A Walk in the Dark Chapter 26

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A Walk in the Dark
Chapter 26

by Maggie Finson

 


Culture Clash

I was still muttering things like ‘Stupid family’, and about a brother I didn’t really want to think about too much by the time we reached the approach to Cae’th Og.

Sam and the others were still amused by our encounter with Sir Reginald the Intelligence Challenged as we finally saw the place from the top of a hill.

It wasn’t a cave entrance. Well so much for stereotyping there, I thought while looking down on the very ordinary appearing keep in the distance. Sam pulled his mount close to mine (for some reason my group had been avoiding close proximity with yours truly since the day before) and quietly told me. “We’re being watched.”

“I know.” Shrugging and just in general tired of all the skullduggery and half brothers, and surprise parents, I answered. “They’ve been shadowing us for the past few hours.

“All right!” I shouted out into the area. “We know you’re out there. We’re impressed with your sneaking skills, and all that crap! Now either show yourselves or I’ll personally come drag your butts out into the open!”

“Umm, dear?” Sam looked around at the sudden appearance of at least twenty Dhro’aaa holding nocked bows and pointing them at us. “That may have not been the best introduction you could have used.”

“I’m not in the mood to care right now.” I grumbled back. “If I’m lucky they’ll just kill me and put me out of my misery. Or at least distract me while they try to do that.”

“I have mentioned that you really need to work on your people skills, right?” He asked while sighing and loosening his swords in their sheaths at his back. “Now quit pouting about your family problems and at least try to look pleasant for the nice Dhro’aaa.”

Nice. Dhro’aaa. Now that combination was a real brain burner. Especially since it seemed I was supposed to do something about that reputation the race, mine, had achieved over the past few millennia.

So I did my best to smile pleasantly, not so good on that one, so I settled for a not-so-threatening glower. “I am Dahlia Saaa Llolth and am expected.”

Okay. I know it wasn’t the usual ‘Hi! Glad to meet you.’ kind of thing. Evidently I’m not one of those gushing, good time girls. So what? I wasn’t really in the mood to even attempt to be bubbly and friendly just then.

One of the former watchers, now out in the open lowered his bow and gave me a very thorough looking over. If it hadn’t been for needing to put a hand on Sam’s arm to keep him from attacking the guy for the obviously appreciating a pretty girl thing, I would have probably smacked him myself. He nodded then gave me a formal bow. “We know who you are. I have been instructed to welcome you to Caet’he Og. Be welcome in our home. Offer no harm and none will be offered to you.”

These formalities were beginning to get a little tedious, but I did manage a smile and nod of my own head in response. “My companions and I will offer no harm so long as none is offered to us.”

“Lady.” He looked over the others then made an expansive gesture with one hand in the direction of the keep. “If you and your companions would follow me?”

By then the guy’s troops had formed up around us, so not following him could have involved a lot of really messy stuff. You know the kind of things with lots of blood and screaming? So I nodded, shook my mount’s reins, and did what he requested. Besides, I was supposed to go into the place wasn’t I? “Of course.”

Didn’t mean I had to be nice to him, did it?

* * * *

I was still in a mood when we were ushered through the front gates. But on sober thought, maybe being in a ‘mood’ wasn’t such a bad thing just then. Daddy did you set me up for this one?

Of course he had. Meddling deities were just becoming part and parcel of my life. I couldn’t even really get mad at him for it.

The interior of the keep was about what you’d expect. Obvious outbuildings, stables, housing for the help… Though that housing, even for the so called peasants, was built very solidly with well fitted stones and the roofs were tile instead of thatch.

There was a central tower, of course. (Go ahead and moan about clichés all you like. I did.) But as we approached it, then went around the thing, it became clear that even though it served a defensive purpose, it wasn’t where the ruling family was housed. It was more like a medieval shopping mall that had more than one floor.

Nope, the next thing I noticed once we’d gotten around that was the ornate and lovingly carved crenellations and stout looking gate — of metal, not wood — that snugly sat against the hillside at the rear of the compound.

So they really did live in a cave. For some reason that made me feel a little better about things.

* * * *

The main tunnel leading from those gates was wider than an interstate highway, and very well lit by sconces containing some kind of magical light source. In spite of myself, I had to admit it was impressive. There was also a lot of traffic, coming and going, but all of it stopped dead in our vicinity as we were led down that underground highway.

A song I’d been fond of back home came to mind at that. I did my best to ignore the title of that specific AC/DC song. At least it didn’t feel like I was on a Highway to Hell.

The cavern that led into was stupendous. Not just in size, either. Caet’he Og was a city. And a fairly large one. I could see markets, towers, homes, temples, and right in the center a huge, almost squat edifice that had to be where the local government made its headquarters. Race and place don’t seem to matter with that kind of thing. Government buildings were government buildings no matter with all the other strangeness. And that was obviously where my still unnamed guide was taking us.

“Oh, you have my name, warrior.” I told the guy as I rode up beside him. “I would consider it polite if you were to return the favor.”

“Brac’ea’thimm Saaa Pthoh.” He answered. “Mrrthiss is my sister.”

Oh. Okay, now I could see why he was a little stand offish with me. Dhro’aaa family politics made mine seem simple by comparison.

“Thank you,Brac’ea’thimm Saaa Pthoh.” I answered, evidently surprising him with that courtesy. Hey! I really can be polite if I want to be, you know. “How is your sister?”

“Well enough.” He answered and shook his head. “Better since you healed her.”

“I would have done that a lot sooner if she hadn’t run off the first time.” I answered. Okay, so I was this really nasty and admittedly often bad tempered daughter of a goddess, and a god (and yes, I was past being boggled by things like that), but I could feel bad about some things, right?

“For some reason, I believe you about that.” He answered with a shake of his head. “My sister is headstrong at times.”

“Part of being a girl.” I shrugged.

“I have to agree with you on that one.” He actually let a grin get past that stolid, serious demeanor for a second or two. “Mrrie is often a difficult one to deal with.”

“Friend.” Sam got into the conversation with a smirk. “If you don’t have one yet, just wait till you get a wife.”

Brac — whatever, actually laughed after that one as he looked first at me then at Sam. “I think I can agree with that, friend.”

“Okay.” I whispered to Sam. “Just when did you become that guy’s friend, and when were you going to tell me about it?”

“Figure of speech.” He whispered back, but there was twinkle in his eyes that I thought held way too much mischief.

All that stopped when we dismounted and were led into the council chambers.

Sirrin jumped off my back and growled.

Who knew spiders could growl?

* * * *

The council chambers was almost like a small arena. There were tiers of seats rising from the floor to almost reach the distant ceiling, and if filled I didn’t even want to think about just how many Dhro’aaa would be concentrated in one place.

But there wasn’t anyone in those tiered seats just then. The large table with a double throne at its head that dominated the center of the floor was a different matter entirely though.

I counted thirty Dhro’aaa seated there, not counting the pair sitting on the double throne. All of them with the exception of one were glaring at me as if I was some alien from a hostile species who had just waltzed in and demanded a meeting.

Well, maybe that wasn’t so far from the truth, once I’d thought about it.

“The Lady Dahlia Saaa Llolth!” Someone standing beside the entrance intoned rather loudly and I just about turned and swatted the gal. Instead I gave her, one of the priestesses I’d seen at Kae’song’s a nod and walked forward until I was standing at the near end of that that table.

I nodded to the gathering, even gave the pair on the throne a bow — okay, I bent at the waist just a little bit, but it counts, doesn’t it? “Thank you for agreeing to see me.”

“It would seem that you lack even the common courtesies, girl.” Someone, from about the middle of the table on my right side answered and I could feel the anger in his voice. “Your arrogance is out of place here and you would do well to show a modicum of humility.”

No one else spoke, so I figured that the guy was some kind of designated spokesman for the gathering. The rest of them simply glared, watched me with some kind of detached malice, or openly tried to cook me with their regard. Talk about a hostile audience.

For probably the first time since I’d arrived on this world, other than the first few days when I was still in shock, I did my best to be polite to someone. “Forgive my lack of manners. Where I come from, one does not, as a rule, appear subservient to others if it isn’t absolutely necessary. Apologies for my lack of social polish.”

I could feel Sam, still back by the entrance, goggling at me. Okay, so I wasn’t known for being all that pleasant to arrogant strangers all that much. But, much to my surprise, being polite didn’t hurt at all. Or at least not all that much.

See? I could do it. At times. And sure, I was polite to Kae’song, Lord Kevin, Lady Alis and a few others back at the citadel. But they’d kind of earned that right once I’d gotten over the first shock and fear of them.

This gathering of Dhro’aaa was nowhere near as well disposed towards me as those three and their retainers had been. I suppose I should have been at least a little afraid, and inside I admit that I did feel that niggling little twinge I identified as fear. But showing that in this place, at this time, would have been a bad thing.

So, I pushed that fear back down to somewhere it couldn’t distract me, at least until later once things had calmed down, stood on the shoulders of my anger and jumped up and down until that behaved and sat down quietly, and gave the gathering my best neutral look.

Wow, this being diplomatic thing was not easy.

“You’re claim of being the goddess’ daughter is a bold one.” The same person told me with a little sneer on his inhumanly handsome face. “One that we find offensive.”

“Believe me, it isn’t an idle claim.” I grimaced. “I wasn’t all that happy about it either when I found out, to be honest.”

Sirrin was still beside me, now as big as my idiot half brothers destrier and stalking between me and the table while emitting little growls and snarls. Oh, something stalking for effect on eight legs was actually kind of impressive.

“Curb your pet, or we will do it for you.” The male at the head of the table spoke for the first time and his voice vibrated with strength. The female seated at his side simply glowed with power waiting to be unleashed.

“Sirrin.” I quietly called and the dire spider returned to my side. Petting her to settle the outrage she felt about being called a mere pet, I looked at the pair on the throne and nodded my head in respect. “My lord, my Lady. Thank you for seeing me.”

“You damaged our daughter.” The woman told me in a tone of voice so chill it could have embarrassed a polar wind.

“Yes, but I also cured her.” I responded.

“Physically.” The woman waved that aside. “The damage I speak of is not physical.”

“She seemed to be fine when she left me last.” I countered.

“She believes your claims, that you are the daughter of our goddess.” I could feel the disbelief, the hostility, the doubt, in her as she told me that. “You’re claims are outrageous, and I for one would have proof from you. I would have it now.”

“What kind of proof?” I questioned. “Isn’t what I did with your daughter’s hand enough?”

She stood, and possessed a regal glory that I didn’t think I would ever match even if I wanted to, which I didn’t, and pointed at me. “Show me that you aren’t a lying renegade or die.”

The spell she threw at me at me was so complex, so powerful, that I didn’t even try to figure it out. All I needed to know was that it would have been a really bad thing to let it hit me. So I sidestepped it.

Only that sidestep was kind of weird. I didn’t just step out of the way, or dive to safety. Oh, no. Could I ever do the simple thing? On this world, evidently not. What I did was move to a somewhere else where I could still see and hear things where I had been, but wasn’t particularly affected by the magic thrown at me that time. Something told me that trick would only work once because someone aware that I could do it would be able to counter it after seeing it, but that same something informed me that I had a lot more tricks like that up my sleeve if they were needed. Sheesh.

Sirrin didn’t dodge. Darkness enveloped her, swirled around her and I just about screamed and reached over to protect her.

Didn’t need to. She ate the stuff. Literally.

By the time I slipped back into reality, such as it was, the spell had been consumed and I was looking at over thirty very shocked Dhro’aaa.

“First things first.” I told them. “Sirrin is not my pet. She is my companion and guardian. Oh by the way, she really doesn’t like being attacked either so I wouldn’t advise trying that again. She gets cranky when she’s upset or hungry and right now she is both of those. Second, if any of you try that with me again, I’ll slap you silly just to take my own frustrations out.

“Questions?” I pleasantly asked.

There were. Lots of them. I did my best to answer all of them without losing my temper. At one point I learned what if felt like to move around on eight legs and see things through more than two eyes. Weird, let me tell you.

Oh yeah, I almost bit the Queen of Caet’he Og when I did that one. Sigh.

Bad tempered in one shape, bad tempered in the other, I guess. Well at least that was consistent.

It took the others at the table awhile to get out of the webs too.

Oh wonderful. Another manifestation of something that was considered ‘divine’ by the Dhro’aaa.

But they were all very polite after that.

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Oh, Maybe.

They are a stubborn bunch, though.

Maggie

too much fun

You are obviously having too much fun writing this story. But you are sharing the fun with us, so I must forgive you.

DJ

Kissing up

Can we expect the queen to be doing a lot of kissing up to Dahlia now that her claims are proven and she has been attacked at a meeting where she was promised that there would be no attacks against her or her party.

They are chaotic evil, so

They are chaotic evil, so promises don't mean squit to them. I would have thought that the son promising like that would have bound them all given the magic that happened when Dhalia promised, but who knows...
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Chaotic Evil with a twist

Drow might be Chaotic Evil but their society does have one golden rule: Don't get caught.

It's a foible of the elvish mind to take the idea of might makes right to the next, more sophisticated, level. It's perfectly expected that a Drow will assassinate, cheat, manipulate, steal and otherwise do very unpleasant things to get ahead but it is better to take that to a higher standard and do it in such a way nobody can know for sure if you are guilty.

It makes sense if you look at the ideals of Chaos and Evil from a Darwinian perspective if you have an eye to strengthening your race as a whole.

Don't forget the "Binding Oath"

You may recall that they are bound to honor their oath once given, hence Dahlia's servitude at the beginning of the story. These kinds of oaths are often a geas and once broken can lead to some unfortunate experience(s). I'm looking forward to seeing where we are led to next.

On another note, if Llolth is her mother and Dana An is her father and both are deities, wouldn't that put her in the godling category? Is there any more Deities out there that also put in their two cents worth in her re-creation?

Huggles,

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Huggles,

Winnie
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The Queen?

Dhro'aaa, don't 'kiss up' as a rule, but then again she did get caught pulling somehting that had been promised wouldn't happen.

Maggie

Other forms

Heh heh I knew she'd eventually manafest other Forms. She's got a spider shape. There should also be a half way form as well. A Drider, which is a spider body with the torso of a drow very good for wowing people and now these people are oathbreakers wonder how they broke the oath and what Lolth is gonna do about it.

vladd

Just to mention

Driders are normally a punishment. It's incredibly painful to transform, and they have the intelligence of a beast. I don't think I would want to look/be like that if I were a drow.

BUT, it's not my story or universe. IANTA (I am not the author)
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Depends

Depends on the writer I guess seen alot of artwork of female driders throwing spells and stuff don't seem to be animals in the pictures just look up images of driders, sides she's a potential Goddess she can probably take whatever form she wants

Vladd

Requesting clarification

What I did was move to a somewhere else where I could still see and hear things where I had been, but wasn’t particularly affected by the magic thrown at me that time. Something told me that trick would only work once with someone aware that I could do it, but that same something informed me that I had a lot more tricks like that up my sleeve if they were needed. Sheesh.

Um, well, the passage can be interpreted in several different ways, so:
---The trick would only work if the attacker knows you can do it, and only once per such attacker.
---The trick would work aganist any attacker, but is limited to a single use after they know you can do it.

Which is it? The first is little more than test of heritage and a one-time save aganist a knowing opponent, while the second one is more of a guaranteed safety net aganist a sneak attack - and is more effective this way.

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My brain seemed to automatically parse it as...

'...would only work if someone was unaware I could do it.'

Also, may I suggest that Sir Reginald the Intelligence Challenged' might scan better as 'Sir Reginald the Intellectually Challenged'?

Sorry, that's enough busy bodying for the day.

This is starting to kick up a gear. I imagine she'll be making some powerful enemies in that hall as well as powerful allies.
Lovely stuff as always Maggie, and Thankyou. :-)

How do you do it?

I dont know how? but this just keeps on getting Better!, after this one I am physically giggling!!, THANK YOU!

diplomacy

Is basically the art of not slapping silly someone who desperately deserves it, for your own reasons. I think she managed.

"Treat everyone you meet as though they had a sign on them that said "Fragile, under construction"

dorothycolleen

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A Walk in the Dark Chapter 26

Can't help but see them as having PMS all day, every day.

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Really quite entertaining.

As I have already made boringly clear, I dislike DnD stuff to the point that it makes me absolutely churlish.

However, I really like this story and find it quite entertaining. When people start talking about obeing DnD rules, I just want to, how did you say it? "Smack Em". LOL

Khadijah

I'm happy.

That you're enjoying it.

Maggie

Sorry

I was sort of looking forward to Dahlia calling out to 'mommy' and having another argument in front of them.

What's really bothering me is that none of the priestesses seem to have talked with their goddess to get information. Wouldn't that be the first demand of a ruler? "Talk to Lloth and find out about this abomination."


I'll get a life when it's proven and substantiated to be better than what I'm currently experiencing.

That is what believers in Gods do.

It is a huge problem because believers often want to run off and do their own thing without consulting their God, whether it be LLolth, God, or Allah SWT. LOL

Khadijah

Changes

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Change is pretty much a constant in Dahlia's life and this chapter was no exception. She can add 'skilled magic user' to her list of talents it seems. :-)

Thank you for another enjoyable chapter.



"Life moves pretty fast. If you don't stop and look around once in a while, you could miss it."

I beg to differ a bit

as she seems more a long the lines of an instinctual magic user. She is not wielding magic born of long study and experience, it was a gift from Mommy as it comes to the fore without her volition at times it seems. I suspect as she gets exposed to more situations she can then start using spells more appropriately on a more analytical level.

Kim

Yup.

Things are constantly surprising the poor lady right now. Is it any wonder she's usually so cranky just now?

Maggie

might makes right

It seems to me, after reading a number of chapters, that the Dhro'aaa here are simply bowing to a superior force which appears to be their nature.

There has been nothing I've seen on the part of those who did not place blood oath to make me think otherwise.
The daughter did commune with Lloth even if the Queen did not. The Queen, apparently, has chosen either not to believe her daughter's communication with their deity or, as stated, believed her daughter fell under the sway of a superior magic user.

Her mistake. She, however, did not break blood oath having never taken such as did her daughter. Again, bowing only to superior power in magic.

Probably the only thing that would convince them (the Queen) is the manifestation of their Goddess in their midst confirming her 'daughter's' right to now take these particular Dhro'aaa and do with them as she will.

Anesidora

Shoulda slapped her

Queenie deserved a slap for that attack. I guess a spider web and a little spittle serves the purpose. Great Chapter.

As always,

Dru

As always,

Dru

oaths

well both a princess and a prince of the clan made oaths, one a blood oath, for the clan. By my estimation and diplomatically speaking the whole clan would have to abide by that, but if you go by rank, no one could break those vows but people who had a higher rank than the people making the vow. in other words the chief and the chieftaness or king and queen of the clan or city.One would expect them to abide by the vows but they wouldn't be forced to be. course they would have to lock up the vowers or not let them know what they intended or they would have tried to stop them from breaking thier vow which is probabley why they were'nt there.

It would be interesting if

It would be interesting if Dahlia had some recourse in this - something like the right to claim the two oath-givers as belonging to Dahlia now since their oaths were broken by family, something like that.
Even if it's diplomatic and not some facet of oaths being magically enforced, there has to be some sort of repercussion. Oaths were made by an emissary, and even by proxy Dahlia MUST take payment for the breaking of that oath. Without that, there is no basis for any more discussion! Right behind that, plan B if you will, is the pissing contest and eventually Dahlia would be forced into assuming leadership by force.

I love this story - more please!
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You're not the only one worried

So please let me know if you learn something. ;)

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I'm fine, thanks

Just had to replace my old computer is all. Got that done now so should start cranking them out once I get used to the new machine and system.

Maggie

And what new computer ...

... did you choose? Geek girls wanna know. *grin*

Randa

Ahh yes. The InterNet, i'm hip..

Hmm, feels like I missed some action there, in the last part I mean?
Web? Like WWW-eb?

Ah well, I'm sure there will be a explanation, or action..
A most mighty web you weave Maggie :)