Feedback, reviews and scribbling

It's snowing outside and I had some time to spare so I checked out some of the reviews on Amazon for my works.

Overall they are pretty positive, a couple clearly don't get my intent with plot lines but hey ho, you can't please everyone all of the time....

One thing that certainly did come through though was some enthusiasm for the various stories to continue. Easier said than done of course, i'd love to continue all the series in a never ending output but let's face it, that's a lot of effort and there are other things going on in my life besides writing!

I'm upset with Sharon

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I'm really upset with Sharon.

Apparently, she told my mom that she's in serious financial difficulty with many bills not paid.

According to what my mom said, she has been stretching herself too thin by paying for counseling for Sam, and now is in trouble.

Of course, mom wants to help, but she cant do much when she's desperately trying to drop down to part time since at 80 working full time is getting to be a bit much.

And of course I can do anything since I'm not working at all.

Sighs ...

1-900-HOT-HOTT

I'm sure that you have seen an ad or two (or twenty) for one of those 900 phone services. They usually have neat names like 1-900-HOT-HOTT, which is a real number that a teenage neighbor called twice on my garage phone before I caught him. I never could understand why someone would pay $25 for the first four minutes of talk when for a smaller monetary investment you could go to a bar somewhere and buy some floozy a few drinks and get the talk live, or possibly something more if you have a golden tongue.

Barbie's Doll ~ Part 8


What lengths would you go to, to help a pretty girl struggling with her past? Especially, if you knew there was the potential to be more than ‘just friends’?


 

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Barbie’s Doll

By Shauna

Copyright© 2017 Shauna
All Rights Reserved.
(All image originals sourced from Creative Commons)



Street Child 2 Chp. 4

Vivid Dream Reality Chapter 13

Chapter 13 Andi's POV

I awoke to Myra calling out that it was time for Taigoa practice. I took a deep breath and immediately knew I was back to normal. My body felt right, moved right. This wave of happiness went through me. I looked next to me to see Vee looking at me carefully. We both smiled at each other and then got up and out to do our morning practice. Vee led today, it would help her memorise the steps. I concentrated on doing the steps whilst getting the breathing right.

Back again. Looking for an editor really quick.

Looking for an editor for a story I just chopped out for Bill Hart's SRU Universe that had been ruminating in my brain for a while, it's Pop culture related.
I may have some other things coming down the pipe for you to look at as well.

...You Are Cordially Invited Story 3 Part 3

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The family returns home and adjusts to life as both fiances and newlyweds. Wilson finds out he can't influence everyone. Noah gets a reality check. The Manchester Smiths change forever over the next year.

A Rose in the Cracks- Chapter 3

Trying to get there before Santa

Hello, folks. You may not remember me or even know me, I've been quiet so long. It's been difficult to get in here because of work and family.

Anyway, I've been working my way through the plot of a new story, a Christmas story, and puzzling out the pieces. For me, developing a new story idea is about answering questions like What happened just before this? and Why did they hide the key? and Where did what's-his-name go and why?

Tommy - The Trials and Tribulations of a Girl? - Chapter 21


Tommy
The Trials and Tribulations of a Girl?

A Novel By Teddie S.

Copyright © 2017 Teddie S.
All Rights Reserved.


Chapter 21

Kai, the bonfire, and the Medicine Man.

There I was looking like a Navajo girl dressed in her finest clothes and jewelry, and sitting by the bonfire. My hair was no longer blond, it was black. There were maybe thirty or forty people there, all guests of the resort. Everyone was enjoying the fire, and I was feeling the same thing that I've felt every time I’ve been to the bonfire. Something that I can’t explain. But tonight it was stronger.

TG Techie Blog 97: The Stage Tech Starts Soon, I Promise

Well if you're reading TG Techie, (and if you are, thank you. You should comment more though) for the techie stuff, I'm so sorry but it's still coming. Aisling as a character is almost defined enough to move into it. Just three more chapters, and the stuff starts on the fourth. So two weeks out.

Mourning Dew -- Chp. 1

Almost six years ago, Camille Jean Laignaux was kidnapped, ripped from her family, and taken into Mexico to be imprisoned and molded by a monster and a sociopath into a weapon the monster called Mr. Jack will gladly sacrifice and use in order to seek posthumous revenge on his parent’s having abandoned his sister and causing her untimely death. Will Camille’s triumphant return to her loving family be destroyed because her secret is revealed as she is sacrificed on the altar of a madman’s vengeance or will someone be able to stop him in time to save her from a fate worse than death?

Mourning Dew


by
AuPreviner

Copyright © 2017 by AuP reviner

Vivid Dream Reality Chapter 11

Chapter 11 Still Vee's POV

I made the introductions and soon we were all seated.

“So, what can I help you with?” Scott asked.

“This does involve my great grandfathers will, but there are some complications that I need to explain first.” I turned to Andi. “Everything is confidential. I think we need to tell him about the game and what has happened.”

“OK.” Andi said a bit unsure.

“Do you want me to tell him?”

“Yes, please.”

Shadowsblade: A Christmas Tale

Shadowsblade a Christmas Tale: Written by Shadowsblade

Created for war and forged in pain, dealing with demons within and without.

A Christmas vacation and a world of toy deliveries saved

In this chapter

Christmas

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December 24th,
3:20 in the afternoon

...You Are Cordially Invited Story 3 Part 2

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Sienna and Poppy take a big step in the budding relationship as they move in together and fly west to Boston for the wedding. Dora endures the ladies' fittings and their mothers enjoying a day together.

Interpol Heartburn –chp20


Interpol Heartburn

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After two years of heavy hard hitting make or break cases and a little arm twisting Maria as take her family to Sicily on vacation. Unknown to them or the OICA a deadly ghost from the past would rear its ugly bringing with it death and destruction.

by Snowfall and Jessie Wolf.

Vivid Dream Reality Chapter 10

Chapter 10 Vee's POV

I sighed as I realised we were back in the real world. We were holding hands lying on my double bed. Andi pulled his/her hand away and we both took off our headsets and then just lay there. I had a bit of sadness that I wouldn't have Andi's wonderful elf body to play with, but mostly I just felt an emotional bliss. Andi and I had really clicked. He/she was my first love and I think he/she will be my only. We just had to get over the hurdle regarding gender and that needed time more than anything.

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