A Glass Half-Full (Chapter 9)

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Opps -- dating of story

a minor opps -- talking about Windows 2000 Pro dates the original iteration. Only noticed because of my work/hobby.
I want to "assume" the OS version is not important to the story. Suggest using a phrase "lastest Microsoft OS" or "Linux"

I am enjoying the story very much. I hope you continue posting new chapters.

Thanks
Carla

PS: my apologies to all for being such a "lurker". My Thanks to Erin and et. al. for the great stories
Ca

"May you live in Interesting Times" is a promise, not a threat!

Carbon dating techniques...

I've never really figured out just how one piece of carbon manages to hook up with another. But obviously, with all the carbon floating around bonded with oxygen and all these solid organic materials and all that; the pick-up lines have to be fairly successful. Are there bars for this sort of thing or what...?

-- oh, right... sanity --

The computer stuff does date the piece, true. But there are plenty of political / social references that should indirectly place the story in the early half of this decade. One good example is in this chapter also, when I reference the rabid patriotism that followed the 9/11 attacks. Most parts of the country have long since returned to the American version of normalcy and those of us living in California can see the opposite side of the pendulum swing at its most obvious. While I did not make a conscious effort to label time/place, like I do in my Whateley Academy story; Glass was never meant to be an abstract time and place. If I remember right, someone even tried to use mapquest or something to work out which city it's set in based on vague references and street names. I don't recall whether they found it or not. :)

Still, its a good point to bring up; it does jar the moment (of awe in the quality of equipment in the lab) a bit as is. I'll have to think about it a bit.

Another anachronism

When Dawn goes car shopping in Chapter 2, she is buying a new car, a 2004 New Beetle. Looks as if you could get by on that by simply dropping the year from the car description.

Damaged people are dangerous
They know they can survive

Eek!

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That's it. We're all caught up now. Only new chapters from here on. Ummmm ... more please! Please tell me chapter 10 will be posted soon. Please? :)

That opening scene was cruel. I forgot about it so it got me again, just like you planned. Grrrrr! ;)

I remembered the fake earthquake. That's a cool scene. I really love the action scenes as well as the magic. I also love that Diane won't let her classmates stop her from public displays of affection. *sigh*

Thanks and please keep it comin'.

- Terry

Chapter 10

I have a couple long work days ahead of me (at my paid employment), but yes you can expect chapter 10 shortly. It's done and I just need to edit it to within an inch of its life. Chapter 11 is 'in progress.'

Kristin

OK, Now What?

Wondering if Dawn will gain a new student.
May Your Light Forever Shine

    Stanman
May Your Light Forever Shine

In harms way

The beginning of this was so wicked! You had me on the edge of my seat all primed to fall out of it when the other shoe dropped! I got a good laugh out of it. :) Remembering my days in that 'hive of scum and villainy', going back in a form that is perceived as much more vulnerable would scare me too! Then Diane in no uncertain terms makes it clear to everyone that Dawn was hers. WOW! If that wasn't enough you had to add in Earthquakes. I really enjoyed how Dawn's students pulled together handling the problem saving everyone. This is such a great series!!!! Now you have made my day with your announcement new chapters are on the way!

Big hugs!

grover

A Glass Half-Full

I was an avid fan of this piece of work when it was released at Sapphire's. I always thought that it was too good a piece of fiction to languish the way it did. I therefore was immensely pleased when I saw that it was being re-released here on TopShelf.
The dating references are of course valid for the time period in which it was written and can be easily fixed if the storyline needs to be updated to a more modern setting.

All I can say is it is nice to see this piece of work is active again.

AMPWS

A Glass Half-Full

Outstanding story!. Please tell me that part 10 will be posted soon. Otherwise, I might go into withdraw. :<)

Janice Marie
Guess you can't figure out who you are until you accept who you might be!..... Luke in "Zerophilia" (Director's Cut)

Janice Marie
Guess you can't figure out who you are until you accept who you might be!..... Luke in "Zerophilia" (Director's Cut)

Really fantastic story.

I'm really enjoying the story and looking forward to the next instalments.

Looks like it's been a while since you said it was coming shortly. I hope you are not suffering any illness or similar event.

Work issues, unfortunately.

Work issues, unfortunately. The theatre company I'm working with has been hit pretty hard by the economic situation right now and several staff were let go. Those of us who are still trying to keep things functioning have been doing so with little or no pay (I'm personally about 5-6 weeks behind on being paid, though we did just get a few donations that is 'supposed' to bring that down to about three weeks) and my spare time has been going into 'back up' plans for what to do if the company folds. If I don't have time to finish my editing process on 10 shortly, I may post it anyway. I did want to get the rest of the book up (and I know there's a few people who have been waiting for it a long time and I owe it to them to get it out too).

Hope everything works out!

Soon, too. It would certainly help.

Real life - Always stands in the way of fun.

Faraway

Faraway


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Where you can fool around like you want to and most you get is some bemused good ribbing!

Would you accept donations

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And if you did, how would we do it? Have you considered actually having this story or others published? I'd buy it in a heartbeat. Also, based on this story, I intend to read anything and everything else I can find by you.

Chris

If you need help editing

If you need help with the editing (purely in terms of the spelling and grammar) I am happy to offer it.

I find myself correcting a lot of stories as I read them anyway.

Dial up modems are slightly

Dial up modems are slightly outdated nowadays :) Ah how technology progresses ;)

God thing that the demon ups the pressure. Still somewhat filleristic.

Diane's sisters secret is out and the bullies apologize. Not sure if the latter was necessary, but maybe it was nice.

Anyway, thank you for writing this captivating story,
Beyogi

lets hope

that demon boy wasted a lot of energy on that attack. the sword bit was great, in a time where they freak out over pocket knives...
good chapter, thanks