hold of the left one.

     “Will you be able to blink us into Hypatia’s house without any trouble Sheana?” Karen asked as she remembered the magic shield Hypatia had surrounding her home. Hypatia had told Karen to call and let them know when they were ready to enter the grounds, but Sheana wasn’t hanging around.

     “Yes, the shield is a powerful one, but I can still get us in through it.” Sheana said a second before she blinked them all into Hypatia’s home where all hell suddenly broke loose as an alarm went off and four stone figures came marching towards them in the training room where Sheana had blinked them.

    Sara reacted on instinct as she let go of Sheana and let her new slayer armour release and cover her, then she acted as a wall between the four stone figures and her mum and sister. One of the figures went straight for Sara and was soon stepping back missing an arm as Sara used it to take a head of a second stone figure. A third figure was just about to get itself smashed to pieces when a booming voice halted the attack.

     “Stand down!” Hypatia’s voice said from the doorway as she entered the room with Samantha running in just behind her. Hypatia was trying not to giggle as she saw Sara stood in her slayer armour holding an arm of one of her stone guards in her hand “Now you’re just showing off my dear.” Hypatia said with a smirk. “Beating my men to death with their own body parts?” She asked with a pout.

     “Sorry Hypatia, but they started it.” Sara said in her slayer voice as she pointed at the stone figures with the severed limb, all the stone figures were stood waiting for new orders from their mistress.

     “You could have let me know you were coming before you appeared in the training room like you did.” Hypatia pointed out as she waved the stone guards off.

    The stone figure Sara had ripped the arm from stepped over and dropped to one knee as he held out his remaining arm to ask for his other one back.

     “Sorry about that.” Sara said as she handed the soldier his arm back. She stood and watched as he placed it back up to his shoulder and it suddenly became part of him again. Sara watched him make a fist a couple of times to make sure it worked okay before he bowed at Sara and then went to join the other three after he retrieved the head Sara had removed. The stone soldier placed the head back on the headless figure and then waited for the figure to make sure it was back on correctly before he also bowed at Sara before the four of them turned and left the room to resume their normal posts around the outside of the house.

     “Follow me and I will show Sheana where she can blink to the next time you arrive that way.” Hypatia said as she led the three of them out the training room into the main hallway that led to the front doors to the mansion. “If you blink to this spot my dear, the guards won’t attack you like they tried to do just now.” Hypatia pointed to a large star shaped design in the marble floor in the large hallway just inside the front doors.

     “I said we should have called before we arrived.” Karen pointed out looking flustered still after nearly being attacked by the stone soldiers in the training room. “I’m sorry for the way we just dropped in on you Hypatia.” Karen added as she looked at Sara and Sheana with some anger in her eyes.

     “Please don’t worry about it Karen, but it could have been worse if Sara hadn’t got the upper hand on my guards before they got to you or Sheana.” Hypatia said as she looked at Sara. “Not everyone can do what you do Sara, Sheana. Please try and remember to think out a foolish plan like blinking into a magic defended house like this in future.” Hypatia scolded the two girls.

     “I’m sorry Hypatia, but I never gave any thought to you having stone guards close to the house.” Sheana said with a bowed head. “I was just thinking about the magic shield you have, and how I was able to get through it.” Sheana added.

     “No harm done this time Sheana, but rushing into things like that will get you both in trouble one of these days if you don’t start and plan these things out first.” Hypatia said as she led the three of them down to Samantha’s lab where they had been working on the disguise for Sheana.

    Samantha had already run off to add the finishing touches to the disguise while Hypatia showed the girls and Karen where to blink into next time. Samantha was just wrapping a black corset around the waist of the same mannequin that had had the red catsuit and corset on the day before, but now it was a black catsuit and corset, and also a black wig and half face mask to hide Sheana’s face. The corset and catsuit had little crystals added to it in a form of pattern.

     “Are those real crystals?” Sheana asked as she walked over to the mannequin and took a closer look at all the fine detail the small pieces of crystal made up.

     “Yes they are all real crystals Sheana, so it should give you quite a power boost once you have it on.” Samantha said with a grin.

     “What difference do the crystals make to your power sis?” Sara asked with a puzzled look.

     “A novice witch or person with very little magical power can boost it by using a special crystal.” Sheana explained. “Samantha and Hypatia have used those crystals in the design of this disguise, so I will have much more power at my command when I’m wearing it.” Sheana added with a grin as she walked around it while letting her hand brush against it.

     “Does that mean you don’t mind wearing it then sis?” Sara asked with a little shock in her voice. She thought Sheana would flip out and argue, but she looked eager to try the catsuit on and see just how much more power she had while wearing it.

     “It does look a little extreme Sara, but look at yourself right now.” Sheana said as she pointed at her sister still clad in her red slayer armour with red hair and dark sunglasses. “I need to do this if I want to help you defend this world from evil and fools that keep trying to get themselves killed on foolish missions.” Sheana added as she started to remove her clothes.

     “You’ll need to remove everything sis.” Sara pointed out as she turned around to show Sheana the fact that she had no tell tale panty lines showing

     “Oh I see.” Sheana said as she looked at them all until they understood that she wanted them to turn their backs so she could slip out of all her clothes and then put on the catsuit that Samantha had started to remove from the mannequin when she saw Sheana start to get undressed. “You can all look again now.” Sheana said once she was in the catsuit and had it zipped up at the front fully.

     “How does it feel Sheana?” Samantha asked with a grin as she looked at Sheana pulling power to her hands and making them glow a bright blue. “Put these on and feel the full extent of your power.” Samantha added as she handed Sheana a pair of black leather gloves that also had crystals added to them in the same design that was on the catsuit and corset which Samantha was now holding so she could wrap it around Sheana’s waist.

    Sheana slipped on the gloves while Samantha set to work on the corset. Sheana was soon taking shallow breaths while she got use to the tight lacing of the corset. It wasn’t laced that tight, but it felt like it to start with. Samantha helped Sheana perch on the edge of a stool so she could but a pair of black boots on Sheana’s feet, but they didn’t have a very large heel on them, so Sheana had no trouble walking on them.

     “How does it feel sis?” Sara asked with a grin when she saw that Sheana was beginning to look more and more like a black version of her red slayer. “You look very cool in that catsuit and corset.” Sara added with an even bigger grin.

     “I don’t feel very cool sis, it’s quite warm to tell you the truth.” Sheana pointed out as she felt the heat building in the cat suit already. Sheana had a sudden thought and raised her hand making it glow which soon made all the other crystals glow all over the suit, corset and gloves.

     “What did you just do sis?” Sara asked when she saw the relaxed smile Sheana now had on her face.

     “I just used some magic to keep the suit cool while I wear it.”Sheana said in a matter of fact way.

     “Come and take a seat over here Sheana, and I will set to work making you look different using makeup and this wig as well as this mask to help hide your face.

    Sheana took the seat Samantha offered her and then relaxed as much as she could in the tight corset. Samantha set to work and was soon adding the wig and then the mask before stepping back and letting Sheana stand up to show the others the final look.

     “Wow! You look totally different sis.” Sara said with a grin as she walked over and then led Sheana over to take a look at the finished result in the same mirrors that Samantha had taken Sara over to the day before when she did the makeover on her.

     “Is that really me?” Sheana asked as she raised her hand and the black haired woman in the black corset and cat suit did the same.

     “Yep, that’s the all new super witch you sis.” Sara giggled as she looked at herself dressed all in red with the red hair, sunglasses and killer high heels.

     “I just need to add this final piece sweetie.” Samantha said as she put a choker around Sheana’s neck.

     “What does this...? What have you done to my voice?” Sheana asked, but it sounded nothing like her voice anymore. “I sound so grown up.” Sheana added slowly so she could take in the sound of her new voice fully as she spoke.

    Sheana looked at the choker and saw that it had a very stylised looking ‘W’ a little like the ‘S’ that Sara had on her slayer armour.

     “You both look very grown up.” Karen said as she stood with Hypatia and Samantha.

     “Do we look anything like Sara and Sheana though still?” Sara asked in her red armour and red hair as she stood next to Sheana in her black armour and black hair and mask.

     “I’ve never seen two people look more different in all my life.” Karen said as she looked for any sign of Sara or Sheana showing through, but all she saw was a red headed slayer and a black clad witch.

     “You just need to make the armour revert to a locket or something like that when you don’t need it.” Samantha said with pride for the way she’d made the two girls look like grown women.

    Sheana touched a finger to her choker while holding out the other one towards her clothed that were draped over the back of a chair. The black armour melted away as the clothes formed on Sheana’s body to leave her dressed just like she was before she removed a single piece of clothing.

     “I think you’re both ready for anything the MIB’s have to throw at you, as well as anything that may crop up on the supernatural side as well.” Hypatia said with a smile.

    Sara changed back to her normal clothes just like Sheana had done. Sheana touched a finger to Sara’s locket just before touching her own, Sara looked puzzled for a second, but nothing seemed to happen.

     “What did you just do sis?” Sara asked.

     “She just made your locked vanish.” Karen said. “Did you not notice that?” Karen asked.

     “My locket is right here.” Sara said as she looked down and then took hold of the locket she could still plainly see hanging around her neck.

     “No one but you and I can now see them Sara.” Sheana smiled. “Now no one will try to remove them, not that they could even if they wanted to and could see them. I’ve added a spell so only we can ever remove them.” Sheana added.

     “That’s a very smart move sis.” Sara said with a grin and she let the locket fall back to rest between her breasts.

     “Yes it is a very wise move Sheana.” Hypatia said with a smile. “Now we will let you get back home, so you two girls can get a good night’s sleep ready for school tomorrow.” Hypatia added in a firm motherly way.

     “Can we just thank you for the money you gave us all before we leave?” Sara said as she stepped over to Hypatia and gave her a hug. “Thank you so much, we all had a wonderful time, and brought some very pretty clothes with it.” Sara added as she hugged her.

     “Yes, thank you so very much Hypatia.” Sheana said when she gave her a hug once Sara stopped.

     “You are most welcome my dears.” Hypatia giggled when she finished hugging Sheana. “I trust you took good care of Josie while you were out shopping?”

     “Yes she had a wonderful time, and brought some very nice things to wear at her new job when we finally start.” Sara informed Hypatia and Samantha.

     “I’m pleased to hear it Sara, now I want you both to come ready for a good day of training next Saturday, as it will be the last one before the cafe opens and we will have to pick a couple of evenings in the week to train.” Hypatia told the two girls.

     “You want me to start training with you as well?” Sheana asked looking worried. “I’m not much of a fighter.” She warned.

     “All the more reason for you to start training with us then Sheana.” Hypatia said. “You can’t just rely on your magic alone.” Hypatia added with a frown. “Now be gone and let me go back to teaching my servant the correct way to tie someone up and punish them.” Hypatia was smirking, and Samantha looked excited, so they weren’t worried for her well being.

    Sara and Sheana gave Hypatia and Samantha another hug, and then they left to return home, but not before Hypatia promised to work with Sara to get her mind link focused more, so she didn’t try to kill her the next time she came knocking on her mind looking for help.

    Prue and Sandy were sat on the sofa with a fast asleep Jenna lying across both their laps when Sheana blinked them all back to the living room at home.

     “She wouldn’t let me put her to bed until the two of you got back.” Prue said as she looked down at her sleeping sister.

     “I’m sorry for not spending much time with her this past week or so Prue.” Sara whispered as she knelt down to look at the sleeping little girl. “Sheana and I are heading up to bed now, so we’ll take her up with us.” Sara added as she lifted Jenna up into her arms. Jenna opened her eyes long enough to see that it was Sara holding her, then she curled up in Sara’s arms again and went back to sleep with a smile on her face.

    Sara and Sheana put Jenna in the bed when they got up to their room, then they both got ready for bed and got in on either side of the sleeping little girl. They were all soon asleep and dreaming.

 

To Be Continued Next Tuesday  

 

Story by SaraUK

 

Edited and Posted by SamanthaK

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No action really, just a sweet chapter

Glad the girls are getting as much an edge as they can get. My only suggestion is that they should always have a plan B. In the case of Sheana, she needs to learn physical self-defense of course. Sara, powerful as she is, should still have some kind of plan B and C. Maybe some kind of holdout or something in a magical form or another, maybe some kind of magical item ( eg a blade. ) Plan C would be some kind of emergency escape magic if things go pear shaped and Sheana is not there or if Sheana gets hurt.

A bit of cross-training or crossover skills are never remiss, I say. Oh and some kind of ranged weapon and melee weapon training would be good too. I mean, Sara's opponents may not always be within arm's reach and like it or not, it is a needed skill, especially being able to fight with a hand weapon even if it is merely a quarterstaff.

Kim

Will She Ever Learn?

Maybe it's just because I have a low threshold for bullying, but I'm really disappointed that Karen didn't discipline Sheana for the incident at the pizza place. We've already established that they're not supposed to do magic "just because they can", and there was no threat there -- at least not yet -- that required anything more than a straightforward reply of "go away", or at most a verbal assist from the waitress. (Further, the immediate victim wasn't even the one making the verbal advances, and making him confess to something he had no intention of doing strikes me as a really chilling use of mental powers.)

The whole incident certainly isn't out of character for Sara and Sheana -- look at what happened to Michelle -- but there's the whole "with great power comes great responsibility" thing. It's a lesson they can only learn voluntarily, but if something like this is dismissed as fair game, they'll never learn it. I don't expect them to behave maturely -- they're kids, and they're under a lot of pressure -- but they at least have to be told when they're not.

Yeah, you told me last time that I'm taking this story too seriously. But this spoiled my enjoyment of an otherwise solid chapter.

One other point: I thought it was established some ways back that Sheana is the most powerful witch currently in existence. So in what way are the crystals augmenting her power, and is it really a good idea?

Eric

Yes, they have to learn restraint

... and a bit more diplomacy would not have hurt either. Sara could have been frank initially and say that this is a girls day out and they are not looking for boys. If they are that rude, complain to the manager/owner and if they still don't get it then, yes, go to defcon 3 where Sara basically baldly tells them to buzz off. Still, the boys turned out to be clueless anyway. Another more subtle way was to ask they boys what do they want from them and boys being boys and neanderthals that they are, when Sara influences them to tell the truth, they will just blurt out we want to f*** you girls or something like that and the embarrassment factor would drive them away.

It is really up to Karen to point out these alternatives and groom their social skills and yes provide suitable warnings to future misuse of their unique powers. Granted they prank was minor but still ....

Kim

I'm sorry that you both feel my story telling is so floored

I'm very sorry that my story has offended you both so much, and you think that Sara and Sheana were just bullying the four boys. That was not the way I inteneded to write that part of the story at all.

I am also very sorry for the continued floors in the story that Eric keeps finding. I thought I was doing an okay job of explaining myself as I wrote the story, but I guess I haven't. As I don't know any other way of writing, i can't see what else I can do.

I know I'm far from being one of the better writiers here at top shelf, but I just wanted to have some fun sharing my work with others, but It looks like I'm just making a fool of my self and wasting everyone's time.

SaraUK

Doing fine, SaraUK

Those that can write, do. Those that can't, bitch. I'm enjoying the story, keep up the good work! Given the presence of magic, what happened at the pizza place is entirely consistent. So is Mom's reaction.

Karen J.

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I contend that for a nation to try to tax itself into prosperity is like a man standing in a bucket and trying to lift himself up by the handle. - Winston Churchill


"Life is not measured by the breaths you take, but by the moments that take your breath away.”
George Carlin

Flawed?

(I had planned to edit down my previous comment when I woke up five or so hours later but I ran into the "dark day" and then discovered, reading it in "restricted mode", that it had already been commented on, so I was too late.)

I guess I wasn't clear enough -- sorry. This comment has nothing to do with my objections to your "reset" last time; you explained why you wanted to get there and that I was taking the story too seriously. I accept that and won't bother you on that sort of basic plot level again.

As I said, Sheana and Sara have been established as having an inclination toward magical "solutions" to real-world annoyances or problems, and this incident is quite consistent with that. Your editor's comment below, that none of them have been girls long enough to recognize the difference between repartee (such as it was) and an attack, is definitely valid and clearly something I didn't sufficiently take into account. I apologize for that, and for seeing it as bullying. (All I can say in my defense is what I pointed out there -- I have a low threshold for that sort of thing.)

But Karen has been established as the adult with the ability to tell them when they've gone too far. On the one hand, I feel that she should have at least picked up the fact that the person they focused on in their counterattack hadn't done anything to them except stand there and watch their spokesman make a fool of himself. On the other, she should have explained that social conventions expect that boys will approach girls and that they'll probably persist until they're given a firm "no", not just conversational putdowns. I do feel that you should have kept that in mind for Karen as you were writing.

But I realize that I'm probably taking something too seriously that you intended as comic relief. I guess it's my nature.

As for the rest, I don't expect you to take away powers after you grant them, but I did want to warn you -- perhaps I should have done so privately -- that while the confession power was a great idea, making a victim do something involuntarily and then have to "confess" to it is a major nightmare. (For me, anyway.) And when we add that to our heroines' imperfect recognition of threats and situations -- something that in itself is a good idea -- you have a potentially explosive situation, something that can do a lot more damage than spilling a drink. I hope you'll back off from that capability in the future, since it's a direction that I'd prefer the story not travel. But it's not my call, of course.

And the thing about enhancing Sheana's powers was a serious question, not a complaint. If she's already the strongest witch around, I'm not clear as to what can be improved upon. The inability to negate her own spell on Michelle seemed to be an inherent property of her magic, not something that could be solved by giving her more power. Your editor suggests that it's the powers of evil that she needs more strength against. Fair enough.

I really don't go into this with an intent to get confrontational, or to disparage your writing. Please feel free to have the admins erase me in the future if I you think I go too far.

Thanks, Eric

@Eric & kimmie

You have both accused SaraUK of making Sara & Sheana bullies but I think you need a recap of things that have happened earlier in the story.

Sara starts out as a VERY unhappy boy that was likely serverely bullied at his old school (although this isn't actually stated it is implied).
Sheana started her life being tricked/bullied into becoming a female Genie.

Thus they have both been bullied before. Now as I Proofed/edited this chapter I didn't see that the girls did anything wrong.
Did they do it in the wrong way? Possibly but don't forget that they had Josie with them, She had only been a girl 2 days, if those boys had actually managed to get closer what do you think she'd been likely to do??? (other than completely freak out?)

Now as for the comments on the Crystals, what happened to Sheana when she accidently turned Mike into Michelle? (And don't forget it was an accident!) Yep thats right it very nearly killed her. So she may well be the most powerful witch in the world but even her power has limits, What happens if she reaches those limits against the forces of darkness (or the MIBs)and Sara needs backup??

Perhaps this puts a bit of perspective on things?

Huggles
Editor Sammi

Thanks, Sammi...

Please see my comment above. You're quite correct. (I can't speak for Kimmie, of course.)

Eric

Sounds like Jo is more

Sounds like Jo is more hooked on being Josie than anyone thought, I suspect Jo will end up using the ring secretly soon, only to remember only Sara or Karen can remove it.

Really enjoying this story and looking forward to more. Thank you for sharing Sara, please ignore the critisms of others. You ARE a GREAT writer on here so please dont put yourself down.

Personally I think Sara was quite open that the girls were not interested in the boys, the message was clear but that was boy was seriously pressing his luck, better Sheana embarass them than Sara end up punching one.

Loving this story

Lizzie :)

Yule

Bailey's Angel
The Godmother :p

love this story

i really love this story line , it's fun and light hearted , with a semi serious side to it , i keep lookig forwards to the next installment , as with all your other stories Sara i have enjoyed them all please keep up the great work ,

nice going

the Girls support system is coming along nicely. once the cafe is open they will be in good shape for Intel and they are now both in good shape for disguises.
great story, thanks

Great chapter, but the girls

Great chapter, but the girls should learn some diplomacy. If they keep on their attack is the best defense strategy with magic, they might end up in hells kitchen, because sooner or later the MIB will realize what is happening and who is making it happen.
The "I'm a girl so apologize" attitude won't really be a help either. Both Sara and Sheanna have boyfriends and thusly guys will be way less inclined to take shit from them.

There is stuff you have to accept and stuff you shouldn't ever accept. They have that sort of blurred and with magic in the mix...

None the less, great story - I need to read the next chapter :D

Beyogi