Okay I know everyone is wanting the next installment of Super Soldier, but this short story sitting unfinished for so long due to real life issues scaring my muse so badly she wouldn't come out form under the bed no matter what I offered to write. okay so the muse wasn't the only issue. most the time I was so tired I fell asleep at the keyboard when I tried to start writing.
The muse is back and it looks like she is trying to make up for lost time. I've put more words to paper (well virtual paper that is) in the last week than I have in months. For Better or Worse is finished, although the twists the muse threw at me has forced me to split the last part up too keep it along the same posting length as the previous installments.
Oh and if anyone wishes to proofread/edit. Jerri who was a great editor for me had to quit due to changing jobs so if anyone is interested in taking her place PM me.
While proof reading for spelling and grammatical errors is good, I really want someone that is ready to do more than just that. someone that can point out a section and say "hey this part is confusing can you explain this better?" or 'this section is total crap! we don't need every detail of the building they are in, get on with the plot!' and even suggestions on what you feel the character should act like or things of that nature.