New Ending for Mutation Part 30

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I have added text for a new ending to my Mutation #30 story. Look for text "Replacement ending" The original ending follows the words "The End"

The original ending was meant to be humorous and ironic. I guess it failed at both. So I wrote a different ending that was closer to the story.

Authors sometimes like to try diffferent things with their stories.

Melanie

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I hope the criticism doesn't put you off

Iolanthe Portmanteaux's picture

It's important to try new or different things. I regard you as one of the most inventive writers here, and I hope you'll go on putting out stories that please you first of all and above all.

Damn the torpedoes!

hugs,

- iolanthe