Season of Change - Chapter 3

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Season of Change

by:
Elsbeth

There were only a few things in Harry Potter's life that never changed, he was the son of Lily and James Potter and that he was born a male. What happens when he discovers the truth.

Change

Disclaimer: I own nothing, all of it belong to J.K Rowling, I am just playing in her sandbox for a while.

Authors Note: AU: Its not my first fanfic but its my first Harry Potter, so I hope you enjoy it. The story starts at the end of the 5th Book.

Chapter 3

Nymphadora, Tonks along with four of her teammates, Apparated into the streets, on the north side of Diagon Alley, near Florean Fortescue's Ice Cream Parlor. Finding the shop already swarming with Aurors, she stepped inside, reporting to the Senior Auror in charge.

“Wotcher, Savage, what happened?”

“We are still taking dispositions but looks like five Death Eaters tried to kidnap Mr. Fortescue.”

“For what, the man sells ice-cream.” Tonks looked around noticing the smashed windows and holes in the walls. “Looks like he put up a hell of a fight.”

“Wasn’t him actually, he was stunned for most of it. The young lady in the blue robes over in the corner managed to take care of them.”

“What all five…I know her.” Tonks' eyes opened wide, recognizing her as the girl who she had seen at Privet Drive.

“You do?”

“Well, we haven’t been formally introduced,” Tonks explained.

“I see, well that young Witch is Alya Cassiopeia Black, from what I heard she is now Head of House Black.”

“Head of House?” Tonks whispered. She had been told Harry Potter had been made Sirius’ Heir, so who was this girl? “So what happened?”

“According to Mr. Fortescue, five men entered his store, stunning him after proclaiming that He-Who-Must-Not-Be-Named required his presence. According to witnesses, the five Death Eaters immediately turned their wands on the two women. After dodging several AKs and transfiguring a couple of tables to block the ones aimed at Miss Malkin, Miss Black cast a Bombardia on the store room door.”

“Did she miss?”

The Auror laughed. “Doubtful, the resulting explosion injured two assailants rather seriously, a third fatally when a piece of wood nicked an artery in his neck. The man simply bled out before he hit the floor. The last two attackers were taken down with bone-breakers, although one of them also had a rather nasty looking knife wound to the leg.”

“Knife wound?”

“Miss Black threw a knife across the room hitting him in the thigh when he attempted to attack Miss Malkin.”

“Her mother must have taught her that,” Tonks said while looking at the young woman.

“Her mother?” Auror Savage said surprised.

“Black women usually have a knife or two on them.” Tonks knew her mother favored a long handled Scottish sgian-dubh that she kept in her boot. “Keeps away unwanted suitors.”

“Right.” Savage chuckled.

Grinning, she pointed to the two girls. “Do you mind…?”

“No, not at all, Tonks. Keep em’ company if you will. It’s hard enough having to deal with an investigation while trying to keep a Head of House happy.”

As she drew closer, the pink haired Auror watched a very happy looking shop owner join them.

“Please Mr. Fortescue, no more; it’s going to come out of our ears.” Margret Malkin laughed as a large bowl of ice cream was set down in front of them.

“That’s fine, child, but keep your money.” He smiled at the two gratefully. “Come on by anytime, my treat.” Mr. Fortescue nodded to Tonks as he went back to cleaning his shop.

“That’s very sweet of him, Margret,” Alya said before acknowledging the pink hair. “Madam Auror, is it possible for my friend to go home?”

Taking pity on the girl who looked uncomfortable sitting in the middle of the destroyed ice-cream parlor, Tonks smiled. “I don’t see a problem, as long as she’s available to speak to one of our Aurors if they have any more questions.”

“Thank you.”

Tonks nodded then turned to Alya. “I’m sorry Miss, but I believe that you will have to remain.”

“That’s not a problem, just let me see my friend off.”

As the two walked towards the door, Margret leaned forward hugging the raven-haired beauty. She seemed surprised for a moment, before returning the embrace.

“Thank you for saving my life.” Margret sniffed while holding on to her young friend.

Nodding, Alya whispered. “Floo me if you want to talk, OK. I’ll come right on over.”

Margret gave a smile, before Apparating away.

As she returned to the shop, Alya wondered when fighting for one’s life became so commonplace. She knew Margret hadn’t taken almost being murdered well, but to Alya, it was just another day in Diagon Alley.

“Do you mind if I have a seat, Miss?”

“No please.” Pointing to a spoon, Alya said. “As you can see we have plenty of ice-cream left over if you’re interested.”

“No thank you. I’m sorry, I haven’t formally introduced myself. My name is Nymphadora Tonks.”

“Alya Cassiopeia Black, but I believe you knew that already. So what can I do for you, cousin?”

Smiling, knowing the young girl would obviously know of their family connection, she leaned forward to whisper. “I saw you at….”

Suddenly, Tonks reached for her wand but relaxed as Alya cast some privacy wards around the two of them.

“Now what were we talking about again?”

“Sorry…yes…I saw you at Privet Drive.”

“I see?” Alya reached for her spoon taking a small bite of ice cream into her mouth.

“It was you, wasn’t it?” When Alya didn’t reply, Tonks continued. “Miss, please tell me where Harry went? We’re all really worried about him.”

Ayla took one late bite of the peanut butter and chocolate ice cream before setting down the spoon. “After the last couple of years, he has his doubts.”

Tonks looked confused not understanding what she meant about that.

“Anyway, cousin, I assure you, he is perfectly safe.”

“That damn invisibility cloak of his, he walked right past me when you left Privet Drive, didn’t he.” Nymphadora groaned. She realized she should have stopped the two of them before they stepped onto the Knight Bus.

Alya just shrugged, taking another small bite of ice cream. She couldn’t believe it. After escaping from Privet Drive, she still ended up dueling Death Eaters and interrogated by an Order member.

“12 Grimmauld Place” Tonks began.

“Nymphadora, as much as Harry likes you, I suggest you keep that thought to yourself,” Alya said somewhat testily but wanted to laugh at Tonk’s face, as she struggled at hearing her hated name. “You and your friends will find the wards of my home are not as welcoming as they once were.”

Alya didn’t think they would test them, but it didn’t matter as she planned to reapply the Fidelius Charm when she got the chance.

Tonks frowned unhappily before looking down at Ayla’s hand. “Even if you are Bellatrix’s daughter, you wouldn’t be Head of House.”

Alya laughed. “I am not Aunt Bellatrix’s daughter, Nymphadora.”

Tonks made a face again but didn’t correct her. “Then who? Regulus?”

Banishing the privacy wards around them, Alya still didn’t reply as a handful of Aurors approached. “I hope everything went well.”

Auror Savage smiled congenially. “Yes Miss, witnesses easily corroborated your story, although we might have some more questions at another time. Also, if it wouldn’t be an imposition, may we look at that dagger of yours?”

As Head of House, Tonks knew that Alya had the right to refuse so was surprised when she simply nodded. Slapping her hand on her thigh, several of Tonk’s colleagues jumped back as the knife suddenly appeared in the young girl’s hand.

“Thank you, Miss.” An older Auror stepped forward, not bothering to hold the blade himself. “Auror Savage, it’s as I expected. The wound contained lingering bits of magic that match the blade. It’s most definitely enchanted but not dark. It’s a beautiful knife, Egyptian if I am not mistaken.”

“Yes, I believe so,” Alya answered remembering all the interesting items inside the Black family vault, including a pair of beautifully crafted Egyptian daggers.

According to Bogrod, the knives were a gift from Septrum Black, who brought them back from the Fourth Crusade and given them to his wife Isabelle on their wedding day. For some reason, Alya had felt drawn to the pair.

Sliding the blade into her boot, Alya mused about one of the nice things about being a Head of House; the Aurors couldn’t search her without her consent. If they did, they would have been surprised to find that she also carried two more blades and her old wand.

Even with it on her, however, she didn’t know how much use it would be. With her old wand becoming harder to use since leaving Privet Drive, Alya had been lucky to pick up a new one before today.

Although Ash seemed ordinary enough wood, she had been surprised at her new wand’s core, never hearing of one with hair from an Egyptian flying cat. Looking at the hole in the wall that used to be a door, one couldn’t deny the results though.

“Thank you for remaining once more. If we have any questions, we will be sure to Owl you.”

Aya smiled. “I’m glad everything turned out as well as it did, Auror Savage.”

“Miss Alya can we…?” Tonks stepped forward.

“I’m sorry cousin, perhaps another time.” Alya gave her best smile before calling Kreacher who touched her hand before the two vanished, leaving a very frustrated Tonks behind.

+++++++

“Evening, Nanna.” Alya smiled at the portrait of Walburga Black before taking a seat on an old Victorian love seat.

“Good evening child, I’m surprised you didn’t Apparate yourself.” The voice of Walburga Black said warmly, which would have surprised those who had stood in front of her portrait before.

“I still get a little sick. My instructor told me that might happen as I took the abbreviated course.”

“Well keep practicing, I remember Bellatrix getting ill regularly when she first started to learn how to Apparate.”

Alya nodded, she had been happy to discover, as Head of House, she could get her Apparating license early. The Black Family account manager even managed to get her a spot in the next class, taught at the Department of Magical Transportation the next morning.

The image of Walburga Black could see that something else was bothering her granddaughter. “Did you not have a good time with your friend? You had been looked forward spending the day with her.”

Alya nodded and then sighed. “I killed a man today.”

The portrait made an anxious face for a moment. “Explain.”

Taking a deep breath, Alya began describing the fight in the ice-cream parlor.

Her reintroduction to Walburga Black had been memorable, to say the least. Like Kreacher, Walburga Black believed at first that she was a young Bellatrix Black. When Alya told the woman that she was Sirius’ daughter and Head of House she expected the witch to start screaming. Instead, the two of them had a conversation long into the night.

Her grandmother had been devastated to learn that all of her children and most of her house were now dead at the hands of Voldemort. It was about that point Alya broke down. It was too much, the transformation, the truth about her parents and the death of Sirius. Once she could breathe again, Alya told her grandmother everything. Starting with the death of James and Lilly Potter, her years with the Dursleys and her school year experiences, she left nothing out.

Daughter of Pollux Black and Irma Crabbe, Walburga Black was taught at a young age to look down on anyone but a Pureblood Witch or Wizard; she had been both horrified and amazed as she listened to her granddaughter. Part of her could not understand how a half-blood had claimed the Head of House until she listened further. As Alya told her story, Walburga knew the child was a Black. There was a hint of iron in her eyes which, even with all that had happen, remained strong. However, even iron would become brittle when too much heat was applied.

She knew that the Black family magic that permeated the walls had already welcomed Alya Black, becoming part of her as much as she was becoming part of it. It was at that moment; Walburga Black vowed to help her grandchild. To give her the tools to which she could become one of the greatest Heads of House and in turn, revenge themselves upon those who had come to harm the Black family.

“I am very proud of you, my dear.” Walburga Black spoke kindly to the young girl who sat there nervously, expecting that her newfound grandmother would start hating her.

‘Really…I thought.” Alya sat back hiding her tears.

“You did not set out to kill that man. No, you protected yourself and your friend. Frankly, I do not understand what Mr. Fortescue did to warrant the Dark Lords attention…”

“He sells ice-cream.”

“Indeed child and because of you, he can go home to his family. Now, why don’t you take a bath and I’ll have Kreacher bring you some hot chocolate and biscuits for afterward.”

“Thank you, Nanna.” With a half-smile, Alya grabbed a small red book before heading upstairs.

The bribe of hot chocolate and cookies had somewhat become a joke between the two of them although at the start it wasn't particularly funny. After the meeting with the Goblins, the chances of it all being a prank was obviously non-existent. In turn, it meant Harry Potter was actually a girl.

She didn’t realize it, but she had compartmentalized it all. Part of her enjoyed the thought of running away, of a new adventure, the other more rational part believed it to be an elaborate gag and in the end, she would end up spending the rest of her summer at the Burrow as Harry.

The next morning, those walls came tumbling down. For most boys, getting a glimpse of a naked girl would be the high point of their day. For Alya, it was a slap of reality. With that, she refused to change clothes, bathe and if possible not use the toilet. That, of course, proved impossible, nature dictated otherwise. However, she did it in the dark.

Her grandmother had other ideas, allowing Alya to wallow in her own filth for a couple of days before she acted. Alya was stubborn, Walburga Black was just as stubborn and poor Kreacher was stuck in the middle. In the end, Alya saw reason, mostly because it was rather disgusting.

Now Walburga Black helped Alya on what it meant to be a woman of the Black family, how to dress, how to behave in certain situations and the other million and one things that girls already knew by her age. Still, on occasion, Alya felt like a voyeur when looking in a mirror.

During the time she refused to bathe, Ayla discovered the little red book hidden away in the Black Library. Inside, it talked about a ritual called the Mutatio-femina. An obscure bit of Black family magic created in the middle ages as a result of the Black Death. According to family history, with so many men of the family falling to the plague, Gaxcrux Black created the little bit of magic to make sure that all of his heirs would be males.

Beyond the whole aspect of Sirius having an affair with her mother, neither she nor her grandmother understood why he performed the ritual or how Alya ended up with the Potters.

Nor did it answer the ultimate question, why did she suddenly turn from Harry Potter back into Alya Black. A failed ritual would more often kill the fetus, not suddenly change the baby fifteen years later back into a girl.

*Edited 4/14/17 Eslebth*

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missing something?

Sadarsa's picture

I had to go back and re-read chapter 2 and it still didn't sit right... there's this huge gap of events. Did you post chapter 4 by accident and label it 3?

You're missing the trip to the vaults, then the ice cream parlor.. the fight.... a full chapter is missing here.

~Your only Limitation is your Imagination~

Jumb back and forth

Elsbeth's picture

Actually, I jumped ahead, then went back in a memory. Of course sometimes it works better in my mind, then on paper :) The only real significance about the trip to the vault was the daggers.(there will be more of the visit later)

Thanks for reading

-Elsbeth

Is fearr Gaeilge briste, ná Béarla clíste.

Broken Irish is better than clever English.

you keep teasing

us with events as flashbacks. the chapter are so short (hint hint). can't wait for more.
thanks

Tease

Elsbeth's picture

I have been told I'm a tease :) but yes, although the next chapter will be about twice as long as its going be covering a few things mainly other people reactions to his disappearance. Thanks for reading -Elsbeth

Is fearr Gaeilge briste, ná Béarla clíste.

Broken Irish is better than clever English.

You got me too!

I went back thinking I'd missed a chapter or something. :) I'm enjoying this re-imagining of HP.
Hugs
Grover
PS: I first thought about Sirius changing into Padfoot might have something to do with Ayla's change, but no that is a learned talent. It still might be related since we have to remember Sirius was very skilled in that area.

This is just confusing

Um... so Harry got into a fight with Death Eaters. Met Tonks, but didn't talk more to her than necessary. Moved to Grimmauld Place and made the portrait of Sirius mother his/her confidante - which suddenly isn't an insane screaming harridan. Why?

That mutation femina thing sounds like a ritual that kills all "female" sperm, not something to turn female foeti into male ones...

insane screaming harridan

Elsbeth's picture

Grumble, grumble, see thats what I get for trying to play with my literary style :) i went forward, then back in memories. guess i could drop in a chapter, anyway -

Timeline:

Harry turns into Alya
Alya goes to leaky cauldron
Alya buys things
Alya goes to Goblins/Vault
Alya goes to 12 Grimmauld Place; magic welcomes her as head of house. Sirius mother finds out *all* of her children are dead and most of the Blacks by Voldemort. Note in canon she is not a follower of old Tom, she likes his ideas though. Of course, her son then tries to escape from old snake face and he gets murdered, her husband then dies most likely from Voldemort as Orion no longer wanted to contribute, then finally Sirius is killed. She realizes what following the Dark Lord has cost her and as of now, she decides to help Alya (not the first fanfic that has that - check Passageways)
Alya decides not to bathe, change clothes nor use the bathroom - doesn't work
Alya finds the little red book about transformation, translation is something like mutate/change female
Alya spends the day with Margret
Alya and Margret get attacked by Death Eaters
Alya and Tonks talk - she has no desire to tell Tonks what is going on, yet
Alya goes back home, and speaks with Nanna

Another good TG Harry story

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8455342/1/A-Stranger-in-your-ow...

-Elsbeth

Is fearr Gaeilge briste, ná Béarla clíste.

Broken Irish is better than clever English.

And Magrgaret is...?

Gr8tS4g3's picture

Sorry, I'm totally baffled, who is this Margaret girl? Also, I might be wrong here but isn't Sirius's brother called Relugas? It is my understanding that JK named many of her characters after street names from the area around Morningside where she lived. I'm a Postman in Morningside so I know most of the streets in that area and there is a Relugas Street.

The Nature of Monkey is Irrepressible!

Margret

Elsbeth's picture

Madam Malkins daughter seen in last chapter, nope it's regulus like the star.

http//harrypotter.wikia.com/wiki/Regulus_Black

Thanks for reading

-Elsbeth

Is fearr Gaeilge briste, ná Béarla clíste.

Broken Irish is better than clever English.

Trying to put my thoughts in a halfway coherent form

Grumble, grumble, see thats what I get for trying to play with my literary style :) i went forward, then back in memories. guess i could drop in a chapter, anyway -

That's really difficult to do. I'm having trouble with that myself in a story I'm writing. Actually it has sort of delayed me for the last two months or so...

Alya goes to 12 Grimmauld Place; magic welcomes her as head of house. Sirius mother finds out *all* of her children are dead and most of the Blacks by Voldemort. Note in canon she is not a follower of old Tom, she likes his ideas though. Of course, her son then tries to escape from old snake face and he gets murdered, her husband then dies most likely from Voldemort as Orion no longer wanted to contribute, then finally Sirius is killed. She realizes what following the Dark Lord has cost her and as of now, she decides to help Alya (not the first fanfic that has that - check Passageways)

That woman is a bit slow in her head? I mean Sirius was already the last of her family and I severely doubt the man told his dear old behated momma about the Alya-change. Just saying... The best explanation for such a sudden personality face heel turn I've read so far was that the picture was cursed by the horcrux (or Dumbledore in an EVIL Dumbledore fic). Not sure why you're Draco-in-leather-pantsing her.

Wait. The not bathing, not showering not nothing thing happened before the Death-eater attack? I thought it was afterwards.

Who is Margret?

Another good TG Harry story

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8455342/1/A-Stranger-in-your-ow...

Not sure if I should read this. Considering that the author proclaims his or her undying hatred for Ginny Weasley I fear that story will be more about bashing Ginny than TG stuff. And I loathe bashing.

All in all the story has been rather confusing so far. I'm simply going to list what bugged me.

  • Chapter one: You transform Harry without much drama (which is weird since that is a very appropriate place for drama) and drop a lot of fanon one liners on the unsuspecting readers.
  • Chapter two: Alya (where did you get that name from anyway) goes shopping and begins to realize this may be a lot more real than expected. I figure this was supposed to be somewhat dreamy, with Alya simply following the flow until she realizes everything is really real. The problem is that doesn't work. She seemed to decisive, to happy and too clear to be dreamy, but on the other hand her actions didn't quite compute. It's like Harry is possessed.
  • Chapter three: Time jump out of nowhere. Apparently Alya defeated some Deatheaters, made friends, doesn't like to talk to Tonks and the old Black Harridan is her new BFF. Oh and she got a sudden bout of body anciousness that resulted in not washing for a few days. I suppose that's supposed to show her Angst about the new situation. It seems like a mostly silly over the top reaction instead. It's like her personality just changes sometimes.

I'm not sure where you plan to go with this story, but right now it seems like you're forcing the plot too much. Either Alya is under the imperius acting out some sick instructions, or I don't know what.

There is such a big break between my idea of the character Harry Potter and the character that is shown as Alya Black that maybe this would have worked better as somekind of self-insert. Sorry if this sounds really harsh, but it's been bugging me pretty much since the first chapter. Alya just does things. She thinks things. She decides things. She rarely feels in a way I can actually understand. I rarely learn why. You drop information and statements on us/me without really showing us why Harry feels/thinks that way.
Simply put: The heart of the story is buried under the progression of the plot and dropped fanon.

I mean spend 2000 words more on the first chapter and you have a good, maybe great introduction. I want to feel Harry's rage at Dumbledore, his disappointment with his friends, his loathing of the wizarding masses. His disgust of the Dursleys. I don't just want to get told he feels that way.
Immerse the reader deeper into Harry/Alya in the second chapter and keep them guessing. Alya just doing whatever people suggest. No real plan of her own. Maybe wandering into Madam Malkins', with no real idea what she wants and simply doing what the shop-mistress suggests. Maybe someone calls out to her, pulling her into a wizarding cosmetics shop and only when she realizes Ollivander has disappeared she also takes the situation more serious. Pincing herself she realizes that she might not be dreaming. Then she goes to talk to the Goblins and realizes how serious this is. No stupid prank of the Weasley twins. Seriously serious buisiness.
The third chapter should probably be about her having a breakdown somewhere in Diagon alley and meeting her new friend. Or her going to Grimmault Place and uncursing (it's certainly more believable than a sudden change of mind after her hated son dies - maybe it's even Sirius fault) the old Harridan.

Argh... sorry if this got a bit ranty, but this story has great potential. You've avoided a lot of problems that inheritance fics usually have. The general idea is great. But right now I get a deja-vu at every turn. You don't need to force changes, just let them happen on their own. Book six's plot has so many little things where even a small difference can change a lot. There's really no need to have Harry stumble into fights with Death Eaters. Just being a bit smarter about things or simply not being at the same place at the same time would be enough to totally derail book six. I mean Alya will probably not learn about Draco's secret plan this way. She'll probably be able to help her two friends get together without all that really stupid drama. Slughorn may not go to Hogwarts at all, or if he does he'll most likely die from Draco's poison. (Since there is no love potion for Ron to take...)

Anyway, I hope this helps a bit, especially if you haven't finished writing the story yet. I guess reading so many fanfics has made me a picky reader :)

Thank you for writing,
Beyogi

No worries

Elsbeth's picture

No worries, its all good that's why fanfic is so hard as everyone has an idea on how things should be or could be. :) The pace is perhaps just a little too fast, which is easily fixed

Thanks for reading

-Elsbeth

Is fearr Gaeilge briste, ná Béarla clíste.

Broken Irish is better than clever English.

Yay! Two new-to-me stories for me to read

WillowD's picture

Yay. Two new (to me) Harry Potter fan fictions to read. Passageways and A Stranger In Your Own Body. I have read an impressive amount of Potter fan fiction in the past year or two and am eager for more.

And, yay, Passageways is about Bellitrix Lestrange. For some totally not strange reason I have developed a fascination about Bellitrix after reading Season of Change a few times. (Yeah, that's a spoiler. If anyone objects I can remove this minor spoiler from this comment.)

I miss you Elsbeth and hope you get to read this comment some day.

By the way, Passageways may be found at https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8378840/1/Passageways

By george, I think I've got it!

Well, most of it anyway! (LOL). Thanks Els! I'm still following along. Sounds like Alya has much to learn yet, but possesses the will to accomplish it. Of coarse being "Head of House" will aid greatly to her credibility, being so young and all. Elsbeth, I'm obviously not a fan of HP, but I am enjoying this. Thank you sweetie! Loving Hugs Talia

The knife

Podracer's picture

In the parlour was even more pointed for me after the Alia comment I made on chapter 2. Prescient or what :O

I'm not commenting on the plot Ping-Pong, I can usually consign any non-sequiturs to the "aura of mystery" file, like the song lyric I can't quite make out.

"Reach for the sun."