I Bump Back Part-4

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I Bump Back
Part Four

by:
Enemyoffun

Misty Curtis' punishment is almost at an end
and her life might finally go back to normal,

that is if Fate doesn't interfere.


Author's Note:So guess who's back! Not only is this a new Misty chapter, its also the return of me! I'd like to thank everyone who understood my need for a break and I'm glad to be. I did a lot of thinking and brainstorming in my time. I came to the conclusion that I'm going to be putting the DRU on the back burner but that I wanted to finish this and Kelly's sequel before I stopped writing the DRU. I have some new stuff planned in the future that I'm really excited for :)I'd like to thank djkauf for the excellent editing.~Enemyoffun.


 
 
FOUR
 
Possibly, Found?

When I opened my eyes, I thought for sure the last few days had been just some horrible nightmare and everything was back to the way things were meant to be. The woman in the bar, turning into a slutty girl, waking up in the motel room, all the crap at school…everything. I mean this wasn’t some fucked up movie; guys didn’t turn into girls overnight. The idea of it was the craziest fucking thing in the world. I mean sure there were surgeries and things for people who wanted that stuff but I was Mike Curtis, I was more guy than most of the guys at school. Me turning into a girl, which was the craziest fucking thing in the world.

Then I opened my eyes and the evidence was staring right at me.

Two bumps on my chest.

The nightmare continues.

However, it was continuing in a very strange place. Looking around I was a bit disoriented at first. The room I was in had white walls and bright lights. I blinked a few times; then ran my tongue over my dry lips. I was on a cot, the soft surface the only thing that was comforting me at the moment. Sitting up, I saw once again the offending foreign bodies on my chest. I tried not to think about the skimpy little shirt I was wearing nor the denim skirt. Like I said, new me was a slut. A slut whose wardrobe was severely lacking. All part of whatever fucked up punishment this was. Why didn’t that bitch just kill me, why’d she to do this to me. Sure I didn’t want to die but the alternative…

What the hell am I thinking? Life was more important than death even if it meant living a fucked up one now.
I took a better look around the room. Besides the overwhelming whiteness, I noticed the tacky Feel Good posters on the walls, the bookshelf in the corner, the filing cabinets and the desk. There was a rather large window, the blinds up, allowing a great deal of light to pour into the room. The nurse’s office, I’d been here once or twice. I sprained my ankle last year during practice and the coach sent me here. Then there was the year before when I nearly broke my finger during gym class. Of course, back then the nurse hadn’t been so hot.

The door on the far side of the room started to open.

Speaking of hot nurse…

Nurse Williams was an eleven on the scale. She had perfect everything---hair, boobs, body and face----the whole packet. It helped a lot that she always seemed to flaunt it without trying. The pants she wore were tight but not too much and her tops always seemed to show off just enough cleavage to tease. Today was no different, though the white doctor’s coat seemed to throw things off a bit. It didn’t shatter the illusion but it didn’t help. It was just a shame that there wasn’t some kind of school dress code for the nurse because I could only imagine how good she would look in one of those cute white outfits.

“Good afternoon Miss Curtis” she said with a smile, slipping into the chair nearby.

The way she said “miss” made me want to kiss her. There was no content in voice like most of the other adults around me. Even when my father talked to me, it was in a tone that said he loved me but was repulsed too. It was a bit unsettling and to tell you the truth, it was starting to make me want to jump in front of a bus.

“What am I doing here?”
I tried to remember what happened but things were a bit of a blur. The last thing I could remember was going into the girl’s bathroom in tears. If I ever saw that fucking bastard Jason again I was going to run his ass over with my new car---well new old car.

“What’s the last thing you remember?”

There was no way I was going to tell her what that son of a bitch tried to do to me so I simply shrugged. “I was on my way out of the bathroom,” I said, hoping it was enough.

She nodded. She had a pad of paper with her and wrote something down. “One of your fellow students found you passed out in the hallway. Do you remember that?”

Now that she mentioned it, some things were starting to come back to me. I was getting vague recollections. Something about Tracy Locke in the bathroom then leaving, feeling really dizzy then passing out. Sadly that’s all I had. It’s all I could remember anyway. I told the nurse---Melissa---that. She asked us to call her by her first name, said it was easier. It helped that she wasn’t that much older than us. I guess the school didn’t mind either because no one in authority complained about it.

Melissa stared a long time at me. Her gaze was starting to make me feel extremely uncomfortable. There was something else too, something tingling. It was in my head, starting to make me feel dizzy. As I watched her stare, I couldn’t help but think there was something about her, something different.

WITCH.

The thought just popped into my head. I’m not sure where it came from.

WITCH.

There it was again. I tried to shake it off the tingling wouldn’t go away. I rubbed my temples, hoping she didn’t notice. If she did, she didn’t say. However what she did, say nearly knocked me off the cot:

“What about the other problem?”

“What other problem?” I asked, feeling a bit hot.

“The spontaneous gender change, Michael.”

Holy shit, how in the hell did she know that?

“I don’t know what you’re talking about” I managed to stammer out.

What the hell was going on here? First, it was that psycho that did this to me then Locke and now her. Locke, of course. In the bathroom, I remember now. She was there, Tracy---Trevor’s “sister”. She wasn’t his sister though, she was Trevor. That little prick. Maybe they were all in on this together. First Locke talks that psycho bitch into turning him into a girl then “she” talks the psycho into doing the same to me. Now Melissa was here to finish the job. Maybe they were going to fuck with my mind, make me think I was always this way. Well there was no way I was going to let them fuck with me anymore.

My heart racing, I threw myself up off the cot. I took a swing at the nurse, trying to connect with her face. In an inhuman amount of speed she easily threw off my punch, blocking it like it was nothing. I took another swing but she deflected that as well. Realizing I couldn’t beat her in a straight up fight, I decided to make a break for the door. I got about two feet before my entire body froze. I tried to move but it was as if my body was literally frozen in place. The only thing I could move were eyes. I watched as Melissa slowly got out of her chair and walked around so she was facing me.

“I know you’re scared Michael” she said in a soothing voice “but I’m not going to harm. I want to help you in fact.”

I looked her in the eyes. There was something funky about them. They had this glow. It was radiating out from behind them, almost as if her entire body glowed on the inside except I could only see it through her eyes. She didn’t seem to know though because she didn’t act any different. Of course, maybe she did know and just didn’t care. Regardless it was clear that she was just like that bitch from the bar. The two of them had to be in on this together.

WITCH.

There it was again and now it all made sense.

“I’m using a simple paralysis spell,” she said, taking a step toward me. “I’m going to allow you to speak. I need you to calm down.”

She waved her hand and suddenly I knew my mouth could work.

“HELP!” I screamed as loud as I could. “HELP! THE NURSE IS A FUCKING FREAK!”

She sighed. “They can’t hear you, the room is cushioned. The only ones here now are you and me.”

She took another step closer to me, raising her hand. When she did, she frowned.

“Get the fuck away from me you freak!”

I wasn’t shouting anymore but I clearly wanted her to know that I was going to kick her ass as soon as she let me go.

“Interesting” she said, not even acknowledging my insult. She walked around me, her hair still raised. When she got to my front again, she was frowning still.

“Tell me, when did your gender change?”

“A few days ago.”

A few days, had it only been a few days? It felt like weeks, even months.

“You want to tell me about it?”

“No”

I said no but somehow I found myself spilling my guts to her. I’m not sure how it happened actually but as soon as I started, I couldn’t stop. It felt really good too, like a huge weight had been lifted from me. As I talked, I found myself crying. When I finally got to the end, I completely broke down. I ended up in Melissa’s arms, not even sure when she removed her freeze spell from me. As I cried on her shoulder, I couldn’t help but wonder what the hell kind of world did I really live in. Magic existed, witches existed? It was messed up and crazy and all I wanted to do was crawl into a whole and hide.

When I finally finished crying, Melissa stroked my hair.

Mom used to do that. It’d been so long since I cried like that and even longer since someone held me like that.

“Its ok, we’re going to figure all of this out.”

“How?”

She gave my shoulder a gentle squeeze. “That should help. It will kill this compulsion of yours, this predisposition to dress and act a certain way. I can’t change people’s opinions of you but at least that’s a start.”

“For real?” I asked, not feeling any different.

She nodded. “The Compulsion was not a part of the original curse, just an added bonus.”

“What about the other part, the girl thing?”

She shook her head. “Way beyond me. I know some people who might be willing to help though if you’re willing?”

I nodded. Anything to get to the bottom of this and return to normal.

“I’ll make a few calls; then contact you as soon as I get things organized.”

I wanted to kiss her. “Thank you, you have no idea…”

I started to cry again and she held me again.

I closed my eyes and just for a slight moment, I thought of Mom.

March 20th

“Did you get a vibe from him?”

I shook my head, sitting calmly across from Melissa in her living room. After debating it all day yesterday, I knew I had to tell someone about my new “friend”. That someone just happened to be Melissa. Not that I really had a lot of options. I knew I couldn’t go to Dad, he would just tell me there was some kind of mistake. I was right to suspect that Gerard didn’t report it either. I asked him about it when I saw him yesterday after school. He apparently didn’t see anything too suspicious about a priest traveling through town. That’s what it was, too. As far as anyone was concerned, Father Mitchell had come and gone. I did a little recon of my own too and sure enough, I couldn’t find the man anywhere. I even checked with our one motel---Kenny the manager crumbled to my “wits”. He checked the database and found no one.

Hey being a girl had its advantages.

Melissa had been my only option left. If she and her people could find Mitchell then that was one last problem, I had to worry about. Of course, there was still the huge elephant in the room but we barely ever discussed that one.

I answered her question with a shake of my head. “He’s not one of you. At least not one that I was able to discern.”

Melissa was the only other person around who knew exactly what I could do. It was really hard to put into words but I guess I was like some kind of Unseen Detector. I’m not sure how it worked exactly but somehow when I was near one of Them I got this strange sick, tingling feeling. In the case of some of them---like Witches---I saw beyond their human guises. Not that they looked anything other than human but Witches for instance had this internal glow about them. Thankfully, it was something I had learned to control. It was a bit of a pain in the ass during those early days though.

It helped to have someone like her as a confidant though.

“We can look into it but I’m not sure what you want us to do. He didn’t outwardly threaten you or anyone else and as far as you can tell, the only thing strange he did was linger around the school.”

I sighed. I figured she’d say that. Hey maybe I was being paranoid and it was nothing. Sure, the guy creeped me out majorly but it was possible that he was completely harmless. There was something about him though, something I didn’t like in the least. It was the way he approached me the other night, the way he talked to me. Every time I thought about it sent shivers down my spine. Then there was the timing of it all too. It seemed very coincidental that this guy just happens to show up mere minutes after someone kills the only thing out there that could change me back.

“Maybe I’m just overreacting” I sighed again, admitting my frustration with it all.

At least I was to the point of admitting when I was wrong. Months ago, there was no way I’d ever do that. In some ways, this gender change was the best thing for me, in others I’d never fully get used to it. Now I didn’t have that option, I was Melanie for life.

“It’s good to be cautious and paranoid every once in a while” she said with a smile.

I nodded. “So what do we do if he turns out to be something else?”

“It gets handled.”

“I want to help.”

“That’s not a good idea.”

We left it at that. I knew there was no point trying to argue the matter. If this was an Unseen thing, it was none of my business anyway. I agreed long ago not to get involved with their problems. It was bad enough that I stumbled onto them in the first place. For a while, they couldn’t quite figure out what they wanted to do with me. After all, it’s not like they could make me forget them. If they did, I’d just rediscover them with my “gift”. I think that really pissed them all off. Here I was---a Norm with a way to see them and there was nothing they could do about it. Sure there were threats but they were still pretty idle.

It didn’t take a genius to figure out that most of them wanted me gone.

Melissa and I sat there for a while after that. We weren’t friends. Sure she was my only connection to this world besides Maggie of course but I only came to her when something felt off. There were a few times over the last couple of months that I’d come running. Every time she took my info and passed it on to her superiors. I never found out what became of it because as far they were concerned it wasn’t my concern. That never bothered me in the least. I had a gift and they were going to use me as they saw fit. If I helped them great, if it was useless I never helped either way. It was pretty shitty but who was I to complain. I wasn’t one of Them and was glad of that.

“So do you want to talk about it?” she asked after our long period of silence.

I knew exactly what the “it” was.

“Not particularly.”

Melissa nodded. “They’re going to notice you know. There was a plan here, a time table and a deadline. You know what might happen if…”

I cut her off. “I know and I don’t care.”

Her expression changed. If there was one thing I liked about her was that she cared too much. It was good because she cared about me more than anyone else in my life. Sure Dad was overprotective of this me but I’m not sure he cared as much as she did. Melissa was that kind of person and I loved her for it. I hated her for it too. That caring made it too hard for me. I really wanted to fold, to collapse into a puddle and open myself wide. I wanted to tell her about all my doubts and fears. I wanted to cry into her shoulder for hours but there was just no way I could let myself become that person.

She reached to touch my arm and I quickly pulled away. “I’m good.”

“If you need someone to…”

“I’m good” I said a little more sternly.

She nodded. She regained a sense of composure. “Is there anything else you’d like to discuss?”

Sure there was…a whole shit load.

“Nope I’m good.”

She nodded again. “I’ll inform them about your priest. If anything comes of it…”

“I won’t know,” I said, cutting her off. “I know the drill.”

I stood up and grabbed my coat, not even bothering to say good bye as I left her little apartment. I kept my composure in the elevator. I kept it all the way, until I got in my car. As soon as I shut the door, though I let out the loudest fucking scream. Son of a bitch, I’m an idiot. Why didn’t I tell her about that bitch, why didn’t I tell her what happened. Sure, she was pretty freaked when I knocked on her door and she opened it to see me standing there. I was supposed to be Mike now; I was supposed to be normal now. It was the plan; it was what I told them.

It’s what she told me.

Blessed

Things were different after Melissa helped me. With the compulsion now gone, I was able to get my life back---well some semblance of it. I was still a girl of course but at least I didn’t have to dress like a slut anymore. That didn’t stop people from thinking I was one of course. For the next week afterwards, I still got the calls and texts, all of which I ignored. Thankfully, the only good thing about all of this was that most of the students in school left me alone. Sure, it stung that most of my former friends were now former fuck buddies but I’d get over. It was kind of eye opening to see them from a different point of view as well. Once I thought them to be my compatriots and now I saw them for who they really were---a bunch of assholes. The way they treated others, especially women was atrocious. What’s worse, I used to be just like them. I know slowly began to understand what that bitch Alexis meant when she called this a punishment. Sure she meant for me to be treated like the girls I used to man handle but because of this new life, I was beginning to see how horrible my old one had been.

Whereas life in school was horrible, life at home was refreshing. Melanie’s Dad---the man who my father never was---was the kindest, sweetest man. It blew my mind how someone could change so drastically. Sure Mom was still dead and still had died in the same way but it was as if having a daughter somehow changed how my father reacted to it. I knew from my new memories he still fell to drink but unlike my former self, this new me actually helped him through the hard times. I got him to join a support group both for his drinking and for the loss of his spouse. It helped a lot. Ironically, it was Melanie who fell apart. It didn’t take long for her to fall into a bad crowd, finding her own brand of punishment by turning a good life around.

I call her Melanie because she wasn’t me, not really anyway. As far as I was concerned, I was still Mike, at least partially anyway. The last few weeks had been sobering to say the least.

My new friends were helping.

I did intend to make friends. I wanted to be left alone but that didn’t seem to deter them from trying. First, it was the new girl, Kelly. It was funny; I thought she was a boy at first. I think she might have been actually but this being the town that it is; I’m not going to judge especially given my situation. What surprised me though was her nature---she was one of Them. Of course she didn’t know I knew but it was hard not to. She glowed inside just like Melissa did. It was strange actually. I never actually thought I could be friends with a Witch and yet I couldn’t stop being friends with her.

Then there was Maggie.

Back when I was Mike, I used to torment the poor girl. Maybe not as bad as I did Trevor but Maggie got a lot of it. I was a dick and I wish I could apologize for it but of course, she couldn’t remember. Maggie was a Norm and somehow whatever reality altering thing that Alexis did made her think I was a girl just like everyone else. I knew from Melanie’s memories that she and Maggie had never been friends. Melanie never even knew Maggie existed in fact. The only friends she ever really had were the guys she screwed around with. The only real friends I had turned out to be the very same ones. So Maggie and Kelly were like a breath of fresh air to me. I actually forgot what it was like to be around people and actually have them care about you.

Then there was Mr. Adonis aka Mark.

I’m not even going to go there. It was clear that Melanie hadn’t thought of him as anything more than a fuck buddy but he seemed to think a great deal of her---of me too apparently. Ever since waking up in that motel room with him, he hasn’t stopped texting. First, it was asking when we could get together again and then when I didn’t respond it was several inquiries about my health. It was strange but I think he genuinely cared about her, I mean me, I mean…oh hell.

It was the middle of November when things took an interesting turn.

I got a summons to report to Melissa’s office at the end of school. I was a little anxious because the last time I’d been in there she told me about the punishment curse. I was a little surprised when I showed up to find the principal, Ms. Craven, and an older woman already waiting with Melissa. When I stepped into the room, Ms. Craven shut the door. Turning to her, I noticed the glow hidden within her. I noticed that a few days ago actually but it was still a little unsettling. I wish I could find a way to turn it off. The old woman had the glow too, hers much stronger than Melissa and the principal but not as strong as the nasty look she was giving me.

That look sent chills up my spine.

“There’s no reason to be afraid Melanie,” said Melissa with a smile. “This is Mrs. Crawford; she’s the head of the Coven here in Ravencrest.”

Coven---that meant witches.

“She’s here to take a look at that curse of yours,” continued Melissa.

I figured as much. I tried to remain calm but it was hard too when the old woman kept staring at me like that. She had this cold blank look.

“You’re Kelly’s grandmother?” I asked but she didn’t say anything.

Melissa nodded her head though.

Great, I’d heard nothing but horrible things about this woman.

Mrs. Crawford took a step toward me then she slowly walked around me much as Melissa did before. After that, she continued to stare for a while longer. After what felt like an eternity, she let out a long sigh before turning toward Ms. Craven.

“You can call them and tell them we won’t need the Inquisitor.”

Ms. Craven seemed to sigh herself before quickly leaving the room.

Mrs. Crawford turned to address Melissa. “You’re right; I’ve never seen the like. You say that every Norm in the whole town believes him to be this girl?”

Melissa nodded. “Whoever cast it sure did a fantastic job. I was only able to remove the compulsion; the curse itself was too interwoven into the fabric of things for me to even try to tamper with it.”

“It’s not a Curse, it’s a Punishment.”

“Punishment?”

Mrs. Crawford looked as if she was about to swallow her tongue. “I could try to remove it but I think I’d do more harm than good. No we’re going to have to let this one run its course.”

“How long do you think that’ll be?” I asked, finding my voice finally.

“From what I’ve been able to ascertain” said Mrs. Crawford, still speaking to Melissa. “He has a few more months; this should run its course by March.”

“Will reality reset itself for her?”

“I don’t know,” said the old woman “I do know that the Caster has to remove it themselves.” She finally turned to me. “Tell me about this person.”

I quickly told her everything I could remember about the woman in the bar---Alexis. When I finished it looked as if the color had drained from the old woman. She didn’t say so but it was clear she knew who Alexis was. Her hand even trembled but only for a second. I don’t think she thought anyone saw but when I did, it didn’t make me feel any more secure. If this super witch was terrified then I knew I was in deep trouble.

“There’s nothing we can do about that,” said the old woman with a sigh. “It’s the other unsettling problem that we need to take care.”

“What other problem?”

Mrs. Crawford reached into her handbag and took out a smooth black stone. She ordered me to hold my hand out and when I did, she placed the stone in it. It was cold to touch and surprisingly heavy. The more I held it though the heavier it got. Then it started to burn. The heat got so intense that I nearly dropped it. The old woman watched with baited interest until she finally snatched the stone away from me. I half expected to see a nasty burn on my palm but there was nothing there. She stuck the stone back into her purse and took a quick in-take of breath.

“A Blessed”.

Melissa looked surprised. “Are you sure?”

“The stone never lies.”

A Blessed, what the hell was she talking about?

“Here in Ravencrest? But how and why?”

Mrs. Crawford turned on me. “You what’s your last name?”

“Curtis.”

She shook her head. “Your mother, what was her maiden name?”

I had to think about it before I answered. “Ummm….it was Cane.”

Mrs. Crawford cursed. “I should have known.”

What the hell was going on?

“I want you to call the rest of the Coven; we need to bind her immediately.”

“Won’t that have severe damage? I’ve read about binding them, it’s not easy. It’s dangerous in fact.”

“If what you say is true and she can see us for what we are, we have no choice. If the others find out about her, especially Wisteria, there’s no telling what might happen. We need to nip this in the bud and fast.”

“She can help us.”

Mrs. Crawford scoffed. “No Cane has ever given a damn about us…you know what they are…you know what they call them.”

“She’s not like them.”

Mrs. Crawford turned to me, glaring. “I know this one, she’s exactly like them.”

The old woman advanced on me.

I felt my heart jump into my throat. I’m not sure what was going on but I knew I was in trouble. I could only guess that this old bat meant me some harm.

KILL, KILL.

“I’ll take responsibility for her,” said Melissa quickly.

Mrs. Crawford snapped around, glaring at her now. “You’ll do no such thing.”

“She’s not a threat to us. She hasn’t done anything to harm us. She’s friends with your granddaughter even. She knows what we are but has told no one. I know what you think of the Canes, I know what the community as a whole thinks of them too but she’s not like them. Give her some time to prove it to you.”

Mrs. Crawford rubbed her temples then smiled. “Until March, by then it won’t matter regardless. When the Punishment is lifted, so too will the Blessed nature of her blood. She’s in your charge until then. If she steps out of line before then…”

She didn’t finish her sentence but I was pretty certain it wouldn’t have been good.

Mrs. Crawford then turned and swept out the door, not even looking back. I was more confused as ever as I watched her go.

I looked at Melissa. “What just happened?”

She sighed, slumping into her chair. “I think I just saved your life.”

“Ummm thanks I think.”

“Don’t thank me until March.”

I nodded. I was still confused as hell. What the hell was a Blessed and what did any of it have to do with me. I looked at Melissa, ready to ask but it was clear she was no longer in a talking mood. Not that I blamed her, that woman had drained me too. She was definitely a force to be reckoned with, it was no wonder Kelly hated her so much.

I found myself sitting in Melissa’s office with her for a while, neither one of us said a thing to one another for a long time.

“So what do we do now?”

She didn’t answer.

Good, because I was kind of afraid of what she might say.
 
 
To Be Continued...


 
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March

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I'm going to try my hardest to fill in the gaps between the flashbacks and the present storyline though I'll probably skip ahead a lot lol.

Blessed

So we have another type of unseen or at least mytically in some fashion. We know she can ID the unseen by sight and they don't get along with the other unseen. Maybe some kind of hunter which would explain the title and why Westria's reaction is so much an issue.

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Grover

A Hunter?

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I suppose anything is possible.

A Hunter?

Is Misty by any chance related to Thomas Cane/Theresa, Hunter turned mean murderous Vamp?

Not Sure

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Maybe? ;)

Not Sure

"Maybe?" Yeah right.

Great continuation. Glad

Great continuation. Glad that you got over the block. I will wait somewhat patiently for the next part.

My Block

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I've had blocks before but this one was really horrible. I'm glad I'm over it as well :)

Nice

Well done. I was able to slip right back into the story with nary a ripple. I really look forward to more. Thanks. And I am glad to hear that your hiatus was healing and productive.

Joani

Slipping right Back In

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You're lucky to have done that because I had to go back and read the previous chapters lol.

Well, she is screwed. The

Well, she is screwed. The only person who can turn her back is (apparently) stone cold dead.

Beware the Ides of March, eh?

March 15th

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I really love March 15th. I go around all day telling people to beware the day....fortunately for them nothing bad ever happens. Can't say the same for Misty though, March just isn't her month lol.

One chapter and I am hooked

Hadn't read the previous parts of this story but now I will have to go back and read them. I have not had an attraction to magical stories in the past but this is good. Please continue.

Heather Marie

Thanks for Reading

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I'm glad you decided to read this then and I'm really glad you're enjoying it :)

Melanie

Or Mike is really one conflicted individual. Understandably so given that some good has come through with the bad here. But one thing there is no conflict about, she is in danger and not only from the witches in town. From Mrs. Crawford's reaction, a blessed is some kind of anathma to the unseen. And has that priest actually left?

Maggie

Danger

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It wouldn't be a DRU story without a little danger out to plague the heroine :)

Hmmm

I suppose I will try to figure out which story this keys off. Interesting.

A

Misty's 1st Appearance

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As Mike she appeared throughout For The Fairest. As Misty, she appears at the end of that story. She makes other appearances in Season of the Witch and My Dearest Daughter has a quick scene with her.

So a comment is needed, I

So a comment is needed, I enjoyed it, I'm going to hold off saying anything else till there is more of the story :) Thanks for sharing EoF :)


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More stories about a certain young, cute Were-raccoon please :)

Yes Please

Enemyoffun's picture

More Cute Raccoon Girl please!

Simple Answer

Enemyoffun's picture

She's Cute :)

Simple Answer

Yes, Amanda is so adorably cute! And we know she, Tommy Locke, Max Locke, and Katie Holden are pals, enough that Amanda will venture into the Locke family HQ. That should make things interesting. Note that Tommy and Max know that they're werewolves since they were told after Tracy's transformation, and witches tend not to keep their offspring (or at least their female offspring) in the dark about such things, so even though all three of them won't manifest for a few years unless something weird happens (which of course is always a possibility in the DRU), which may lead to an interesting dynamic. By the way, are they friends with Derek/Danika Stiles (I LOVE THE WIKI), by any chance? By the way, who will be writing Danika's story and when will they do so? Is Danika conventional transgender or crossdresser, or is that just the official explanation used for Derek suddenly (just like magic! :P) turning into a girl?

Sorry to ramble on, just have a few things I'd like to see more written about.

Dana's Sister

Enemyoffun's picture

There is an author currently working on that story.

Dana's Sister

Who is it? Who is it?

On a similar note

Though she doesn't have her own page, I just noticed "Claire (Ben) Corday" on the page for the Corday family. Who's gonna write that story and when?

Claire

Enemyoffun's picture

She actually belongs to Loki.

Welcome Back

First let me say Welcome back glad your over that bump an can't wait to see what else you got in store for us writing wise(maybe pick up where ya left off in that other universe you created?)

Anyways waiting to see how you tie the whole misty n melaine thing together an to see what kinda danger our heroine gets in. I know theres gonna be major cliffhangers you wouldn't be you without the cliffhangers just don't get to close to the edge someone might push ya off :P.

Cliffhanger

Enemyoffun's picture

I think I might have one planned soon :P

PS: What other universe did I create?

The Underappreciated

That one ya nab ^^. An Darkkitten the were racoon girl is cute

This doesn't look good

Renee_Heart2's picture

First the punisher dies now the revelation that she is a blessed. I don't know that that means exactly BUT it doesn't sound good to good for Misty. Looking at the taught that pounds her head to kill it seams that she is to kill every unseen in Ravencrest. Poor girl has a LONG road ahead of her it looks like.

Love Samantha Renee Heart

Duh!

It has occurred to me, (Yes, I am slow sometimes), that others may know about her being of the 'Blessed' and don't want her to changed back. That is why the 'punisher' was killed. If I had to make more guesses as to whom, well, that pastor stands out. Misty is not going to be happy when she learns the truth.

Grover

Mitchell

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Mitchell's motives will be revealed soon. The next chapter is going to be pretty light, mainly focusing on her relationship with Mark. Mitchell will come after that in a chapter or two :)

The Next Chapter

When will it be released? *Pants like a dog impatiently waiting to go to the beach or something*

Working On It

Enemyoffun's picture

A bit of a head cold sidelined me on it but I'm working on it :)

Working On It

Oh! Sorry to hear that. Hope you feel better soon.

Another outstanding story!

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I went back and read the Tracy Locke stories first in order to pick up this story line as per your suggestion, and I think you know how I feel about that series of stories. This one is off to a great beginning as well.

I am actually enjoying the flashbacks and how they are filling in the timeline since Mike became Misty. It's a wonderful tool and you make very good use of it.

I am intrigued to find out just what Agatha Crawford is so worried about with regard to Misty's mother and the Cane family. It's easy to see how being able to see or detect the Unseen could be a potent weapon for their enemies, and thus make Misty a valuable asset to certain groups. But I truly don't see Misty allowing herself to be used like that. Especially not considering her relationship with Kelly.

I also foresee a resolution to the conflict between Tracy and Misty. misty obviously knows that she terribly mistreated Trevor and feels remorse over it - to the point that she is terrified of trying to make amends to Tracy. Somehow, I just know that will be a factor in the story.

Looking forward to reading more!

Dallas

D. Eden

Dum Vivimus, Vivamus

Misty's Family

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Her family---well her mother's side of it---are very crucial to the DRU. It may not seem like it now but when some of the revelations come, I think people are going to be very surprised.

Misty's Uncle

Just by going with my public records search I get the following on the Uncle. Misty has met her Uncle while as Misty and even she conciders him to be very flaky and is uncomfortable around him. He presently lives in Europe and is concidered to be very wealthy. Based on the fact that Agatha Crawford wanted to immediately gather the Coven and bind Misty on learning that she is a Case shows that the Unseen and the Case family have a very deadly conflict between them.

I really don't know why I didn't see it before now...

But that name... That can only mean trouble unless you're just ***REALLY*** yanking our chains here and yanking them hard.

The name of Cain is a cursed one according to the Judeo-Christian scriptures and has been for a very long time. I have no idea what kind of symbolism you are intending with it, but it strikes me as a thing far removed from being pleasant. I also suspect that poor Mike/Misty is going to have a serious struggle to wade through here before the end of it in March.

That said, however, I'm looking forward to seeing if and how Mike/Misty manages to overcome this struggle. Please, for the love of anything that you hold dear to you, don't stop the magic now.

Peace be with you and Blessed be

yesss

thank god you are back

Misty is

Blessed; a possible force for either good or bad??
You do like loading the deck!!

alissa

great writing

i really love this story, the writing is done great and the story has a good flow. it gets one to empathize with the main character