Belle 4 is up

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Its a little shorter than the others but not by much. I just happened to hit the perfect stop and decided to leave it off there. Have fun reading

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thanks much unfortantly the comments on the story itself so far are a little negative. But dont worry there is a reason which will be revealed in the next chapter.

I do like the story, but it's

I do like the story, but it's just frustrating that nothing is working in Bill's favor :--).

I might not always comment, but I do always leave a kudo ^^

grtz & hugs,

Sarah xxx

well

One trend I have noticed is people jumping all over the chars of my stories as if they are real life people. I find it strange when it's just fiction.

It's Just Fiction...

Don't find it strange. It means people care about your characters and empathize/sympathize with them. Take it as a compliment. :P

I do like the story. Leaving Bill in the bathroom with only a uniform from an elite girl's school is a bit suspicious, though. I smell a setup. What the hell is mom thinking?

Lisa

(Guess I should have posted the second part in story comments, not here. Oh well.)

gaby

read gaby a few times book 1 to book 4 book 5 turns me off totally.

Belle 4... or do you mean 4 bells ?

Which I think is a duty shift on a ship at sea?

Guess I better read it before you -- GULP -- post again.

You realize, tel, you are a serial poster?

John in Wauwatosa

John in Wauwatosa

It's a good story a bit crazy in parts

Like I said good story an a bit crazy in parts and this latest turn of events is a lil suspicious. As for what ya said about the gaby saga tels ya in book 5 it gets a bit weird theres parts that don't exactly match up. but once ya get on to book 6 up to the current chap of book 9 it's pretty darn good.

Yay.

I'm diggin it. *munch munch munch*


I wear this crown of thorns
Upon my liar's chair
Full of broken thoughts
I cannot repair