Thanks for this new story. I really enjoyed reading it and liked the explanations and links to your other stories. I thought the style was a little more hurried than your previous tales,... lots more gaps in the timeline as you jump forward a few months occasionally. I appreciate that that was necessary to get it completed but it was noticeably different from the Drew or Danny stories, thats not meant as a criticism.

I was a bit surprised by the sudden escalation to violence against Erin though, it seemed to come out of nowhere and explode on the screen and then was gone.

Again thanks for the interesting read.