Choices -- Chapters 4 & 5

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Choices

by M.N. Thomas

edited by Bill Durr & Tom Peashey

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I missed....

chapters 1-3, so now I have to go find them; I love the pictures you paint with your words and, from my writings, you might find that your focus on hair and beauty, as well as dressing, is strong. I'd love to have some of your comments on my efforts! Love Ginger xx

It's driving me crazy... short trip. Ha Ha

I recall reading the original version. Swear I MUST have it saved somewhere but a quick search did not finsd it. At least under this name.

Probably for the best as this is the buffed and polished version.

I can *feel* the narators confusion, shame, worry...

And the regret about turning away the few friends he ever had, Carol in particular.

So sad but then finding oneself is often a difficult task.

Nice job and a welcome break from your well done but intense Princess/Tears story line. That one is almost raw with emotion. And so sad at the moment as for now he has lost BOTH of his great loves... though perhaps Lin will come back.

So wanted to take that ass police man in Dubai and shove him off the top of that 2700 foot tall skyscraper they built. He deserves that and more as did the human trafficers/adoption slime.

John in Wauwatosa

John in Wauwatosa

Ab Fab

Jill Johnson's picture

Wonderful, believable, my story.
Thank you for writing it!

Jill