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----------=BigCloset Retro Classic!=----------
It all started with a bet...
You Bet!

By Kim Johns


Admin Note: Originally published on BigCloset TopShelf on Monday 11-15-2004 at 7:12 pm, this retro classic was pulled out of the closet, and re-presented for our newer readers. ~Sephrena


It had been another normal Friday night for us, differing only in the fact that Barry’s girl-friend, Jean, had accompanied us this time on the regular evening pub outing. The reason for that was because Barry was showing off as usual.

Barry had passed his driving test at the beginning of the week, and his father had presented him with the old family car, he having meanwhile bought a new one for himself.

Our friend had chauffeured us all in his new acquisition, and of course that meant that Jean had to come along as well. If you can’t show off to your girl-friend there’s just no justice in the world. Besides, as impressed as Harry and I might be, we’d only take the Mickey out of him. We actually didn’t mind Jean coming along, we had known her and her family for a long time, and we were all friends.

The evening had flown by in its usual manner, in a pub, although not our usual tavern. Because he now had wheels Barry had felt the need to explore, and so we ended up a long way from our normal watering holes. However, the beer was good, and bolstered up our conversation, and by the time last orders was called we all, Jean, Barry, Harry and I, had had more than enough to drink.

We clambered unsteadily into Barry’s chariot, Harry and me in the back, Jean in the front passenger seat and Barry behind the wheel, and set off in the general direction of our various homes. One thing about Barry, he didn’t mind taking us around, although that may also have been part of his showing off routine.

“When shall we three meet again?” Harry quoted ghoulishly.


Continue reading with Chapter 1

Comments

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apparently, my set up works to read this one, still. It opened right up for me. If anyone else is having problems, I can put it together as an rtf file and send it to you if you drop me a line at [email protected]

Houston we have a problem

I know that this is a repost but. What Encoding is this post with?
I have tried every one that there is and I'm getting really weird symbls even in the printer friendly page! Sorry I can't comment on the story its-self, but I can't read it!!!

"We" are not amused!

So, let it be written

So, let it Be Done!!
(Yul Bryner)

Konichiwa

Houston, England

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The problem was that story was posted with Microsoft Word smart quotes. Some browsers can display them, some can't. I've removed it from the front page because of the problem. I only freshened the date because it was the oldest complete series on TopShelf that hadn't been freshened yet and because no Friday post had yet been made. Gwen's Helpless Outlaw solves the second problem. Sorry, Kim, I no longer have the time to run such posts through code cleaners. :<

- Erin

= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.

Solution

Chris: The first two parts appear correctly on the Classic BigCloset, which is of course accessible at the top of this site. The rest of it, which was originally posted here, is fine, at least on my browser.

I'd read the first two parts at the old site, I think, but hadn't realized the story got finished. Enjoyable.

Eric

Houston?

Chris, you should be concerned to know that I have a story by that title. Worse yet, it concerns a cosplay delusional character..no he only thinks that he isn't dressing up like a girl. :)

Gwen

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