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by M.N. Thomas
Edited by Bill Durr & Tom Peashey
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Ron deserves to have something nasty happen to him
grrr.....
I'm glad Tim fought back
That was outright rape.
This is so well written, Melodie! I hope that happier times are in Tim's near future.
SuZie
Ron certainly does...
...deserve to learn his lesson the hard way. However so does Pete and Dozer.
Dorothy's right....
GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!! Let Dozer be sodomized every day he spends in Hell, which is where he deserves to go..... And may Ron be there to experience the same.
I'm glad I read chapters 4 and 5, then 2 and 3 before I read this starting piece.... if I'd come to the book this first, I probably would have stopped and missed the treats in store. Having read those later chapters, I was confused by the Prologue!!!
Please write chapter 6 soon! Love Ginger