help with proofreading a short story please

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I was wondering if anybody might be willing to proofread my short story. I would hate to have the comma's and periods all screwed up with my first submission.

I've received enough offers to help. Thank you.

Tried to PM you, but it didn't work.

Patricia Marie Allen's picture

If it's pretty much a general audience thing, (no gratuitous sex or foul language) I'll give it a shot. My email address is in my signature line. Send it too me and I'll try to get it back in a day or two.

Hugs
Patricia

Happiness is being all dressed up and HAVING some place to go.
Semper in femineo gerunt

message got through, thanks

The message got through to me here, just no email letting me know I had a message.

It's about suicide. I'll pass it to you but if you don't want to read it I'll understand.