Ive updated this story yet again. For some reason I keep writing on this one. Its kinda disturbing.

Tell me what you guys think so far I am trying to present the story from the former boys point of view. In case your wondering he has experienced a involuntary natures way of srs. A huge stick shoved up there pinning everything in place with obviously torn and bleeding skin and then healing around the stick before it comes out like a splinter would. Yes there was infections and what not but the boy hasn't been told of that yet.

I am trying to write what I see in my head and the feelings associated with it to the best of my ability. However no one seems to be commenting on it so I really don't know how well I am actually doing.