Dealing With Disappointment

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I have just posted the final chapters of Cynthia and the High School Years - Part 2.

I look back at the stories in this series and wonder what happened. The early ones had a very good response as far as I am concerned, but as things drew closer and closer to what I felt was the whole idea of the series, the responses dropped to a third of the early ones. Well, I thought, that will be taken care of when everyone sees how sweetly I revealed the Donna/Don situation and the eventual consumation of Don and Cindy's relationship. I thought I had written a very sweet, not overtly sexual chapter, where their genuine love for each other was finally expressed in the act of love. Boy was I wrong. The chapter bombed! Go figure. I have literally shed a few tears over its failure; however, I know what I wanted to happen, and I think I achieved that very nicely, even if the response says otherwise.

To those who have been nice enough to write and say they enjoyed the series, I want to say I am still working on the Volume 2. I might be able to get together enough material to pick up where this story left off. We'll just have to see. I want to start on the sixth novel in the California Saga. It promises to be interesting. I suspect it will be well into 2011 before it is done, if then.

Well, in the words of that old song, "Pick yourself up, brush yourself off, and start all over again."

Portia

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Well.......Hit it, maestro!

Andrea Lena's picture


I 'm loving Cynthia and the High School Years
It brings me laughs, it brings me tears
So Portia don't fret, I'm willing to bet
Your readership's bound to increase

I'm liking the Wizard and what he does
It fascinates me just because!
Oh Portia My dear, never you fear
I can't wait for the next chapter please

Write like an author inspired
Till the plot of your story is clear
I'll be excited when it's done
Cause you're simply wonderful dear!

Please forgive me; this comment's late
I really do think your stories are great
I'm sorry I am
I do give a damn
I just forgot to take my meds.

Write like a writer that you are
and I'll keep reading right along
I'm so enamored with your tale
that it inspired me to sing this song!

I love your cats and your Cindy too
They entertain me that much is true
Just keep writing hun
and when you are done
I'll be ready for more stories from you!


 

She was born for all the wrong reasons but grew up for all the right ones.
Con grande amore e di affetto, Andrea Lena

  

To be alive is to be vulnerable. Madeleine L'Engle
Love, Andrea Lena

Portia, Dear

It was your version of the Wizard that started me to use him in a story or two.

    Stanman
May Your Light Forever Shine
    Stanman
May Your Light Forever Shine

Thank you, Stan

littlerocksilver's picture

I know I can rely on you to read and comment. You are very much appreciated.

Portia

Portia

Carry on writing

Angharad's picture

at least if it's posted here, it might be read by all who visit here. The number of comments and votes, with one or two notable exceptions, seem to be getting less. Could be the weather - less readers in lighter nights - or some other factor.

Only other writers appreciate the time spent in putting together a single or multiple posting. Besides, writing is a skill, the more you do the better you get (I appear to be the exception at this and cycling ;)).

Angharad

Angharad