A Walk in the Dark Chapter 19

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A Walk in the Dark
Chapter 19

by Maggie Finson

 

New Acquaintances

“I’d offer to share our fire, and rations.” I told them and shrugged. “But for some reason I think you’d decline both.”

“That is correct stranger.” The one I had pegged as the magic user answered in a melodious voice as she pulled her hood back to reveal a face so much like mine it was unnerving. “Who are you, High Caste and what exactly is your game here?”

Maaan. Just when you think things are starting to look up. I stared at the High Caste Dhro’aaa female who was questioning me and let out a sigh. “Well you see, it’s like this…”

“Simply, clearly, and quickly.” She interrupted me with a hissed. “Your name, all of it, your clan, and how it is that they failed to kill you when you went renegade.”

“All right.” I answered and drew in a breath. “I am Dahlia Saaa Llolth…”

I didn’t get any further as she pulled back and almost screeched. “You DARE take the Goddess’ name, renegade?”

“I didn’t TAKE anything, bitch.” I responded and felt Sssirinthsss stirring on my back and didn’t even try to stop her that time. “The name was given to me. I had no choice in it. My clan would probably scare even you to death, and I’m no renegade.”

“You lie!” She had managed to get her temper back under some kind of control, but was still very angry and readying some kind of spell then visibly calmed herself and even gave me an amused look. “Though it is a bold lie, Dahlia Saaa Llolth.

“It is no lie.” I told her evenly then shrugged, which helped my guardian to work free of my tunic. “Trust me, I’d be quite happy with another name, but that is the one I got stuck with.”

“No matter.” She shrugged in her turn while starting to let the spell she had been forming loose to work whatever nasty mayhem it was meant to do. Giving my ‘pet’ more than enough time to both tackle and pin her to the ground.

The two with her were warriors who had drawn their weapons but stopped at a warning look from me, and probably the fact that Sam had moved forward in a ready position with both his swords out. I gave the two Dhro’aaa warriors a thin smile and shook my head. “If you try, she will die in a very unpleasant manner, I think Sssirinthsss likes her food alive, by the way and truthfully, I’m not sure when she was fed last. I really should start keeping track of that a little better. Now move back, put your weapons away and hopefully no one will get hurt any worse than they have already.”

The pair did so, under Sam’s watchful eyes and I moved to where my guardian still had the female pinned to the ground. I looked at her and winced. “That’s kind of nasty burn there. Dire Spiders tend to drip a kind of acid when they’re excited. That plays nine kinds of hell with the floors at home off and on,by the way.”

She just glared up at me without saying a thing. I shook my head again, as if wondering if everyone I ran into this trip was going to be a fool about things. “Now here’s what we’re going to do. You know my name, and that has me at kind of a disadvantage. So I’d really appreciate it if you told me yours. Now.”

She still didn’t answer, and was in fact trying to work another spell.

“Wrong.” I let out a put upon sigh, and stepped on her hand, okay maybe it was little hard the way I stood on it once I had but I wanted to make sure she knew that I knew when she was getting one of those things ready. “Now I’m told that I’m a reasonably patient sort most of the time. But today has been kind of — interesting. As a result, my patience is pretty well used up. Now, tell me your name and give your oath that you won’t try anything else to harm me or my companions during this meeting, please.”

“If I refuse?” She spat back. Well I had to give her points for nerve. Intelligence I was starting to doubt, though.

“Then it’s meal time for Sssirinthss.” I told her as if that was the most obvious thing in the world, which given her position should have been that. “Then I’ll send your henchmen there back to wherever you came from with a message I’d really much rather you delivered. But if you don’t wish to cooperate, that’s all right too, I suppose.”

“Mrrthis Saaa Pthon of Clan Pthon, priestess to our Lady Llolth.” She grated out then grimaced before the rest. “I swear to you on my blood that I and my companions will initiate no more hostile actions during this — meeting.”

“Now was that so hard?” I questioned while silently telling a disappointed Sssirinthss to get off her. Once my guardian had I stood back so Mrrthis could stand up. “Now that our own introductions are out of the way, maybe we can actually talk without screaming at each other and all that threatening. Think you can manage that?”

I got a short nod in return and grinned. “Good, now I’m going to touch you, so don’t get all outraged and panic here.”

I reached forward to touch her cheek and healed the acid burn on it, but pointedly did nothing to her hand even if it did look kind of broken. “That’s to prove that I’m not going to be a completely evil bitch about this. If you behave I’ll even heal that hand. It looks rather painful.”

Sam still hadn’t relaxed, still staring emotionlessly at the other two warriors who were getting the eye from Sssirinthss. The poor thing did look hungry and appeared ready to leap at the slightest provocation. I put a hand on her (she’d grown to the size of large pony for this) and stroked her side. “No, Sirrin, you can’t eat our guests. Go hunt, but nothing intelligent today, all right? All that screaming would get on my nerves just now.”

Mrrthss touched her healed cheek with her good hand then quickly cradled the other one with a wince. “Well you certainly have an undeniable style, I’ll give you that much.”

“Okay, so now will let me tell my side of the story?”

She nodded. I gave her an abbreviated version — leaving out the part about being from another world and starting my life out as a human male. I’d disturbed her sensibilities enough for one day, I thought.

“Either you are a very good liar, are deranged, or as difficult as it is to accept, you are telling the truth.” She told me once she’d digested what I’d told her. “It isn’t uncommon for those of us with as much power as you seem to possess to go insane. Which makes them even more dangerous, by the way. But for now, I will accept that you believe you are telling the truth.”

“It’s a start.” I admitted then grinned.

“You mentioned a message you wished sent to my clan?”

“Yes I did, didn’t I?” Sirrin returned then, appearing reasonably sated, but our three guests were still very nervous in her presence. I motioned to her and she shrank back down and crawled back onto my skin. As she did that I couldn’t help but give a dreamy little smile. “Oh, the message. My apologies, when Sirrin is sated she is such a pleasure to have back.

“Just tell your council I wish a meeting, that’s all. They can choose the place, the time, and I’ll be there. You can send your answer to Kae’song’s citadel.”

“I will pass that message along.” She answered and I noted the slightest widening of her eyes when I had told her where to send the answer. “Though I can tell you they will be more than a trifle skeptical of your claims.”

“Convincing them I want the meeting is your task Mrrthss.” I shrugged. “But how many people do you know of with a full-fledged dire spider on their backs?”

“Not many, she admitted with a little shudder then a chuckle.” “I will deliver your message and you will have peace from my clan until that and your meeting, if it happens, is finished.”

“Good enough for me.” I answered. “Go in peace, Lady Mrrthss saaa Pthoh, neither I or mine will hinder your journey home.”

Then they were gone as quickly as they’d shown up. I hoped she could heal her own hand and winced when I thought about what I’d done to it.

Turning to Sam I lifted an eyebrow and grinned. “Well, I thought that went — fairly well.”

His only answer was a roll of his eyes in response.

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The rest of our night passed fairly peacefully. I don’t know what Sirrin had chosen for her meal, but her presence had all the predators afraid to come near our campsite. Yeah, yeah, I know I’ve shortened her name, but she’s my pet I can give her a nickname if I want. Besides, her full name isn’t all that easy to pronounce.

Anyway, we managed to get back to Kae’song’s citadel without any more interruptions.

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Oh, one thing I forgot to

Oh, one thing I forgot to mention:

Won't that priestess have spiders' eggs on her face when she communes with Lloth and finds out that she was telling the unvarnished truth? She was even skipping a lot. I would love to be a bump on the wall for that conversation.

(not a fly, the spiders would eat me)
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Thanks.

As for the priestess, well she is going to have a rather rude awakening once she does get home and communes with her goddess is all I'll say right now.

Except that meeting is going to be a really interesting one.

Maggie

Spider, spider

...on her back... Now that's an interesting tattoo - can you do the same thing with other tattoos or does it have to be a living being in the first place?

Ssirrinthsss

Pop over to Chapter 16, oljak... it relates how Dahlia received her living tattoo.

As to this chapter, Maggie, it's interesting at how easily Dahlia's adapting to having her new pet -- allowing Ssirrinthsss to hunt and enjoying the sensations when she returned to her place on Dahlia's back.

Adapting.

Well, she kind of has to do that or really go nuts after all. :)

I want a pet Spider!

I don't normally enjoy this sort of fantasy thing, but your happy, quirky, smart ass writing style makes it much nicer. And I really like that Spider!

Khadijah

Umm, nooo.

That tattoo/spider was a gift from the goddess.

Maggie

Thank you for another

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Thank you for another enjoyable chapter! :-)



"Life moves pretty fast. If you don't stop and look around once in a while, you could miss it."

Thank you.

I'm glad you're enjoying this one. Right now I'm keeping the chapters kind of short but pretty soon some longer ones should start showing up.

Maggie

I love it !!!!

This story has become I.M.H.O. the best of the sward and magic stories I have seen in a long time. It is easy to loose the personal costs and real emotions any person would have being drawn into such a situation but you have kept it real and at the same time funny. My only problem is that each story leaves me wanting more. Thank You
The only bad question is the one not asked.

The only bad question is the one not asked.

I'm glad you're enjoying it.

Oh, yes, Dahlia is very much aware of the costs to her personally, and is starting to get glimmerings of some of the gains that are possible, too. I will admit that some of her attitudes and methods still bother her.

Maggie

Just blabbering

Just blabbering here a bit. Sirrin is acting a bit like two standard D&D tropes. One is of a familiar where a magic user and the creature is tied together, both becoming more than they are separately. The other is strangely enough the Paladin's mount. At a certainly level the holy warriors can call, usually a horse, to them. They are stronger and faster than others of their breed and trained to war.

I guess I thought of that due to Sirrin's small pony size. Hi Ho Dire Spider Away! *Picture of Sirrin rearing up on her rear four legs while the forward ones paw the air.*

Hugs!

Grover

Sirrin...

Playing the warhorse... shudder.

Oh, the things that ran through my mind when I read that comment.

As for tropes, kind of tough to avoid all of them, isn't it? *grin*

Maggie

Tropes...

...are not all *bad* clichés. They're storytelling devices, and without using some set of predefined storytelling devices, I don't think you could write anything at all interesting. So, bring on the tropes! Just as long as you write as good as any of your stories that I've read, I will not complain about tropes!

I'm usually not a fan of sword & sorcery, but...

I truly love this story! Very well written, and every time I finish a chapter, I keep wanting more. I love Sirrin, and Dahlia's "evolution" is fascinating! More, please!

Wren

Dahlia's Evolution

Is something that is going to give her problems for awhile yet as noted in a previous comment. That she has accepted the fact that Sirrin is there and actually 'used' her is a step, but only a step.

Maggie

Answers

I would think that Llolth's priestess's would be getting the word when they pray to her and vowing to kill her daughter in very unpleasant ways. It also seems that Dahlia has got oven any feelings of discomfort about having Sirrin on her back. Looking forward to reading the next chapter.

Priestesses

Let me just say that it isn't going to be an easy road for either them or Dahlia in the future. Dhro'aaa culture is pretty resistant to change, even small ones. Which is why they cast out lower caste 'renegades' and generally kill the higher caste ones out of hand.

Maggie

A Walk in the Dark Chapter 19

Well, she asked for it, didn't she?

    Stanman
May Your Light Forever Shine
    Stanman
May Your Light Forever Shine

Asked for it?

Well, aside from being arrogant and confident in her own power, the priestess was acting on behalf of her clan. She actually had every right to consider this 'interloper' to actually lesser than herself, though that overconfidence did contribute to her difficulties during that first meeting.

Maggie

Maggie, each chapter you

Maggie, each chapter you write is my new favorite. This story is definitely moving nicely, I just want the next part now. :D
Shannon Johnston

Samirah M. Johnstone

Thank you, Shannon.

I'm working to keep the present pace of postings, by the way, though that may slow down a bit as the chapters become longer and I have to start paying more attention to RL here.

Glad you're enjoying the story.

Maggie

I loved the sizing up circling each other bits.

Nice display of dark elven typical cultures. I like that Dahlia plays the game but at the same time she doesn't. It's a shout out to her alien to this world nature. The spider bit is neat and I agree thinking too much about it right now would drive her nuts with all of it.

It does take me back to my AD&D days, before the other additions. When Vault came out we played for a year in the setting and spin offs from that module.

Great read.

Bailey Summers

It is.

Starting to get entertaining, isn't it? And listen to me here, I'm the one writing it. Dahlia and company seem to have gotten minds of their own about this one, that's for sure.

Thanks, Bailey.

Maggie

sending a message

She sure sent a message. Maybe some of her people will listen, and just maybe, they will be able to start changing things.

"Treat everyone you meet as though they had a sign on them that said "Fragile, under construction"

dorothycolleen

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Message.

Well I always felt the best way to send a message was to convince the bearer of it's veracity...

At least the local Dho'aaa will listen before actively tyring to kill her now.

Maggie

Cuddly Furry Spider Hugs to You!

Well, spiders are furry... sort of.

Maybe you want a nice close cuddly hug.

(Here's looking at you, kid!)

This story is getting funner and funner. I'm glad Dahlia is getting along well with her new cuddly pet.

I'm wondering about the concept of 'renegade.' What does a Drow have to do to become a renegade? Isn't 'renegade' a concept that is invalid for those of a chaotic alignment. After all, isn't a renegade someone who goes against the established law or norms? Perhaps these dro'aaa are neutral evil.

I can't wait to see what happens when 'Mrrthis Saaa Pthon of Clan Pthon, priestess to our Lady Llolth' decides to pray to her goddess. It should be interesting.

Renegades.

Well, that will be covered later, but for one, if a Dhro'aaa doesn't adhere to their culture's vision of society they are often considered to be renegades and the lucky ones are simply made into outcasts for that. Or maybe the lucky ones are just killed. Or...

Maggie

Bravo!

What Gwen Brown said... DITTO!

I'm liking this as much, if not more so, as your "Maiden By Decree."
This is great entertainment. Thanks for giving it to us.

Linda Jeffries
Too soon old, too late smart.
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Linda Jeffries
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I appreciate you

letting me know you're enjoying this one. Thank you.

Maggie

:)

Good on you Maggie.
I'm enjoying every word of it.

Happy you're

having fun with it. I know I am.

Maggie

Injuries

Here's a thought. As A cleric, Mrrthis Saaa Pthon of Clan Pthon, priestess to our Lady Llolth's powers are granted by Llolth including healing spells. Betcha her hand won't heal until Dahlia does it.

Terrific scene!

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“Now here’s what we’re going to do. You know my name, and that has me at kind of a disadvantage. So I’d really appreciate it if you told me yours. Now.”

She still didn’t answer, and was in fact trying to work another spell.

“Wrong.” I let out a put upon sigh, and stepped on her hand. Okay, maybe it was little hard the way I stood on it once I had, but I wanted to make sure she knew that I knew when she was getting one of those things ready.

Wow, what a confrontation! I even managed to get a photo… ;)

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