Gone Away

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Gone Away

by Joyce Melton

Gone away, gone away,
Over the mountain, behind the hill,
To a lost and lonely day
Across the river, beyond the rill
Gone Away, Gone away.

In the green dawn we will prosper and grow,
Loved and cherished in the soft morning glow,
All the long day through sunlight we share
The burdens we carry, our toil and our care.

Then evening comes and night follows soon,
Gone are the dainties we fancied at noon
We dwindle like candles, light falters and fails,
Our single hope lingers in stories and tales.

Gone away, gone away,
Over the mountain, behind the hill,
To a lost and lonely day
Across the river, beyond the rill
Gone Away, Gone away.

Springtime is golden 'neath flowering trees
Our stories begin with hope in the breeze
Our summer of glories, so bright and so blue
Sweet blossom of love, so soft and so true.

Autumn's tooth bites at the height of our pride
Fruits of our labor have frozen and died
Still, we are able till winter withers all,
Only peace we can hope will follow our fall.

Gone away, gone away,
Over the mountain, behind the hill,
To a lost and lonely day
Across the river, beyond the rill
Gone Away, Gone away.

Comments

Very sweet

And poignant. Time doesn't heal, but it does dull the pain, if just a bit.

Hugs to you.

Karen J.

"Being a girl is wonderful and to torture someone into that would be like the exact opposite of what it's like. I don’t know how anyone could act that way."

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"Life is not measured by the breaths you take, but by the moments that take your breath away.”
George Carlin

reading too much?

kristina l s's picture

Dear Joyce (nee Erin)
I hope that's what I'm doing here, but given many of your recent blogs showing your situation and more to the point your mothers health... Well this poem seems to be touching on a loss we hoped not to see. If I am over-reading things it is a lovely touching piece. If it is what it seems to be you have my thoughts and love to be at ease and feel peace.
Either way... god bless and look after yourself
serious hugs

Kristina

POV

erin's picture

I tried to write the poem from my mom's POV.

Hugs,
Erin

= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.

Spot on,

Angharad's picture

You capture the moment beautifully if a little poignantly.

Do take care of yourself.

Angharad.

Angharad