Written by Anistasia Allread
A long narrow hall lined with lockers on both sides stretched out before him. Evil laughter sounded from behind him, Greg and Tyler’s laughter. Eric, his arms full delicate crystal turned away from them and began running down the endless hall.
The long rows of lockers were interrupted by windowed classroom doors. He ran to the first door. He shifted the breakables to his other hand and tried to turn the knob. Locked. The laughter sounded again from behind him. He turned and ran to the next door. It too was locked. Thump thump. . . . thump thump. . . thump thump.
They were starting to get closer. Other people’s laughter joined Greg and Tyler’s. Some deep and throaty, other’s high pitched cackles. The hair on the back of his neck stood up He had to get away from them, he had to leave before they found him, he had to hide.
Holding the crystal objects tight to his chest, he sprinted down the hall. His heart hammered at his chest, thump thump. . . . thump thump. . . .
He had to hide somewhere. He slid to a stop at another door and pulled on it. Locked. He shifted the fragile crystal to one hand and elbowed the glass window as hard as he could, hoping he could break it. The horrible laugh of a Hyena echoed down the hall. Cold sweat beaded on his forehead.
Thump thump. . . .thump thump. . . thump thump, his heart slammed at his ribs like a mad dog leaping at the bars of a kennel.
Eric turned and started sprinting. Something shot out from the locker at his shin. Eric leaped and hoped that he wouldn’t drop the precious items in his grasp. He looked over his shoulder and saw a leg sticking out of the locker.
Something hard hit him in his shin. He stumbled forward, barely catching his balance and continued on; another leg trying to trip him. The laughter intensified and sounded right behind him. Legs started shooting out of lockers on both sides of the hall bent on causing him to drop the crystal.
“Get him.” Greg’s voice echoed all around him.
Locker doors began flying open all around him as legs thrust out at his shins. He barely had time to find his footing before leaping to avoid more legs. Books began to fly from the opening and closing lockers. They flew at his head, his arms, his fragile cargo.
Thump thump. . . thump thump. . .
Eric ran, twisting and turning protecting the breakables in his arms as best as he could as books pounded against his back. He stumbled more than once only to regain his balance and continue down the hall as his hidden pursuers laughed at his expense.
Large spit wads, trailing stringy, slimy saliva joined the flying books. The wet wads of paper smacked him in the face and the back of the head.
“Why are you doing this?” he screamed. “What did I ever do to you?”
Eric lowered his head, and raised his shoulders to try and block things from hitting him in the face. Determined to get away, he charged down the hall. He began busting through the obstacles, his breathing becoming more and more labored.
Thump thump. . . thump thump. . . . thump thump.
An extra long, extra large leg shot out catching him unaware. He felt his shin smack into it, the pain shooting up his spine. He fell forward. He planted his other leg to gain his balance but the momentum propelled him forward. A dictionary hit his arm hard loosening a piece of crystal from his protective hold. A large spit wad smacked him in the side of the face, causing him the loss of vision in that eye.
Everything seemed to move in slow motion as he fell forward, trying to protect the crystal in his arms as well as trying to regain the possession of the one flying before him just out of reach. Weightless, out of control he fell as the laughing grew louder, Greg’s loudest of all.
“No!”
“No!” Erika sat up in bed in a cold sweat.
“No?” her mother asked from her doorway. “You’ve been begging me to allow you back to school all week. The morning I get you up to go back, is the morning you tell me no?”
Erika shook her head, trying to shake the sleep from her mind as well as from her eyes. “Nightmare.” She explained.
“Oh. Well, it’s time to get up. I thought you’d be excited to go to school today.”
Erika sat in her bed, her covers rumpled and kicked into a pile near the foot of her bed. She looked up at her mom and took a deep breath. “Sorry, mom. I am excited. I was just having a horrible dream.”
“Well, get a move on it, or you won’t be ready when Samantha gets here.” Her mother turned and went down stairs.
Erika took a deep breath and padded into her bathroom to take a shower. She hated waking up drenched in sweat.
Listening to make sure her mother was down stairs, Erika reached under her pile of clean towels and pulled out the bottle of herbals that Aunt Carrie had bought for her. She popped one in her mouth and swallowed it as she climbed into her shower.
- - -
“You’re wearing that to school?” her mother eyed her outfit.
“Yes. What’s wrong with it?” Erika asked looking down over her carefully chosen clothes. She picked out a white button down blouse which she wore tucked into a soft pink pencil skirt, nylons and pink heels. Her curly hair was pulled back from her face with a pink ribbon showing off delicate silver earrings.
“Nothing is wrong with it. It’s just a bit much for school, don’t you think?”
“I don’t think it is. There is nothing wrong with wanting to look nice.” Erika argued.
Her mother shrugged and went back to her coffee.
Erika peeled a banana and gulped it down before slipping into her dress coat and picking up her book bag.
The horn in the driveway honked signaling her escape. Erika called a goodbye from the door and hurried out to her friend’s car, taking smaller strides in her heels and skirt.
“Feeling a bit feminine today?” Samantha greeted as Erika slipped into the car and pulled on her safety belt.
“Is there something wrong with it?” Erika asked.
“No.” Samantha backed out of the drive. “Nothing wrong with it.”
“Wow, don’t you look nice.” Tricia greeted as she slipped into the back seat.
“Thank you.” Erika smiled.
“You wear pink almost as well as I do.” Tricia gave Erika’s shoulder a squeeze.
Tricia held Erika’s hand as the threesome walked into the school. As she walked to her locker, she was inundated with “Hey, welcome back.” “You’re looking good” “We missed you, welcome back.” “You don’t look very sick to me.” “Don’t you look nice.” “How are you feeling? It’s good to see you.”
Warmth washed through her body at the heartfelt welcomes and good wishes. Erika hung her coat in her locker and got her things together for her first period class.
“I have to get going, see you at lunch.” Tricia stood on her toes to press her lips against Erika’s. “You do look fantastic today.”
Erika smiled, a slight blush painted her cheeks. “Thank you.”
“How are you feeling?” Krystal asked as she joined Erika on the way to class. “You look very cute by the way.”
“Thanks. I’m fine.”
“It’s good to have you back. Tricia was going nuts without you.”
“What’s the occasion?” Victoria asked as she approached.
“Just felt feminine today.” Erika used Samantha’s verbiage. “Victoria, could you do me a big favor while you’re working in the office today?”
“Don’t you think you need to attend school before I score you some hall passes?”
“No, that’s not it.” Erika pulled Victoria to the side of the hall. “I want copies of Greg’s and Tyler’s files.”
“What?” Victoria looked shocked.
“You heard.” Erika looked hard at Victoria. “I want to see their files.”
“What ever for?”
“My own reasons.” Erika had to keep from growling.
“I’ll get kicked out of school if I get caught.” Victoria complained.
“You did it with my file, you can do it with theirs.”
“I don’t know, Erika.” Victoria shook her dark locks.
“Please, Victoria? For me? We are Lavender girls, remember?”
Victoria sighed. “I’ll see what I can do. No promises.”
Erika smiled and gave Victoria a quick peck on the cheek. “You are a sweetheart.”
“Sweet or not, you are going to get us in trouble.”
“I have faith in you.” Erika smiled. She rejoined Krystal who was waiting not too patiently.
“What was that about?” Krystal asked.
“Just asking a favor; Nothing big.” The two friends just made it to their class before the bell rang.
“I’m a little disappointed, Erika.” Jacob smiled over his shoulder as the two girls took their seats.
Erika looked quizzically at him.
“I thought they would be bigger.”
“What are you talking about.” Erika inquired.
“Your breast implants, I expected them to be larger. I’d get my money back if I were you.”
Krystal slapped him across the back of the head. “She had brain surgery stupid.”
“That’s what they all say.” Jacob chuckled. “Hannah Grier said she had her tonsils taken out and came back to school with a new nose.”
“Erika really did have brain surgery.”
“I did get a nose job in the deal.” Erika added. “See, they took this long probe and stuck it up my nose.” Erika went on to describe the general surgery to the guy.
“As fascinating as that was, Ms. Summers, I’d like to start class.” The instructor put forth.
Erika blushed as she realized that the whole class had heard her explanation. “Sorry.” She murmured.
Half way through class her bladder began to beg for some relief. She looked at the clock and sighed, there was no way she was going to be able to hold it until the end of class.
Erika got up and took the girls bathroom pass from next to the door and nodded to her teacher before exiting the class room.
The clicking of her heels echoed down the long hall. The hall seemed to go on for ever. Long rows of lockers interrupted by the occasional classroom door lined each side of the corridor. Laughter erupted from a classroom behind her, causing Erika’s heart to jump around in her chest.
The sound of her clicking foot steps quickened. She cast a glance over her shoulder to see if anyone was behind her. The hall was empty. She stepped faster down the hall.
The girl’s bathroom would be safe. She hoped. She was almost jogging down the hall now. Laughter again exploded from behind her. She glanced over her shoulder again.
She smacked hard into something in front of her. Caught off balance in her heels, she began to stumble.
“No!” she cried out.
Large, strong hands grabbed her by the shoulders and steadied her, before placing her squarely back on her feet.
Erika looked up into Julian’s concerned face.
“Are you alright?” he asked, “You look like you’ve seen a ghost.”
Erika’s heart was pounding a strong cadence in her chest. She swallowed a large lump, and took a deep breath. “I’m fine, thank you.” Her voice shook a little.
Julian’s large hands still held her. The two just looked into one another’s eyes for a long moment, transfixed by the closeness and beauty of one another.
‘He is a good looking guy’ Erika thought to herself. ‘he smells nice too’.
“You look very pretty today.” Julian smiled. “Welcome back to school. Sorry I didn’t come by the hospital.”
“It’s okay, I know you don’t like them.” Erika smiled.
Julian paused for a moment. “How did you know? Did Stan tell you?”
“Uh, no.” Erika’s mind raced. How did she know? “It stands to figure that was why you didn’t come by.” She made an awkward excuse.
‘Man he had great shoulders. And his eyes, his eyes were amazing.’
Julian released Erika from his hold. “You gotta go, I see.” He indicated the bathroom pass.
“Yes.” She couldn’t take her eyes from his.
“Now that you are better, will you be rejoining the rally squad?”
“I won’t know for another week or two. Doctors.”
“I gotta get back to class.” Julian broke eye contact and looked down the hall. “It was good bumping into you, Erika.” He smiled.
“Thanks for catching me.”
“Any time.”
Erika let out a long, large breath, she didn’t know she was holding. She watched Julian walk down the hall for a moment enjoying the shape of his shoulders and how the tight t-shirt clung to his back.
Erika’s bladder cried out again, reminding her of her reason for being out of class.
To be continued. . .
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The Princess and the Jock Ch 6
Hopefully, her vendetta will not backfire and hurt her and her friends.
May Your Light Forever Shine
May Your Light Forever Shine
Revenge?
Especially given her nightmare regarding Greg and Tyler, hopefully if she is intent on revenge she'll choose to do something that can't be traced back to her.
Better still, given her nightmare, take the intelligence by all means, but don't act on it unless they make the proverbial first move.
Meanwhile, as if her situation wasn't confusing enough already, appraising Julian in the corridor...
OK, so she hasn't set out to deceive anyone yet, but that quote from Marmion does spring to mind...
There are 10 kinds of people in the world - those who understand binary and those who don't...
There are 10 kinds of people in the world - those who understand binary and those who don't...
Lions and Tigers and Bears, Oh my !
Gosh, with her nightmares and the bitterness she feels towar the two perps, it leaves a lot of questions open about what will happen.
Nice writing.
Khadijah
Aaargh!
Well, we have Erika back and things seem to be following the expected post-surgery reality of Erika going back to school with her family and friends around her. This should be seeing me cheering and waving banners. I've always felt the emotional core of the story was about the friendship between Erika and the Lavender girls.
Yet something doesn't quite feel right on reading this chapter and I can't quite put my finger on it. Maybe it's the scene with Victoria that felt most out of place. I cast my mind back to the fiesty Victoria of old and it seems she caved a little too easily for my liking on the file request. She knows Erika has history with them. She knows Erika has no legitimate reason for wanting the files. She knows the trouble she - the good girl overachiever - could get into for doing it. And then there was the Julian scene with that comment about hospitals. I'm wondering if I need to read P&P again to see if he mentions anything about hospitals in there!
Two things I do feel pretty sure about though is that Erika doesn't seem to be acting entirely rationally and whatever she's planning for Greg and Tyler has 'really bad idea' written all over it.
Aaargh! I'm no closer to working out if Eric + 5 is real or a nightmare or Erika post-tumour is real or a nightmare or both are real or a nightmare.
Thank you for another chapter of this story.
"Just once I want my life to be like an 80's movie, preferably one with a really awesome musical number for no apparent reason. But no, no, John Hughes did not direct my life."
Don't expect too many intelligent and cogent comments
This is getting confusing as hell.
Kim
She is probably looking for a skeleton in their closet
Hello Miss Alread,
Usually that is what is needed like they found back at the Summer Camp. There was a rumor that the jerk was connected some how. Perhaps there is something about Tyler and Greg on the same order. Once it is found, she will bring it up to the Principal if she can. But, let's hope the Principal is not involved or some 'higher up' authority blocking for the two idiots.
Have a great week. I love the story AA. It is making my head spin which is up or down, sideways, inside out or outside in. Oops, my head is spinning in keeping this story line straight.
Rachel
Julian's fear of hospitals
Is mentioned in part 1, in the "future" scene in hospital as Eric awakes. As far as I can tell (although I may have missed something) it's the only time it's mentioned.
I'm starting to believe the "future" scenes are visions of a possible future, and it's up to Erika to use the visions to prevent that possible reality from happening. I suspect her current need for vengeance is the beginning of the road to her violence that led them to eventually discover the tumour was back. She needs to clue her doctors in that they missed part of the tumour before it's too late!
I am concerned that it's not just testosterone making a hash of things - I would expect that leads directly to anger, not cold hard plotting without a firm concept of what she might do. Did the doctors stuff something up in the operation and turn her into a psychopath? <>
Can't figure ANYTHING out.
Well, I'm sure as heck not clicking the "Good story" button yet.
This is one of those stories where I wish I had held off until it was done. Confusion is bad enough Confusion stretched out over weeks or months is intolerable. I can't do it.
I'll come back to this when it's finished.
Not Sure
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RAMI
I surrender. I have no idea what is real, what is a dream, what are parallel universes or sequential developments in Erika Eric's life.
The best I can guess, is that we are in Erika's reality.
Eric is still posing as Erika, and just had her brain surgery. She is now able to go back to school. Because of complications of surgery and/or the herbal supplements she is taking, Erika is having, nightmares/hallucinations. Those nightmares are causing her to act erratically. That erratic behavior will lead to consequences, including alienating most of her friends.
During this period something occurs to allow Eric to emerge as a confident young man, who is successful at sports. We will now see the first glimpses of the Eric who we met 5 years hence.
But of course I could be wrong.
Vengeance will only lead to severe consequences for Erika.
RAMI
RAMI
Playing with Fire
Someone's playing with fire. I just hope she doesn't get burned too badly.
Oh. And what was Julian doing out of class? That was too convenient having him catch Erika. I'll be watching you! hee
Thanks and kudos.
- Terry
I'm still going with
her need to get to have something done against the two idiots is normal. Erica can't deny who she used to be and it's like Eric is what's in her closet. I'm like the others revenge could be bad depending on what she's going to do and what's in the files.
There is also this can't put my finger on is feeling to things here. Eric+5 is still nagging at me. But I'm looking forward to the actual tie in.
Bailey Summers
Greg and Tyler
sure did a number on Erika. I think the dream shows she's really letting herself get in touch with just how traumatizing events like the flagpole incident were, now that she's moving foreward, without the protection of Eric's numbing fatalism. Sometimes hope for a better future can paradoxically make stuff like this more intense. I hope she finds something that'll let her get them back in a way that won't get her in trouble. Not like hiring some torpedo to break their legs---that raw vindictiveness of "making them hurt like they hurt her"---but maybe something that will expose crimes they can be prosecuted for, that'll show the world their true nature...
As I may have said before, for most of this series I was able to give equal credence to Eric being the best possible persona for Erica, the birth of Erika at Camp K. didn't fit any standard transgender scenarios; and there seemed like factors other than innate gender identity at work in her embracing girlitude ......... But she seems so natural, so secure in her femaleness these days, and when she woke up as Eric five years hence it was with such a sense of doom, that I think if she does revert to living as Eric it will be a flight from being who she really is, that will be destined to collapse like some internal Ponzi scheme of self-delusion, hype and bluster; a common enough experience for "cured" transgender people. Or I could be full of it, projecting my own stuff into this story, but either way it's a great story even if it takes us to some uncomfortable places.
~~hugs, Veronica
Not a Whole Lot of Difference...
...from the standpoint of trying to figure out what's going on, between the situation after #5 and what we're left with here.
Key differences, for what they're worth: the previous dream from the Plague days seemed factual, while this one seemed symbolic. Then again, this one led to the deja vu situation near the end of the chapter. Premonition by Erika? Trick memory from Eric+5? Coincidence? Hard to conclude anything, though coincidence, unsatisfactory as it may be, strains credulity the least.
(OK, a fourth option is that everything's in Erika's mind since the initial operation and nothing's happening at all in the real world. While it's-all-a-dream is normally too unsatisfactory an ending to seriously consider, since we're faced with choices among dream scenarios here, it certainly can't be excluded.)
Differences, continued: last time, Erika had one "fact" that seemed to come from the Eric+5 future: a dream in which she was Eric and married to Samantha. But since we didn't get the key details (family dead, Tricia gone, etc.), we don't know that it's the same future, and since Erika didn't describe it as a nightmare, there was reason to think that it wasn't. This time, the prescient point is Julian's dislike for hospitals. something Eric+5 just learned from Samantha. But if Eric+5 is fantasy, it's something that Erika certainly could have learned from her friends (including Samantha) who apparently did visit this time around.
The big problem, IMO, is that we don't know whether or not the present-day-Erika scenes we're getting are part of a continuity, or whether they're unconnected dreams or recollections. FWIW, I find that unfair as a reader: Erika, whose POV we're getting, would certainly know. If present-day-Erika is real and she's losing days' worth of memories between scenes, then given normal concerns over brain surgery, she'd alert a doctor or family member. So we can be reasonably sure that's not the case.
In both chapters, we're getting indications that Erika at least thinks that testosterone is streaming through her system. The implication is that her new determination to get revenge on the Plague's chief tormentors has been triggered, either by the T or (more likely?) by Erika's expectations/fears. It's easy to guess that those same fears may be behind her determination to go superfemme on her first day back, and (though it's not new information) to realize how physically desirable she finds Julian.
I'm still eager for new chapters. But I'm losing patience a little. If this is supposed to be a puzzle story, then we ought to be getting more tangible clues now, unless of course I'm missing them. As I said, my problem here is that I don't see significant differences between where we stood at the end of the last chapter and now. If Eric+5, "true" or not, is in abeyance and we're now on Erika's continuous post-surgery timeline, then Erika should remember things that happen between chapters and we should know that.
Eric