Running Scared~1

This is quite amazing

I never thought I’d ever fall in love with a story like this but you’ve somehow managed to not only keep me interested in the story but actually wanting more of it!

A wonderful tag

That "to be continued" is a perfect ending to this post. I like how it's going, and look forward to future chapters.

Please Do Continue

I think that I have read everyone of your stories, and love them. :)

Gwen

Please don't take this as a criticism, like your character, I've always thought switching to Daddy from Dad was a bit of stretch. I grew up with two sisters and a brother; all older than I. I was very close to one sister. I never remember either sister calling our father "Daddy". He was Dad to us all.

Perhaps when were were very young, he may have been "Daddy" but we all outgrew what I see as a juvenile choice of words.

All of that aside, I can see a great story coming and look forward to coming chapters. Don't change a thing due to my observations. It is your story, after all.

Hugs
Patricia

Happiness is being all dressed up and HAVING some place to go.
Semper in femineo gerunt

Is this story going to...

...a certain Cove?

New Story

Susan,

Have been an avid fan for years and have read all of your stories, some of them several times. So it is no wonder I have been starving for a new story from you and now, here it is. As usual you have put in all the bells and whistles to get, and keep, my undivided attention and I can't wait for you to continue.

Lots of hugs, Sarah Ann

I do hope

that Dad makes it out and away from the pursuit. 'Fraid he'll have to ditch the nice car unless he can de-bug it.
Suzie was doing so well up to that point. I think it isn't "prettier", but "more grown up" that she is jealous of.

"Reach for the sun."

It's Been Too Long

Since we had a Sue Brown story. Welcome back. And the story has a ripping start.

To be continued..?

Oh yes please, most definitely.

Great start to this story. Really need to read what comes next.

"Life in general is a fuck up,
but it is the rare moments of beauty and peace
in between the chaos,
That makes it worth living."
- Tertia Hill

great beginning

The story has set its premise and hooked me in. I want to know what happens next.

The title makes me suspect that things will not be easy for our girls.

Oh, yes, ...

... by all means, continue! "On the run and hiding in plain sight" is one of my favorites! :) This one seems to have all the right ingredients!

Sara

Between the wrinkles, the orthopedic shoes, and nine decades of gravity, it is really hard to be alluring. My icon, you ask? It is the last picture I allowed to escape the camera ... back before most BC authors were born.

chapter 2

please,

you have to write another chapter to this story.

it can go in so many directions.

Yea

So glad you're back.

Portia

Yes, Yes, Yes

Please do continue, you definitely hooked me.

Yes!!!

Wow, this seems like an amazing story so far!! In just one chapter, you’ve set up so many promising avenues to explore: a potential stepmom, everyone knowing about Jen, the whole spy thing, the danger, and, potentially, a return to a certain cove. I really enjoyed this!

icing on the cake

Okay, to be honest, I almost went right past this story. The title didn't draw me in. The story descriptors didn't have anything all that catching either, but enough for me to read what was on the splash screen. What? a child? The descriptors said teenager, but Suzie said "Daddy," which usually meant a tween or younger. Okay, curiosity is there. Open it up ans I see the author for the first time. That is fully enough for me to read. Oh, I do not regret it either. This was great. I love how Suzie took Jennifer as a given. You have to love kids perceptions on the world. You have captured her pretty well. I look forward to seeing how the dynamic between the two kids develops in their new roles, and how the story unfolds.

Keep Smiling, Keep Writing
Teek

Of course continue!

I'm not much of a fan for hiding from the bad guys stories, but this one has real possibilities. The characters are interesting enough that I want to know what happens next.

Wow! Intense start!

A lot of responsibility on small shoulders but needs must. Arise Jennifer.

Can we believe that Clair is truly trustworthy?

I look forward to the next chapter.

So Jennifer

is pretty, that's always a plus.

Some holiday

A lot of kids would be dancing in the streets if their parent(s) left them alone and weren't sure when they'd return.

But Jennifer and Suzie aren't happy they've been left alone because they love their dad and he and they are in danger from unknown people.

Again thinking a desire was being hidden from the parents was a mistake, just as the one which thought rejection would happen if the secret was told to the parents.

Dad's letter left no doubt that he has unconditional love for them, or Jennifer wouldn't have had a suitcase waiting.

Jennifer needs to have suzie change into something that wouldn't attraction should the two have to bug out in a moments notice. Wearing that red party dress might strike her fancy now, but should danger come, she needs to be wearing clothing that wouldn't be out of place for daily wear.

Sure hope dad's as good as it appears.

Others have feelings too.

I somehow missed this

liking it a lot!

A new Susan Brown story. It looks like another winner...

I'm so happy to see another new story by Susan Brown!!! I've loved the Football girl stories and the Changes saga set in lovely Penmarris Cove(where o where is my penmarris cove?) Been away for awhile, but am working my way ,sideways it seems, through your latest stories. Running scared looks like yet another winner!

How did I not see this before?

Straight in at the deep end, so onto the next chapter.

Thanks, Sue.

Angharad