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  1. Too technical?

    I suppose this can be a generalized question as well, but I do have a specific example this time. Is it possible to use descriptions that are too technical in nature to make sense to all but a few readers? My specific example is for the next chapter of my ...

    - 2011/08/22 - 10:32pm - 15 comments

  2. Open Your Heart

    Open Your Heart by Abigail Drew Meet Andrew Lee Pattengale, male. Or is he? When a supposed feminist housing group positions itself to buy Stonevale Apartments and Townhouses, where Drew works on salary as the only groundskeeper, his manager convinces him ...

    - 2012/08/28 - 8:24pm - 3 comments

  3. Open Your Heart- Chapter 2

    Abigail Drew Mature Subjects (pg15) Fiction Novel Chapter Transgender Crossdressing College / Twenties Contests, Deals, Bets or Dares Androgyny Real World Estrogen / Hormones Gynecomastia Posted by author(s) Open Your Heart by Abigail Drew Chapter Two “Bi ...

    - 2011/10/14 - 12:36pm - 9 comments

  4. 01) Official Chapter Readings

    While at work today I experienced an epiphany... I think the thought was something along the lines of I might actually be able to catch up with my reading of Angharad's Bike serial if I could just copy a buncha chapters to my phone in audio format an ...

    - 2011/09/24 - 7:17pm - 2 comments

  5. 02) Official Reading for Chapter 1 is up, Chapter 3 delayed.

    Subject says it all. If you don't want to go back to the story page: http://www.mediafire.com/?2od89xe980h4ujc In other news... Chapter 3 is going to be further delayed... Not sure when I'll be able to finish it, but I ended up running all over ...

    - 2011/09/24 - 7:17pm

  6. 001) Kids say the darndest things

    Ok, for the following to make any sense, a little background... I have gynaecomastia, it's not all that severe really, my breasts are only A-cup. I also have a lot of body hair, even for a guy, and my beard grows back in so fast I don't really b ...

    - 2011/09/24 - 5:42pm - 3 comments

  7. 01) Anyone like epic poetry?

    So I mentioned in a comment to something somewhere around here the other day that I wrote an epic poem once right? I've also mentioned that I've done strict milieu-driven stories with no main character- letting the reader slip into that role. I ...

    - 2011/09/24 - 7:21pm - 3 comments

  8. 002) Silly Motorists.

    OK, so yesterday and today I rode through the same exact speed monitor next to a school zone, at the same exact time. This is a 35mph zone when school's not either starting or ending. Yesterday, I get clocked going 31mph, today, 28mph. Yesterday, I t ...

    - 2011/09/24 - 5:42pm - 20 comments

  9. 03) Two options...

    So... Chapter 3 could possibly be done... maybe. I'm having difficulty deciding whether to post the chapter as-is, with only half as many words as the other two chapters so far and most other chapters are likely to have, and this, having taking over ...

    - 2011/09/24 - 7:18pm - 4 comments

  10. 04) OK, Chapter 3 tomorrow, hopefully.

    Since there will be a mostly harmless shower scene, I'm probably going to raise the rating to R for this chapter, simply because there will be some description of female nudity and bathing. Nothing overtly sexual, thanks to it being from Drew's ...

    - 2011/09/24 - 7:19pm - 1 comment

  11. Open Your Heart- Chapter 3

    Open Your Heart by Abigail Drew Chapter Three Janet set her burden down on the floor next to the tub and walked back out of the bathroom to the sounds of a rap remix of Canon in D using a keyboard and percussion. “We’re lookin’ on the sunny side,” incong ...

    - 2011/10/14 - 12:38pm - 15 comments

  12. Religious Characters In A Story- The Balance?

    When you have characters that come from a religious background in a story, how far should you go in describing their background and avoid coming off preachy? My character in Open Your Heart was raised LDS, he's gone pretty well inactive because he do ...

    - 2012/11/13 - 12:55am - 15 comments

  13. 003) On the Origins of My Account Name

    This entry is inspired in part by the thread on Character Names on the writer's forum. NOTE: This entry is now outdated, my account name at the time of original posting had been slicersv. This had also been back when I was still hiding from myself. A ...

    - 2011/10/14 - 12:53pm - 14 comments

  14. 05) Sorry... OYH will be delayed again.

    Better get used to it. Unfathomably, they seem to actually like my performance at work and plan to keep me around at least to first snow. It was originally supposed to be just a summer job, just till my brother got back on his feet, but he's back on ...

    - 2011/09/24 - 7:19pm

  15. 06) Herbal Hormone Manipulation

    Some of you may already know some of this. ...

    - 2011/09/24 - 7:20pm - 15 comments

  16. 07) Drew Pattengale told me something interesting...

    Drew Pattengale told me something very interesting at work today, but I'm not sharing. Ok, ok, I'll give you a hint. When I first started writing Open Your Heart, I had no idea what was causing Pattengale's hormonal imbalance. He told me at ...

    - 2011/09/24 - 7:20pm - 1 comment

  17. 004) My boobs are sore.

    Let's see how many hits that title gets. LOL. So yeah, my boobs are sore and tits extra puffy, have been all day today. No sign of strange lumps though, I have a feeling I'm about to grow some more. I also noticed something else over the last co ...

    - 2011/09/24 - 5:43pm - 12 comments

  18. 005) Tightened another notch in my belt...

    I now have 31" waist circumference, and 38" hip circumference. Interestingly, since the last time I measured, I lost exactly 1" at the waist, and gained it in the hips. This puts my Waist-to-Hip ratio at 0.82. My old masculine pot-belly is ...

    - 2011/09/24 - 5:44pm - 6 comments

  19. 006) ROFL... something in my spam box tickled me.

    So I just checked my email as part of my nightly rounds before going to bed, and as I cleared out the spam box, I casually glanced at it's contents, and intermixed were ads for boosting my boob size and ads for "increase your Testosterone". ...

    - 2011/09/24 - 5:44pm - 1 comment

  20. 007) OK, which ancestor typoed the last name!?

    I've always told people I'm not a bird, to help them remember how to spell my last name right... Well, apparently my changing hormones are deciding to make a liar of me. I've been noticing that I've been eating less and less, more and ...

    - 2011/09/24 - 5:45pm - 3 comments

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