sometimes its best to keep your opinion to your self,part 7

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Jake walked into the office and saw a young woman of about 30, she was very beautiful dressed in her expensive business suit that yelled she had authority.

Standing behind her was another woman of about the same age, she was dressed in tan suite with a knee length skirt. And when she moved slightly Jake could make out the butt of a pistol hidden in her coat.

“ sit” the woman at the desk said.
Jake took a seat in a chair in front of the desk.

“We finally meet miss Edwards” the woman said.
Jake flinched when she pointed the keychain remote at him.

She pushed a button and Jake heard his collar beep.
“You may say what ever you want and ask any questions you have.

“Who are you” asked Jake.
“I am Sandra Helens, Melisa is my mother.”
“ I am also the head of the IFBW”

Jakes blood began to boil, he was now sitting across from the woman who took his life from him”.

Why have you done this to me, said Jake with more then a noticeable amount of anger in his voice.

“We did this to you to give you a second chance”

“ A second chance the fuck you mean a second chance, you’ve ruined my life”.

“We have not ruined anything,besides you were doing a very good job of that on your own”.

“We stopped you from causing anymore pain to other people through your careless actions”

“WHAT THE HELL DID I FUCKIN DO”
“ I have never even meet the people I have been accused of killing.

You made these people who at the time of there suisides were going through some of the hardest times in there life.

And unfortunately the one time they could have used a friend they came across you.
I have read some of your post, and in most of them you sound completely heartless.

When you came across them instead of trying to help them and be their friend when they needed one the most. You just kept pushing them till they couldn’t take any more.

And now they are gone, and their familys are left with holes in their hearts because of the ones they lost.

After a few minutes of silence, Jake asked.
“Why” “Why did you make me a girl”.
“Why didn’t you just kill me and save yourself all the trouble”.

The woman calmly spoke.
“The reason we didn’t kill you is because no one deserves to be murdered”.

That is the one thing we are trying to stop is sinceless killing.

And I can tell you are a good person and we want to help you bring that out, the reason we made you a girl was to punish you by putting you in the shoes of the ones you hate.

“How can you afford all this, I know it isn’t cheap. jake calmly asked

“My father was a very wealthy owner of a small pharmaceutical company.

After he passed away, he left the company to me and my mother. Together we took the company and turned it into a multi billion dolor business.
So we have plenty of money to fund or projects.

“How did you do this I am pretty sure it wasn’t easy to find the right organs to match my body and these seem to have taken pretty well”.

“My you are smart aren’t you”

“No those aren’t someone else’s organs they are all yours”

“how”

“Using technology that will most likely never see the light of day, we grew your organs in a large tube using some of your cells and DNA, the end result is a perfect match to your body”.

“We had already made them before we grabbed you”.

As for your body we employ some of the best surgeons in the world and give them the technology to do their work perfectly.

We also gave you plenty of chances to change but you refused to hear us out.

We hired actors to try and befriend you and convince you to stop but you just ignored them, so we played our last card and now here you are.

Jake stayed silent while she went on and on about how they had changed him.

The whole time the woman in the corner kept her eyes on him.
Jake was tempted to risk getting shot so he could ram the letter opener that was laying on the desk into the woman’s neck, but he stayed still.

“Why me, there are people who ten times worse then me so why”.

“Most of the people we change are future leaders in the world of hate“.

People who encourage people to hate others, they keep the fires of hate burning so to speak.

We found out that by taking these people and changing them we have seen an amazing drop in hate crimes in this country.

But we don’t just change them and kick them to the curb, we do our best to give them the best future they could ever have, we give them an education help them make friends, and when we are done we return them to there families.

We even offer for them to return here to finish there high school years, then we give them fully paid scholarships to the collage of there choice.

Jake was dumbfounded, “ please give this a chance, you may hate me right now, but in time you will come too thank me for all that I have given you.

Jake was clenching his hands so tight his finger nails were cutting his palms.
He had tears in his eyes as he said.

“I hope you burn in hell bitch”

“I under stand your anger”.
“miss Katie will you escort miss Edwards to her next class while I talk to my mother”.

“yes miss Helen”. the other woman said.

Miss Katie led Jake down the hall.

“Hey cheer up” she said as they walked.
“forget you”

Katie gently turned Jake to face her.
“Look I know what our going through“.

“You may hate her right now, but you also have your self to blame for the position you are in“.
“We tried to change you before it came to the point of changing you!“. But you did not take heed to the warnings we tried to give you“.

Jake hung his head, and started crying.
Katie pulled him into a hug.

“Look I know sandy may look like a heartless bitch right now“,” but give it time and you’ll see she has a heart of gold“.

As they walked Jake asked” What did you mean by you know what I’m going through”.

Katie stopped and hung her head, She looked at Jake with a tear in her eye.

“ I use to be a male too”.

Jake couldn’t see it she was a beautiful woman, she was about 5’6 115 lbs and she had a perfect face with a smile that could warm the coldest of hearts.

“Did you chose to be a girl” asked Jake.
“No but in the end it was for the best, my life couldn’t be any better”.

“ Was it miss Sandra”.

“yes it was, I hurt someone very close to her and this was my punishment”.
“ I was the very first person she ever changed”.

“And to this day I still don’t know how she could have forgiven me for what I did”.

“What did you do” asked Jake.
“Maybe I’ll tell you some other time”.

Katie dropped Jake off at the cafeteria.

Jake went over what miss Katie had told him in his head as he walked.

“Was I really that bad of a person”
“Do I really deserve this”

Jake put the thoughts to the back of his mind as he found Kevin and took a seat across the table from him.



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Please comment folks ,let me

Please comment folks ,let me know what ya think.

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Honestly this is kinda like

Honestly this is kinda like a horror story to me, petticoat punishment to the extreme *shivers* (I don't really know why I keep reading stories that will upset me, I guess I hope the protagonist will win?)... Maybe I skipped a certain part, but the woman said: "the reason we made you a girl was to punish you by putting you in the shoes of the ones you hate"

I don't think I ever read he has a hatred towards women, or was it to make him suicidal, so that he really is in their shoes?... Also the reason for his hatred hasn't been explained either, I think (or it's too long ago to remember)

grtz & hugs,

Sarah xxx

sometimes its best to keep your opinion to your self,part 7

Can they return Jake to a male body?

    Stanman
May Your Light Forever Shine
    Stanman
May Your Light Forever Shine

I think the "don't give a damn about due process"...

... women are playing him. He was mad at the beginning of this part but is self-doubting at the end. The women seem to be winning. I sense a much more sinister agenda lurking behind their goody two shoes answers and explanations to Jack. C'mon Jack, stay angry!

interesting

i find it to be a harsh but fitting pentalty

He wasn't anti-womyn,

He was anti-M2Fs.

For some reason, the spelling and wrong word use seem worse in this chapter. Sorry.

Hugs and Bright Blessings,
Renee

Hugs and Bright Blessings,
Renee

thoughts

I hate to be petty but your spelling is atrocious you need to get a good editor or a spellchecker program, because your story &writing are so far above your spelling ........keep trying

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