A Walk in the Dark Chapter 15

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A Walk in the Dark
Chapter 15

by Maggie Finson

 

I have a quiet day today. We've done all the big family stuff over the two previous days and are just enjoying a quiet holiday for a change. So I decided to post this one. Like Heather with 300 Rains, I have a lot of chapters already written so thought I'd give this one to all of you today. Oh, thank you all who have commented or PM'd me about this story. Believe it or not I actually do take things that some of you say to put in my stories. Merry Christmas, or Happy Holiday to all of you out there.

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Oh, Shi…

“Fanatic Neutrals.” Kevin actually laughed aloud at that one and the other two joined him for a few moments.

“Neutrals, by definition, are not fanatics, dear lady.” Kae’song finally told me as the puzzled and slightly alarmed look I knew was on my face began to fade. I knew it was because Sam’s face showed the same things I was feeling.

“Fanatics believe so strongly in one thing, one direction,” Alis added with a grin, an actual grin (!), “they fail to see other paths that could be just as useful as the one they have chosen.”

“Yes, we brought you and your — husband — to this world for a reason, Lady Dahlia.” Kevin continued this weird three way explanation. “But not to aim you at one specific thing like a weapon.”

“You guys are nuts, insane if you didn’t get the idea the first time.” I glowered at them.

“We watched both of you, backtracking from your ‘deaths’ on your own world to see what kind of beings you really were, because we could feel, taste, the outrage both of you felt over the way you died there. Not outrage that you died, but that anyone would be subjected to such a thing because of mere greed.” Kae’song ignored my comment, not all that unusual for him, and started explaining again. Honestly, at times I think mages of any kind are just hyped up college professors with something extra. Most of them just love explaining things to people who are willing to listen. “We knew you two were the ones we needed, is all. So we arranged to bring you here when the time came for your souls to migrate.”

“Okay,” I glanced to Sam who appeared to be as full of understanding about that as I was, which between the two of us would have been hard pressed to fill a one ounce shot glass so far, “We have the ‘how it was done’ mostly. So now the real kicker comes up. Why?”

“Your race, lady, the new one you’ve joined,” Alis answered softly, “is dying out, being wiped out of existence faster than they can reproduce.”

“Again with the getting pregnant thing.” I grumbled.

“Not at all, lady.” Kevin told me. “That event is entirely up to you and your husband. No we brought you here to save your new race, to give them a new direction that would stop every other race who encounters them from killing them on sight.”

“What?” I think Sam and I said that at the same time.

“You three are insane.” I shook my head. “I know, just from being what I am, what you made me, I KNOW that the Dhro’aaa delight in causing harm to others. And you expect me and Sam to change them into some force for good?”

“Of course not.” Alis snorted and shook her head. “Evil exists for a reason, just as good does. What we hope you might do is to temper some of the excesses that have led to the Dhro’aaa decline.”

“And just HOW in however many Hells this world has?” I almost shouted. “Do you think we could manage to do that?”

“We have suggestions, lady.” Kevin answered once he got over flinching at my show of anger. “But ultimately that would be up to the two of you.”

“More wine, please.” I held out my cup and gestured with my chin for the servant — who had retreated as far as she could at my show of anger — to get me a refill. I gave her a weary look and just waved her over. “Girl, I’m not going to hurt you, unless you don’t get me and my consort some wine soon, I promise you.”

Why was it that every time I got even a little angry, people tried to make themselves scarce, or as invisible as they could? That was something I’d need to give some thought to since it seemed to be more than simple fear of what I could do physically. But that was something I wasn’t going to get into just then.

Once our cups were refilled I gave the still shaking girl what I hoped was a reassuring smile and returned my attention to the three authors of Sam and my present difficulties. “That doesn’t answer my question, Lord Kevin.”

“You have both been given the best training in your skills that we could manage, lady.” Kevin answered slowly. “Though you have resolutely ignored the one thing about yourself that would be the most powerful of the abilities you possess. It may be that you don’t yet realize what that is, or that it is even there. We have hesitated to force that issue with you.”

“Oh?” I definitely wasn’t liking where that one was leading my already gob-smacked thoughts, but typically just couldn’t leave something alone if it was there for me to find.

“It is a very personal thing, lady.” Alis softly answered. “Finding and communing with your god, or goddess.”

God, Goddess? Okay that one did it. I drained my cup waved it in the air for more and tried my befuddled best to digest what she’d just said. “What? Are you trying to tell me I’m some kind of evil priestess or something?”

“Something like that.” Kae’song agreed. “The potential is in you, you have the presence, give off the sense of unseen power, so yes the potential is in you, lady. Your people’s goddess is interested in you even now. But what you become doesn’t have to be entirely evil.”

“Okay, end of interview.” I stood up and stared at the maniacs for a minute. “I may decide to kill all three of you tomorrow, but right now, just arrange for a nice keg of wine for me, ale for Sam, and enough food to keep us going for awhile to be delivered to our rooms. Until we come out, please don’t disturb us. That could get kind of messy, if you know what I mean.”

“Of course, Dahlia.” Kae’song nodded. “Take all the time that you need.”

“What I need is to get shitfaced and forget about all of this insanity.” I threw back with venom in my voice I wasn’t used to hearing or feeling. “But what I’m going to do is go sit with my husband and try to think this mess through.”

As I stormed out, with Sam close behind I heard Alis say, “Well, look at it this way, gentlemen. No one even tried telling us that this was going to be easy.”

I could have sworn I caught a hint of admiration in her voice as she told them that.

* * * *

I know I scared people in the halls as we headed for our chambers. I didn’t mean to do that, really. But I just couldn’t help glowering and growling at anyone we encountered. Needless to say, the people wasted no time getting out of our way. Part of me was ashamed about that. But another part, the part that really worried me just then, enjoyed it.

Yeah, I really needed some down time to work some things out.

Okay some down time to spend with Sam, too. I wasn’t all that familiar with this girl thing yet, and was kind of hoping getting a little would settle me down regarding other subjects.

Hey! I know I was guy not long ago. But I have needs too, you know.

And they said I had a goddess who was interested in me?

Uh oh.

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a goddess?

Uh oh, indeed.

"Treat everyone you meet as though they had a sign on them that said "Fragile, under construction"

dorothycolleen

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Like I said.

Sam and Dahlia are in for some very interesting times in the future.

Evil-ish

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"But what you become doesn’t have to be entirely evil.”

Because being 'evilish' is really okay?!? That really doesn't sound any better to me. And I'm thinking that communing with a goddess who is probably evil doesn't sound like a good thing either. They may not be fanatical neutrals but they seem quite callous neutrals. Very much the needs of the greater good outweighs the needs of the individual.

My first thought at the end of the chapter was run Sam and Dahlia, run! :-)

Another enjoyable chapter. Thank you!



"Life moves pretty fast. If you don't stop and look around once in a while, you could miss it."

Oh, trust me.

They both thought of that one, at pretty much the same time. But running won't do any good when a real goddess is interested in you. More I won't say right now.

Maggie

Oh yeah.

In more ways than the usual I can say without giving much away at this point.

Maggie

I get the feeling that their

I get the feeling that their somewhat evil nature will allow them to become agents of change without having too much of the baggage of "goodness" that will hinder them from their noble goals.

As with all things.

We shall see, we shall see, in time.

Maggie

Things to think about

I believe that they have been given a great deal of things to think about here. But, really is a goddess the only other option that she has, I can see her also making a powerful mage in her own right. Tho, it has seemed that they have been holding back on giving her magical training, likely hoping that she would turn towards a spiritual source of power. Looking forward to more as you are giving us a wonderful story here.

Wishing your New Year to be full of riches both material and spiritual,

Usagi

Hmmmmm was it evil for her

Hmmmmm was it evil for her to kill the slave trader? I dont think so, Evil, when it is directed at Evil and just plain bad people, becomes Good, just as Good when it is acomplished in bad ways becomes Evil. I think Dahlia needs to become like her new worlds version of the TV "Nikita" and acheiving good, by useing Evil methods and ways.

Evil?

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Nah, more wicked I reckon. Having people fear you might be sorta useful where they are now in more ways than one. I think they're strong enough to temper than delight at said fear too. Running would be a little ineffective I suspect too, Goddesses tend to have a long reach and that other three are likely no slouches either. Fun times indeed.

Still wondering if this is all the truth the whole truth...well you know. More turkey legs and a keg of wine please.

Kris

A Goddess?

Oh, this is going to be a lot of fun, I just know it! Can't wait for this event to happen!

Wren

One Goddess?

One Goddess is interested in them? When you think about it that seems rather strange to me. For instance, why wouldn't the Goddess of the Light Elves be interested as well? She could make a case, given Dahlia and Sam's character and the present state of their souls, that they should belong to Her.

Also, Dahia and Sam's potential to change things in the world should be of interest to any number of other gods and goddesses for a number of different reasons.

Just a thought. ;)

Villain

Villain is the hero of their story.

Not necessarily.

But then again, the so-called bad guys get so little good press... *evil grin*

Maggie

I would imagine that whatever...

...racial traits they've been moulded from, their own innate goodness will see them through.

Besides, this god or goddess, and I'm working from an assumption that this will be a drow patron deity, will probably draw their strength from the number of worshippers that 'subscribes' to them.

Thus, it will be in the deities best interest to go along with this plan if it means the salvation of her power base.

It maybe that a dillution of the drow alignment will seem acceptable, given the alternatives.

Of course, Ar'ri and Samthien probably have their work cut out holding onto themselves during these 'negotiations', but as I said, I have faith in their true natures. Maybe it's Christmas optimism.

Lovely of you to take the time to post at Christmas, it is hugely appreciated.

Hope you're having a fantastic holiday yourself and Thankyou. X

Thank you for reading this one.

Desperate situations, desperate measures. I won't say more.

Maggie

For teh Evulz! Not really

Respect and power is what Dhro'aaa revel in, fear is what they cause, but nastiness does not necessarily become them.

Still, Sam and Dahlia's work is cut out for them. Alis is right, no one ever tried telling anyone it was going to be easy. :)

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Easy?

Some of my characters having it easy? hmmm...

Nah!

Maggie

A Walk in the Dark Chapter 15

What if she kills her god or goddess? Could that change things?

    Stanman
May Your Light Forever Shine
    Stanman
May Your Light Forever Shine

Well, yes.

But mortals don't kill gods except in very rare cases. This isn't one of those.

Maggie

Nature vs Nurture

always fun stuff. I am pretty sure this story won't turn out like the scorpion and the turtle but it will surely be a struggle as Dahlia seeks to find her own balance. What fun.

Of course the irony is that trans folks especially TS argue it is nature and not nurture.

Kim

Hmmm.

Well, the 'Balance' spoken of earlier could be applied to Dahlia and Sam, I suppose.

Maggie

Ahhh, aaaa:)

So you surprised me again Maggie.
But it can't be all light and fun can it?

I would guess that it's the Goddess she will have convince, not her minions?
And a Goddess that's also losing her disciples may be quite devious.

So the question becomes, who choose them to be evil?
Themselves, or the Goddess?

And will she accept mere mortals mixing with her schemes?
And what will our hero&ine do..

I'm only sure of one thing, you will surprise me :)

:) wonderful

Good one Maggie, A few questions though:

1. You've previously implied that the *avatars* (which is the only word that I think can describe Alis and the others at this moment) thought they'd get two men, but then they got a man and a woman they once said something about king and queen, now priestess. Is this a priestess- queen? My impression of Sam - good warrior, good leader but too soft too be a king; he is overshadowed by Dahlia.

2. If they are starting a new kind of Drow Race would they be joinig the ranks of Avatars? which are gods incarnate which might mean that the Drow goddess is now thinking of a possibility of using Dahlia's body. If that is so does Sam become a human consort or does the goddess have a consort who will meld with Sam?

Great story so far!

Cliff

Welll,

Thanks. Questions are good. Answers? Those come in the story. And they will, I promise.

Maggie