Rumors, Novel, and Narrative

I may have put the cart in front of the donkey, the problem is, as a writer I'm still a donkey. But would you rather start off a story with a "Hot Chic," or a skinny girl flat in all the wrong places.

Pablo’s First Kiss

“Toni!” Rita pulls me into the girls’ bathroom, and tells me, “I heard Brad wants to ask you out.

Remember you have a date with us girls tonight. We are going to the mall."