trying to figure out the whys and wherefores of the comments at Fictionmania, Princess. My own favorites from among my stories get virtually no comments, while ones I scraped off my shoe and formatted get more. And series, you can almost bet on there being a sharp drop off in comments. Look at Megan Campbell's SARAH CARERRA for example; while we here are getting increasingly into the fan speculation game, her comments at FM have dropped to nothing. Stories with erotic intent---no matter how unrealistic, unoriginal or poorly written---seem to get more comments (grateful praise from happy masturbators!) than, say ..... top notch science fiction or thoughtful masterpieces about transgender life. And then there's those comments over there where a single nut job decides your story is an abomination and you are scum and posts half a dozen comments under different stupid fake names telling you so, so you get lots of comments but of a kind no author wants. So anyway don't worry about it, it's not about your story but the strange vagaries of that particular site. ("Fuggedaboutit, Jake, it's Chinatown...")

My own thoughts on LETTER TO SANTA PART 2 are conflicted; pretty much what your one commenter Sissy Baby Paula said. Glad the mother & other evildoers got punished, and that she found happiness and a loving family, but sad that she got stuck with what she so clearly hadn't want, thanks to those super hormones; so it was like in a sense Mom won after all. And I was left wondering aren't there ANY stories where the feminized new girl goes back to being a boy? But this is criticizing a story just for being what it is instead of what the commentor wants/expected; something I try to avoid since it isn't really relevant or helpful; so I didn't comment. Well until now...
~~~hugs, Laika