Coming Out

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Coming Out
by Edeyn Hannah Blackeney

Voices.

Hushed, but definitely talking.

There's a few whoosh-klump noises, too. I think I'm in hospital. I think I'll open my eyes, get a good look around, ask folks what's going on.

Ack. That's a lot of light for a tiny crack open. Didn't even part my eyelashes.

Whoa.

I must be pretty messed up, because trying -- and failing -- to open my eyes just wore me out. Maybe I'll have a look around later... right after I take a nap.

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Seems like interesting

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Seems like interesting begining of story. Will there be more?
Robin

WOW

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You said so many things on so many levels! The more I think about it, the more levels I see.

Thank you,
Anne

Wow...

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so little written, so much said and created. That's skill.

Bailey Summers

A really nice piece that

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A really nice piece that feels like it is about the aftermath of coming out rather than the preamble to a story of doing such. Nicely done.

Heather

We are the change that will save the world.

Heather

We are the change that will save the world.

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