Desert Princess II

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I have Chapter 2 of Desert Princess almost ready to post but I am thinking that it needs an edit first. Erin has done my other work, but I think she may be waaaaay to busy right now, what with,,,,, so I am not even going to ask.

Would anyone else care to have a look before the chapter has its first blush? I am thinking that this is the end.

Gwenellen (Gwen Brown)

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I could help some

I could give it a readover and look for confusing text plus catch some of the errors if it would help. At best I'm so-so but better than I was. Thank goodness or Itinerant would have jumped off a cliff by now.

Otherwise I suggest contacting someone like Holly Logan or Janet Nolan or one of the other nice people here who often proof for others.

John in Wauwatosa

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