sometimes its best to keep your opinion to your self,part 14 the end.

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Well here it is folks I hope you like.
Kayla :D

Lilly and Katie ran as fast as they could leaving the guards behind, when they rounded the coroner to the hallway that led to the main office they stopped.

Slowly walking toward them holding her side was Amy, even in the dimly lit hallway they still could make out the blood coming out from under her hand.

Lilly ran to her and Amy fell into her arms, the last thing Amy herd before passing out was Lilly’s cries for help.

Amy slowly opened her eyes, she was in a hospital bed and the only sound in the room was the beeping of the EKG machine.

She looked to her right and saw miss Sandy asleep in a chair next to her bed, then she looked two her left and saw Lilly.

But for some reason Lilly was in a bed and hooked up to an Ekg as well.

“Miss sandy, Miss Sandy” Amy reached over and tapped her on the leg, miss Sandy opened her eyes and looked at Amy.

“Oh thank God your awake!!!” Sandy said with a noticeable amount of relief in her voice.

“Look I know I’m in big trouble but Why is Lilly in that bed”? Amy asked as she pointed at Lilly.

“Your not in that much trouble”, and Lilly is here because she gave you one of her kidneys”.

“What do you mean” Amy asked a little worried.

“When you were shot the bullet came through your side when you turned to fire back”, “the 22cal. Bullet went through both your kidneys, your lucky it didn’t hit anything else”.

“We knew from yours and Lilly’s files that the two of you were matches, Lilly didn’t even hesitate in agreeing to giving you one of her kidneys”.

Amy looked at her friend and smiled. “I don’t know if you can hear me but thank you” she said.

“We are growing you and her a new pair, it should only take about three weeks” Sandy said.

“Hey miss Sandy can I ask you something”.
“Yes you may”.

“How come you have the technology to do some of the things that you do but you aren’t using that knowledge to help other people”.

“(sigh) The sad truth is it’s because of greed” sandy replied.
“Oh”.

“I would love to come out to the public with this technology but my life would be in danger if I did”.

“What do you mean by that, Will people try to hurt you if you do”.

“Yes, you know how when someone claims to have a cure for cancer but soon after they either take back their claim or disappear”.

“Yeah”.

“The truth is there is a cure for every strand of cancer out there as well as other so called incurable conditions, but because of the billions of dollars the people and company’s who research the illnesses get from sponsors, benefits or charity’s” “When someone tries to come out to the public with the knowledge of a cure they are forced to hide the cures or risk serious consequences”.

“And it doesn’t matter who you are, a man who was a lot more powerful and wealthier then me tried to out the cures to the public and ignored the threats”.

“He and his body guards as well as several of his researchers and employees were killed in broad daylight at a conference meeting before he had the chance to tell the public”.

“Did they catch the ones who did it”.
“Sadly no they didn’t”.

“It was covered up so well it was like the people who were killed never even existed, But the act sent the message to people like me who know things like I do, that you don’t mess with someone’s cash cows no matter who you are”.

“But that doesn’t stop me and a few others from using our knowledge in secret, my company owns several children’s clinics and special hospitals where we heal those we swear to secrecy for very little and sometimes no money”.

“I am sorry that I did what I did”,” I should have told you about miss Jordan” Amy said.

“I am upset with you but because you worried me, I am just glad that you had that gun”.

“It could have been a lot worse then it was if you didn’t have it”.

“I have everything that happened on video from the hidden cameras in my mothers office and we found your tape recorder”.

“We are investigating Jordan, and we found out who she used to cover up her past“.

“A man named Michel Anderson, he is one of the best when it comes to making someone’s past go bye bye“.

“I am very disappointed with the people I have who are supposed to prevent things like this from happening, we are investigating them as well.”

“We will be paying mister Anderson a visit soon, he needs to answer for his crimes of helping monsters like Jordan escape from justice”.

“I am proud of you for having the courage to do what you did though, even if it was dangerous and stupid”.

“Um miss Sandy”?
“Yes Amy”?

“Did I kill her”?

“No she is still alive and in intensive care on another floor”.
“don’t worry about it me and my people will handle her”.

“Now you only have two months left on your time with us”,” So you’ll stay hear in the campus hospital until you can return to your dorm, then you will return hear to replace your kidneys”.

Then after you recover from that I want to see you at my office”.

“Hey sandy I have another question”!
“Sure what is it”?

“Can you take off this choker”?
“I am sorry but its on a timer and not even I can take it off until the year sentence is over”.

“Why is that”.

“We had some problems with our previous models and after a few other tries with different models this was the one that worked”.

“A few people we had here found glitches in the chokers and realized that if they cut the power to the campus and jump the fence, they could get the chokers off and escape. It took us a week to find them”.

“After that we used deactivation codes but a student found them and almost got away so we made these and so far we haven’t had any problems, I wish I could take them off now but you understand”

“What about when we are in your office and you turn them off”?

“The remote I use only works in the office, the chokers reactivate when the student leaves my office”.

“They used to work out side but a student got a hold of it one time and tried to escape so you know”.

“Well I have to go to Marin county for a while so I’ll be back in a few weeks” miss sandy said as she got up to leave the room.

“Get well soon ok”. “Sure” Amy replied..

A few minutes later Lilly woke up, they talked for a while until it was time to sleep.

When it was time to leave the hospital the girls couldn’t get out of there fast enough, although it wasn’t much better being on bed rest back at the dorm.

Then they went through it all again when their new kidneys where put back in.

The last day of her sentence Amy was called into Miss Helens office, she walked into the office and slowly took a seat because she was still sore from the surgery.

So are you excited to be going home!?” Miss Sandy asked.

“Well I’m a bit nervous, I mean I don’t know if my family will accept me like this”.

“Well in that case I have an offer for you”.
“Ma’am”.

Miss Sandy pushed a button on her desk and a man with a push cart came in then he left after pulling out a large metal cylinder and placing it on the desk.
Amy touched the object and found it to be warm, “what is this” she asked.

“Amy I am going to give choice that I give everyone of our special students at the end of their sentences and I will only give it to you once”.

“In this container is your for lack of better words penis”.
“what!!!! Amy yelled out.

“We have the ability to completely restore your body to what it once was, granted you might be an inch or two shorter but your appearance will be restored”.

“How can you do that”? Amy asked in disbelief.

Miss Sandy pulled a small tube with a white gel in it.

This putty is applied through a syringe onto your bones, once its in place our professional sculptors mold your face copying digital scans we took of you before we made our changes.

Once the compound dries after a few weeks it becomes stronger then real bone.

“So what your telling me is you can completely restore my body” Amy asked?

“Yes we can if that’s what you want, this container has a special liquid that has kept your manhood alive while you were her in our care”.

“You’ll have to stay hear for a few more months while you recover but then you can return to your old life”.

Amy was quit for a moment before she looked at miss Sandy and smiled.

“Thank you but I’ll pass” miss Sandy raised her brow.

“Are you sure that’s what you want, because I will not make this offer again”?

Amy smiled” I am very happy as I am now and I highly doubt Kevin will want to keep dating a guy, I also like the feelings that being a girl brings I don‘t know what it is but being a girl suits me”.

“Well you have till tomorrow morning when you get in the car to go home to change your mind”.

“Will you be returning to finish your high school education with us” Miss Sandy asked?

“Yes I will, all my friends are here and I already know that their planning on returning as regular students next year so yeah”.

“Well when you walk out send Lilly in please”.

Amy walked out of the office and told Lilly to go in.

That night Amy and all her new friends had a large party and counted down to midnight, when the clock hit twelve their chokers and bracelets beeped and clicked then fell to the floor.

Amy was happy to have the shocking choker off, now she was able to dive into her collection of about twenty chokers in different shapes and designs witch she had yet to be able to try on.

The next morning they said their goodbyes and left for home, about midway home Amy was getting cold feet so Miss Katie who was personally taking her home, gave her a quick shot to calm her down.

When Amy woke up she was in a room, the room looked familiar but it couldn’t be, it looked like Jakes old room at home but it was painted and decorated like a teenage girl lived there.

She slowly walked out into the hallway and looked around, it was her home.

Now she was scared as she slowly made her way down the stairs, when she heard voices coming from the living room she slowly walked in.

She was tackled by her dad who picked her up into a tight hug. “I have missed you so much sweetie”!!!! he said while crying tears of joy.

Amy’s mom, brother and sister came in and hugged her, after almost thirty minutes of crying and hugging they sat down when they sat down on the couch and that’s when Amy noticed miss Katie sitting in a chair across from the couch.

“Did you guys know about me?” Amy asked.
Miss Katie explained.

“Your parents were very upset when I told them what we were doing to you, your dad was so mad he put two of my men in the hospital”.

“He was so mad I had to shoot him with a dart to keep him from hurting me”.

“We were very mad for a while even though they told us it all could be reversed” Amy’s mom said as she pulled her into a hug from the side.

“But after a while when we saw the changes in you after you accepted all this and the way you smiled, we became fine with it” Bobby said as he wiped a tear from his eye.

Amy’s mom pulled out a photo book and opened it, it was full of pictures of Amy from her time at the school, in all of them she was smiling and happy.

“We were kept up to date on your progress thanks to miss Katie and we were overjoyed when you started playing piano again,

and that’s when we decided that this was a good thing and we would be happy with your choice to either stay a girl or become a boy again”.

“We still love you no mater what”.

Miss Katie talked to them for a while and said she would be in touch about Amy’s return to school in the next fall, then she left a very happy family to live their lives.

Amy was talking to her mom and dad when her dad asked her what made he choose to accept her new life.

“Mom Dad there’s something I need to tell you about something that happened a long time ago, it was the reason I quit the piano”.

Amy told her tale and by the end everyone in the hose was in tears, even the former US Marine Bobby Edwards was crying and holding his new daughter close.

“I hope that asshole gets what it deserves” Bobby yelled out.

Jordan pierce slowly came too, she looked around and saw that she was in a prison cell, she slowly put her feet off the bed and immediately knew something was wrong.

She reached up and felt her chest to find her beautiful breast missing, she saw a mirror on the wall and jumped up to look at her self.

She had to stand on her tip toes as she was now about five feet two, when she looked at her face it wasn’t her face but that of a man.

She could tell she had surgery done, she was scared shitless when the cell door opened, a large Mexican walked in wearing prison scrubs.

“Yo homes you finally awake”.
“Where am I” Jordan asked.
“You in San Quentin baby and you lucked out in getting me as a cell mate essay, me en you goanna have a lot of fun” the man smiled a wicked smile while he started walking toward Jordan.

A million thoughts went through his head but then one hit, he realized that he still had a vagina.

The end.
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Please, please, please tell me what you think folks I like comments if you haven’t figured it out yet. Hope you liked this story. Kayla :D



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Teekabell's picture

What?

To be honest, I don't know what to think. It was mostly well written and fairly good character development, although you did make a few leaps in development that could have used more story to explain, especially in the last few chapters. The story concept was nice and different, but also a little bizzar

I read the whole thing, always eager for the next chapter. But like I said, I don't know what to think about the story. It was different.

I think I could have accept it all better, if you hadn't put the part with Jordan Pierce in the end of the story. I personally don't see how it added to the value of the story line.

I look forward to seeing your next story.

sometimes its best to keep your opinion to your self,-14-the end

Would love to see more of Amy and her family

    Stanman
May Your Light Forever Shine
    Stanman
May Your Light Forever Shine

YES~!!!!!

GIVE THAT FREAK WHAT IT DESERVES!!!! >< Awesome ending to the series, so they DO allow them to go back, what an interesting universe. The ending was the best, Amy's happy and everyone's happy :D and the monsters are getting exactly what they deserve ><

I know who I am, I am me, and I like me ^^
Bisexual, transsexual, gamer girl, princess, furry that writes horror stories and proud ^^

I know who I am, I am me, and I like me ^^
Bisexual, transsexual, gamer girl, princess, furry that writes horror stories and proud ^^

Elizabeth Jean's picture

Heavy but great story, I had

Heavy but great story, I had a feeling there was more behind Jake's hate than was known.

Thanks for sharing.

Lizzie :)

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The Godmother :p

Arikel's picture

Thank you for the story,

I enjoyed it but ultimately I thought the people that were the victims of your society would have benefited much more from a good psychologist.

Jake had not only been raped by Gloria, but again by the society that wanted to make a better world. I can think of no worse sexual abuse than to kidnap a person, spend six months mutilating their sexual organs and tearing away other parts on a whim than what they did and then force them to pretend like it's what they wanted. Jake eventually 'forgave' them, but even that I would at best call Stockholm syndrome, everyone he knew was part of this cruel agenda, his best friend being his handler a person placed there to impersonate a friend while furthering their sickening program. Then on top of them raping him they systematically tortured him with their shock collar over the next twelve months in prison so they could better mind control him. All because he had a website somewhere that people walked into and instead of saying 'this isn't my cup of tea' decided to off themselves. You don't kill yourself because some teenybopper somewhere on the internet makes a snide comment, yes they suck, but those girls had so many safety nets it was crazy, for god sakes Katies daughter had a transgendered mother and a psychologist father who were both in the business of helping boys become girls! Christiana I can believe she couldn't escape the tortures she felt, others made her pretend to be a gender that she wasn't, she was hurt and degraded for not being what she knew she was.

Your society did the same thing. This is a horror story, not one of redemption or forgiveness your victims families became greater monsters than the ones they wanted to defeat. What's worse is that in their sick minds they think they're doing the right thing.

kayla don's picture

ok

Look its a story, yes i could have spent a little more time developing the plot but im the kind of person who has to write what comes tto mind quickly or i will for get it. The fact is it was my first story and it was a pure shot in the dark.

Thanks for reading, if i sound bitchy ive had a bad week so sorry. :)

Arikel's picture

Please don't misunderstand

Like I said I enjoyed reading it, I wouldn't have responded in such a long format if I didn't have an emotional reaction to it. I firmly believe that any art form should cause people to react in some way (positive or negative)and I appreciate that you could do so. I know none of it's real, but your story made some of it feel like it was. Once again thank you for posting, I'm sure the various issues other people have pointed out will iron themselves out as you practice more. :)

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