Rasufelle's Challenge.
Don't play with forces beyond your understanding. Re-Edited. Same day just later. The full punch line did not copy over. Sorry. I missed it.
A Bad Day
By POLYROBOTICS1
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
* * *
“Stop that.”
“But mommy that human is funny.”
“Did you do anything?”
“No, mommy, I just watching.”
“Then give me the dvr remote.”
“But mommy its funny.”
Comments
Not For Cellphone Readers
Don't try to read this on a cellphone or other device with a smll screen.
Time Loops
It sure does. Tantilizing. What's worse than a bad day? Temporal feedback is a mother.
I wonder if anyone will actually read this from start to finish.
~~~hugs, Laika
And remember...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ifLqzLEB3E0
Remember
Time loops like a boomerang, fruit loops like a banana. :)
Hugs,
Erin
= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.
= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.
A Bad Day
Thanks to a kid with a remote control and a fascination with a human. Wonder if he will do any editing?
May Your Light Forever Shine
May Your Light Forever Shine
First Thing That Came To Mind...
Is that i could see the repeated part used as a chorus/refrain for a sequel to "Paranoimia" by Art Of Noise, feat. Max Headroom.
All in all its a funny and scary premise, I'd hate to be caught in a loop like that for that many cycles. At the same time, maybe the repetition was overdone? I think 2 screen fulls would have been as effective as the 10 or so i counted. I found myself scrolling quite a ways to find the "punchline" as it were. Other than that, I liked it.
The only reason for time is so that everything doesn't happen at once - Albert Einstein
Perhaps it would help
If the loop made some sense. There are two apparently unconnected actions, no context, no idea what is going on.
KJT
"Being a girl is wonderful and to torture someone into that would be like the exact opposite of what it's like. I don’t know how anyone could act that way." College Girl - poetheather
"Life is not measured by the breaths you take, but by the moments that take your breath away.”
George Carlin
...
Ooooooooooooooookaaaaaaaaay. That was... interesting. Take the remote away from that child xD
I know who I am, I am me, and I like me ^^
Transgender, Gamer, Little, Princess, Therian and proud :D