Luna 1: Drafted

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A powerful pre-cog manifests as a mutant and foresees the return of the Great Old Ones. This is the story of her arrival at Whateley Academy for mutants and her first few weeks at a school where anything can happen and usual does. Here she will begin to learn about her gifts and how to use then in the fight against the return of the GOO

I hope that this will form part of an ongoing story arc.

Irvine

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Luna-2 progress report

I have had a few emails asking when Luna-2 is coming out?

I get a bit OCD about things and, at the moment, I am in the middle of an animation project that is taking all my attention.

What happened was: After finishing the first part of the trilogy, at over a 100,000 words, it was becoming in very difficult to keep track of everything. As a result, I spent a very boring two weeks loading 'Luna-Drafted', (plus my extensive notes.) into authoring software called yWriter. In the long run, I definitely feel it was worth the effort, unfortunately, the boredom allowed my mind to wander, and I got caught up in a project I have been mulling for a while to combine real world video with 3D animation.

I found a CC licensed video of the Forth Railway bridge with boats, people and trains which I downloaded from YouTube, and am in the process of animating a Flying Saucer which flies around the bridge. If done properly, the UFO will look as if it is part of the original video and 'appear' to fly behind the span of the bridge.

Here is a lo-res copy of static test I did which has the UFO behind the head of a statue

flying saucer.jpg

Anyway, be assured I have not forgotten about Luna, and have a fully developed plot worked out in FreePlane. As soon as I satisfy my OCD compulsion with the animation project, I promise to return to Luna's story.

Meantime I apologise to Luna's many fans for getting sidetracked. (Blush)

Irvine

(Court Of The Moon)

Space/Star Elves:

"A subrace of elves that reside in the stars". These type of elves live in space and reside in communities where magic and technology are one. This means that the technology they use will either be crystalline, or organic constructs that are both in tune with nature and capable of destroying whole cities.

The Five Fold Courts

⦁ The Court of the North, aligned with element of air, was ruled by Eight Dragon Kings, with air maidens, storm giants and other aerial creatures.

⦁ The Court of the West, aligned with the element of wood, was ruled by Nine Sidhe Queens and a Fae King, with dryads, mandrakes, ents and other such sylvans creatures.

⦁ The Court of the South, aligned with the element of fire was ruled by twelve Djinn Lords, with salamanders and other pyrotics under them.

⦁ The Court of the East, aligned with the element of water was ruled by seven Triton Kings, with merfolk, undines and other watery denizens under them.

⦁ And the Court of the Center, aligned with the element of earth, was ruled by Mother Gaea and her seven daughters. The Court of the Center imposed definition on the other courts, coordinated efforts between them and stabliized the empire.

Changes?

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Luna 1 Drafted (changes that should be made)

Submitted by fairyking on Sat, 2017/05/20 - 6:44pm

Open up the first chapter make it into three or four

Add more Characters perspectives (sam everheart, uncle dave, praetorian guard, blackstar squad, Mrs carson)

Take out the Sara Waite scene

Add more schoolyard conflict to storyline

Dream Scape and Astral encounters

Don't have Luna Arrive at Whateley right away Or so publicly

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Are these changes that have been made or just considering?

Reedit: These changes are not from the author. Its up to him what he wants to do. They are certainly not necessary to the story as written. As fan-fiction the story doesn't need to adhere to canon.


"Life is not measured by the breaths you take, but by the moments that take your breath away.”
George Carlin

Luna 1 Alterations

Well, more changes here than I first realized. Can't say I agree with all of them, but that's Irvine's call.


"Life is not measured by the breaths you take, but by the moments that take your breath away.”
George Carlin

Altered comments

My replies were about a post that has been substantially altered. Thus they make little sense when the context is deleted.


"Life is not measured by the breaths you take, but by the moments that take your breath away.”
George Carlin

Precursor Elves/Sidhe/Alvar

Essentially the Mythic/Primal Elves: the most ancient and powerful subrace of elves. These type of elves were rumored to have existed before humankind and it should be noted that several of the "gods" in Celtic/Norse Mythology, Tuatha Dé Danann and Vanir, are considered to be particular families of them. While most of the elven race live in isolated communities on the planet, these type of elves live in communities found in other DIMENSIONS.

Succubus form

Possibly because of the types of magics involved in their creation, their base form was of an exceptionally beautiful sidhe woman with leathery bat like wings;

a long, arrow-head tail that could be used both as a weapon and to help stabilise their flight;
weaponised, almost talon like, finger nails;

canine incisors slightly longer and sharper than one would expect that injected a soporific,
and finally, a pair of small crescent shaped demon horns. I am sure you recognise the imagery from racial memory.