The Princess and the Jock Ch 2
By Anistasia Allread
“Do you have any questions?” he asked.
“Its kind of stupid.”
“I’m sure it isn’t.” he assured absent mindedly.
“Can going under anesthesia cause long term memory loss?” She asked hesitantly.
The surgeon stopped writing in the chart and looked at Erika. “Do you think you have memory loss?”
Erika heard the sound of a magazine page turning next to her. She peeked through heavy eyelids to try and see in the bright room. Her nose was sore and it felt like it had been stuffed with ten rolls of toilet paper.
The person looking through the magazine stopped and put it aside. “Sweetie?” her mother’s voice greeted.
Erika could hear the sound of some one easing out of the chair beside her.
“Mom?” Erika questioned.
“Good morning. You decided to join us, huh?” her familiar voice greeted. “Are you thirsty?”
Erika nodded and took great relief in the feel of her long curly hair tickling her cheeks. Her mouth was dry, so dry. Dust bunnies could be hiding beneath her teeth. Erika took the straw between her lips and filled her mouth with cool, metallic tasting water.
“Thank god you’re here.” She managed to say.
“Are you all right?” her mother looked considered.
“Daddy’s here too?” Erika asked.
“He and Tricia are down getting lunch.”
Erika relaxed.
“What’s wrong?” her mother asked.
“Just a horrible dream. I dreamed that I woke up five years from now and you and Daddy were dead.”
“It was just a dream, honey. Just a dream.”
Erika shuddered. “Did they get the whole tumor?” She asked.
“The surgeon said that he was very confidant.” She nodded. “You just need to rest. Are you hungry?”
“A little.”
“I’ll go ask the nurse if she can get you something to eat.” Her mother gave her hand a squeeze and exited the room.
Erika touched her face, it was smooth, lacking the stubble of her dream. Her fingers then touched her long hair and felt comforted by the curls. She lowered her hands and unsnapped the hospital gown. She took a deep breath and opened it looking down she found the hairless chest. No muscle bound, hard pecks nor growing breasts.
Sighing, she re buttoned her gown and lay back.
“Well look who decided to join the living.” Her father greeted from the door. “how are you feeling?”
“Like my nose was hit with a sledge hammer.” Erika’s voice sounded funny from the gauze packed in her nostrils.
“I just passed you’re mother. She’s going to get you something to eat.”
Erika nodded. “Daddy?” She asked.
“Yes.”
“Do you have any business contacts in Phoenix?”
“You just wake up from having your brain operated on and you want to know if I have business in Phoenix? That is an odd question.”
“Do you?”
“I have contacts all over the nation, including Phoenix. Why?”
“I just had the worse dream. You flew to Phoenix and had a heart attack.” She explained. “It was horrible.”
“Dreams while under anesthetic can be quite vivid.”
“This one was hi-def and three D.”
“I’m sorry, honey.” Her father tried to comfort her.
“Where are Aunt Carrie and Tricia?”
“They had to use the powder room before coming in to see you. It must be a girl thing.”
Erika smiled. Laughing hurt too much. “Daddy, do you have some gum or breath mint? My breath must be horrible.”
“It is, and I do.” He wrinkled his nose as he handed her a piece of gum.
“Good morning, Princess.” Aunt Carrie greeted from the door. She held a vase of flowers in one hand and a stuffed animal holding balloons in the other. “I couldn’t decide so I got them both.” She bubbled. “You went through a lot, just to get a nose job.” She smiled.
“Ha ha.”
“It is kind of funny, if you think about it.” Tricia entered the room behind Aunt Carrie. “They did fix your nose.”
Erika looked from her girlfriend to her father who smiled and nodded. “You had a deviated septum from your bike accident.” He explained. “After they finished up the brain surgery, the plastic surgeon repaired your nose as he closed up.”
Erika glared at Tricia. “Don’t let that get out at school, I can only imagine the rumors that would start.”
While Aunt Carrie made a place for flowers on the window sill, and placed the stuffed bunny and balloons next to the bed, Tricia skipped up to the side of the bed and planted a kiss on Erika’s forehead. “Don’t worry, I got you something too.” Tricia pulled a hand from behind her back to reveal what looked to be a whole stack of magazines.
Tricia fingered through them, showing them to Erika. “Two gossip magazines, Two fashion magazines, and three catalogs.” She explained. “Winter ball is in about four weeks, we need to figure out what we are going to wear.”
Erika rolled her eyes, but smiled.
“Good news.” Erika’s mother announced entering the room. “Your food has been ordered. The doctor is on his way in to see you and as soon as he is finished, you can eat.”
The Doctor could be heard conferring with the nurses out side the door. Tricia stacked the magazines next to Erika’s bed and joined Aunt Carrie in her retreat.
“We’ll be back in a few, we’re going to check out that cute Doctor at the nurses station.” Aunt Carrie winked.
The surgeon stepped in and greeted Erika. “You have a bit more color than the last time I saw you.”
Erika smiled.
The surgeon asked her parents to give them some privacy then sat next to the bed, her chart in one hand, a pen in the other. “How are you feeling?”
“Okay.”
“Are you hungry?”
“Yes.”
The doctor smiled as he scribbled in the chart. “how is your pain?”
“I feel like someone took a baseball bat to my nose.” Erika answered honestly.
The doctor smiled. “I’ll bet you do.” He lightly touched her nose, causing her to flinch a little bit. “Pretty tender.” It was a statement. “You will most likely get some bruising around the eyes as you swell in the next day or so. But the swelling will go down soon enough. Have you been instructed on how to use your pain button?”
“No.” Erika answered.
The surgeon quickly showed her how to push the button so that a small dose of pain meds could be administered through her I.V.
“Do you have any questions?” he asked.
“Its kind of stupid.”
“I’m sure it isn’t.” he assured absent mindedly.
“Can going under anesthesia cause long term memory loss?” She asked hesitantly.
The surgeon stopped writing in the chart and looked at Erika. “Do you think you have memory loss?”
“No. But I dreamed that I woke up from surgery, but it was five years later.”
“One of the drugs used in anesthesia works on your short term memory. It is one of the reasons why you don’t remember what happens while being operated on. We only used that kind of anesthesia after your brain surgery; when we closed up. Do you remember being awake for part of the surgery?”
Erika paused for a moment.
“We asked you a lot of questions and had you look at flash cards?”
Some of that was now starting to return to her. She nodded, “A little bit, I do.”
“Good.” He scratched something in the chart. “Sometimes memory loss can happen from anesthesia. Rarely anything over a day or two.”
Erika sighed, it must have been a dream. She relaxed back into her pillow.
“I know you have family and friends who are all excited to visit with you, but you need to rest.” The Doctor made his way to the door.
Erika nodded.
The surgeon turned before exiting, “And leave the packing in your nose alone. I’ll take it out in a day or two.”
Erika dropped her hand from her nose to her bedside. It hurt and felt as if they had used Tricia’s entire wardrobe as packing.
“So, how are you really doing?” Tricia approached the bed, a concerned look on her face.
“My nose hurts and I may get black eyes.” Erika complained.
“So what do you remember about the surgery?” Tricia asked with a little too much enthusiasm.
“I had the strangest dream.” Erika told her.
“I’m sure you did, but I want to hear about while you were sitting there with long tools stuck into your brain, while you were awake.”
“I wasn’t exactly awake.” Erika stated.
“Sure you were. They had to make sure they weren’t zapping good brain tissue.” Tricia explained. “I saw this one show on T.V. where they had the patient’s skull while they stuck these wires into his brain. If they were in the wrong part, he lost his vision or his ability to speak. He was awake during the whole time they were zapping his brain. Then they put him to sleep to close him up. Don’t you remember anything?”
Erika began to wonder about the sanity of her girlfriend. She thought hard about what she remembered before the strange dream. She remembered that the front of her face felt very uncomfortable and the loud noise of some kind of MRI or Cat scan machine. Doctors or nurses kept asking her questions; Silly questions like what color was on the card in front of her and what was written on other cards. She remembered bright lights and strange plastic wrapped equipment.
“How did it feel with them sticking things up your nose?”
“I really don’t remember much other than it was uncomfortable.” Erika spoke honestly. “Tricia, I really need to tell you about this dream.”
Tricia sighed. She sat back to a more comfortable position resigned to hear about Erika’s dream.
By the time Erika was finished describing her dream, Tricia was sitting forward again, her eyes wide and full of questions.
“Wow, you a football player.”
“I know, right?” Erika agreed. “Only it didn’t feel like a dream. It felt as real as this does.”
Tricia’s eyes got bigger. “Do you think it could have been one of those forewarning things?” She asked. “You know the kind of warnings like psychics have?”
“I don’t know?” Erika clipped the end off short as her mother and father entered the room followed by Aunt Carrie.
“Food is on the way.” Her mother smiled. “You aren’t getting her worked up now are you?” her mother questioned Tricia.
“No mom, she’s fine.” Erika stated.
“The doctor said you need your rest.” Her mother went on.
“They’re fine dear,” Aunt Carrie tried to emit calm. “Why don’t we clear some of this stuff off of the table so that the patient can have a place to eat her meal from.” She handed Erika’s mother a stack of cards and the magazines. She winked at Erika when her mother couldn’t see.
Erika mouthed a ‘thank you’.
“Tricia, dear, why don’t you sit on the bed next to Erika and I’ll take a picture.” Aunt Carrie suggested digging into her over sized purse for a camera.
“A picture? Now?” Erika questioned.
“Of course” Aunt Carrie stated firmly. “We need to document that you survived brain surgery don’t we?” She snapped a few pictures of the two girls. “Ok, mom and dad, your turn.”
Erika’s mother reluctantly posed with her and her father for a couple of clicks before her father took the camera from Aunt Carrie and made his Aunt pose with Erika.
“But if I break the camera, I’ll lose all of the pictures I just took.” Aunt Carrie protested.
“You’ll need documentation that you were here when Erika survived her brain surgery.” Erika’s father teased.
Aunt Carrie rolled her eyes.
“That’s enough.” A nurse came in with a tray of food. “You all need to let the poor girl eat something and get some sleep.” She placed the covered tray on the eating table and swung it over the bed so that Erika didn’t have to get up. “Go on, scoot.” The nurse prompted.
“Get some sleep, dear, we’ll go find some wheel chairs to race down the halls.” Aunt Carrie patted Erika’s leg before leaving.
“Eat.” Erika’s mother stated. “Then get some sleep. I’ll come check on you in a bit.”
“I’ll come see you after I beat the old bat in the wheel chair race.” Her father’s smile got even bigger with the sharp look from the nurse.
Tricia kissed her on the cheek. “I’ll sneak back in a few moments.” She whispered before leaving.
Erika waited until everyone had left before uncovering her meal. Turkey sandwich, chicken and rice soup apple juice and vanilla pudding. She was a bit disappointed in the lack of taste everything had. She didn’t know if it was because it was the dreaded hospital food or if it was because her nose was useless for anything but as a flesh pocket for a ton of cotton.
She looked to the door expecting Tricia to admit herself at any moment, but began to feel drowsy. Erika pushed her pain button and lay back in her pillow allowing her heavy eye lids to fall shut.
Please, no more dreams. . .
To be continued. . .
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Authors note
This week will be crazy busy at work as well as with RL, so I posted this a day or two early. I hope it answers some questions and creates many more. ;)
hope you all enjoy reading and commenting on it.
A.A.
In a way...
I guess I like the return to Erika, but the fact that the other 'dream' was so life like gets me thinking what if she'll flip flop between the two states... I'm guessing that one of another will fade out as the primary part of her takes over.
But I really have to say I hope that you didn't change you plan of the story based on reader feebdack...
JC
The Legendary Lost Ninja
Exactly this...
>> But I really have to say I hope that you didn't change you plan of the story based on reader feebdack...
The story can be interesting any way you choose to take it. In the end, it is your story, though, and we are just along for the ride. :)
flipflopping realities
I was thinking of that too. It'd be kind of fun to be kept guessing what's really real, and have a whole parallel story told in dribbles and drabs during these "alternate reality" interludes, of what Erika's life could have been like in some other life (The title Anistasia chose for this does seem to hint that the jock persona will play more than a passing role in it, unless it refers to a character yet to be introduced...). I think it was in one of those books by Oliver Sachs that I read about patients who function OK but keep having detailed memories of being some other person with a different job in a different city. The brain am a weird beastie. I would've gamely followed the Eric the Jock plotline, but honestly I'm glad Erika's back, Tricia's by her side and her folks are okay...
~~hugs, Veronica
I had wondered too
I've wondered about the title since I first read it too. I did originally think the title referred to Julian who we know is an athlete (not sure if that makes him a 'jock' but seems close enough?) and has feelings for Erika. I do wonder now if Erika is going to be haunted by the road not travelled instead - that of Eric the popular guy. Maybe a chance to get some closure (even if in a dream world) and go forward the happy girl with no regrets for the future.
"Just once I want my life to be like an 80's movie, preferably one with a really awesome musical number for no apparent reason. But no, no, John Hughes did not direct my life."
Flipping realities...
Love the story... i do hope that Erika continues to grow...
however with that said... this reminds me of Julio Cortazar's playing with realities on some of his stories, never telling the reader what was real or not, and that is precisely what makes them such great stories.
Really can't wait to see where are you taking us.
Woo Hoo! :-)
I don't really need to say much more than that. Erika's back! :-)
And thanks for giving us back Erika's friends and family again. One correction for Erika though. Chapter 1 wasn't a dream. It was a horrible nightmare. And fingers crossed it's a nightmare that's over though I can't help but think this will continue to haunt Erika until she's out of hospital.
"Just once I want my life to be like an 80's movie, preferably one with a really awesome musical number for no apparent reason. But no, no, John Hughes did not direct my life."
It will be interesting to see...
... which was the dream, and which was real. Poor Erika. I hope for the sake of her sanity, that this, the one she's more familiar with (in both cases, due to the extreme memory loss in the other one) is the real one though.
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The Princess and the Jock Ch 2
A.A. You are being oh so mean to us by not establishing which is reality. Oh well, now we have the fun of seeing where you go with the story. LOL :)
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May Your Light Forever Shine
What a relief..
HUGE HUGS, and Thanks for a new start for Ericka and Trisha. I look forward to reading this story as it develops more.
The first chapter was quite a good work of a frightening Anesthesia enduced dream. I have had some real vivid dreams when I had my surgeries as well so I can relate to the fear of that being sooooo real to Ericka. I am however very glad that it was only a dream so far, and as this is a new chapter in Ericka's story, I look forward to reading more as it gets posted..
I do love your work, and can hardly wait for more to come...
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Sonai67
Whew...?
Having Erika back is so much better than what the first chapter threatened to become. But is this real either? I started to get really worried around the point where Tricia was asking about sharp objects in the nose... I'm still looking forward to the next chapter, and not quite as afraid of it as before this one.
What if...
What if they're both dreams? Both post-surgical recovery scenes taking place during the (one) surgery, and that surgery's not over yet?
There are a few dream-like elements in this chapter. Ordering food in a hospital and it shows up in a few minutes. Being served solid food while you're barely out of anesthesia. People flitting in and out of scenes like a well-managed stage melodrama. Erika's level of alertness is highly suspicious, too. And, there's something about that bad-breath/taste thing, too. Like maybe she's still under in the O.R.
Or not.
Hey, I'm clawing for clues here! Our clever author has hooked us with some tasty bait, but we're not sure where we're going yet. I don't know how long she can keep this up, but I'm willing to bet we've only begun.
The Discussion Here...
...seems to be split fairly evenly between competing dreams (or lives) and Chapter 2 being the real timeline.
I don't think we have enough information to tell yet, but there's an argument for the "equality" of the two chapters: they both opened with the same scene, down to "You decided to join us, huh? Are you thirsty?". That suggests that these are parallel existences (or that they're both dreams) rather than actual incidents five years apart, or one dream followed by reality.
As someone mentioned, the title may mean that we're headed in the parallel-stories direction.
The question of dreams versus parallel lifelines may be nebulous in this context, except that dreams can accommodate more inconsistencies (such as the Tricia situation in the other line, where we went from "who's Tricia?" to "Tricia left you years ago").
A third possibility is that we're going to see a string of different existences, such as Eric waking up as the Plague again following a life-threatening attack, or as Erika after full SRS with a "jock" as a male domestic partner. (Both of those situations could lead to our protagonist awakening after surgery done under full anesthesia.) No real idea how THAT story would end, though.
Looking forward to more.
Eric
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yep, i'm officially an idiot. please delete my irrelevent comment here.
Mind you it is titled The Princess AND the Jock
The capitalization of AND is MY twist on things.
Our authoress has left herself quite a bit of wiggle room with this title, this "AND" could mean alot of different things. I'm talking including and beyond the old Dallas TV show Bobby Ewing stepping out of the shower "It was all a dream" device.
Eric and Erica are both valid personalities for the child. Much of what makes Erika so beloved is in Eric. Sadly much of Erika's fine qualities in Eric made him a target. But then how much of that was primarily due to his delayed growth and delayed puberty due to the tumor? Eric never really had a fair shake at becoming a man. Erika by shedding the *Plague* mantle has shined. But could Eric shine as brightly if given a new start?
So by "The Princess and the Jock" our author could mean our hero/heroine's struggle to combine the best of both and choose where she or he is heading in life. Or it could be this dual reality and at some point we learn which is real, the Princess -- her life as Erika -- or the Jock -- her life as Eric. Or it could be her going forward and her trials and tribulations of her first male crush. Mind you a female athlete could be a jock, even SHE could be a jock yet still the Princess.
It could be her mind trying to come to terms with all his/her doubts and feelings and the aftermath of surgery and how that may alter her/his personality and thinking. Remember before going to camp as a girl and at first at the camp he wanted so very much to become Samantha's' friend/boyfriend and to shed the onus of *The Plague*. By the end of summer she/he wasn't sure and soon fell back into Erika though in part due to a lack of solid help from her friends who preferred Erika. After a few months in school she was certain she wanted to become Erika permanently. That she would have doubts about her choice, at least subconsciously, seems reasonable as she was Eric for nearly all of her life.
So is Eric or Erika the way forward or are both always to be part of him or her?
So much fun to speculate and soooo little to go on.
Mean mean authoress
-- GRIN --
John in Wauwatosa
P.S. 03/15 fixed a LITTLE pronoun problem, um, her vs he. Ooops!
Absolutely brilliant......
.........Anistasia. I've read all the comments and I've gotta say, you have got people's brains working overtime. There was a couple of comments that I didn't understand at all, but maybe that's just me. Anyway, I'm not even trying to think about the possibilities here, I'm just waiting for the next chapter to see what happens. It would be nice though if Erika decided she likes guys afterall and cooled it with Tricia, although I would like them to be real close friends, like she is with Samantha throughout the brilliant previous book.
Kev [Ρĥàńŧāśĩ»ßő™], Skeg Vegas, England, UK.
Kev [Ρĥàńŧāśĩ»ßő™], Skeg Vegas, England, UK.
Both are real
RAMI
Since i was without a computer for a few days, I am a little late commenting, but in my mind, why can not both stories be the reality.
Chapter One is indeed 5 years from the date of the first surgery. Eic is Eric and Erika is a thing of the past.
Chapter 2, is indeed real and relates what happens after Eric(a) awakes from the first surgery and is happy to be Erika. That she has forshadowing of something that happens in the future is just part of the story. Eric's movement away from the Erika personality was not imediate but developed over time.
I think that developement will be seen i the future chapters.
RAMI
RAMI
Don't You Think ...?
Don't you think that Erika in the second chapter being clearly conscious of having dreamed the entire sequence of the first chapter diminishes the likelihood for the first chapter to have been "real?" At the very least, I think we have to wait and see who's dreaming what and what's real. As I suggested above, I think there's a possibility that so far, this is all dream sequence, possibly all transpiring during one surgery (most likely the first one).
Just Postulating a possibility - Peanut Butter and Jelly.
RAMI
I was just postulating a possibility. I think A.A. can take this anywhere she wants, with dreams inside dreams, nightmares within dreams, and all sorts of false leads.
Can a person dream a dream that turns out real in the future, who knows.
Within A.A. Camp K, P & P and now P & J, world, its fun to see whatcould happen.
Just had a thought.
Nothing is happening. Eric/Erika/Eric(a) was eating a P&J (Peanut Butter and Jelly) Sandwhich, got a tummy ache and food posining, then got sick. Everything occuring is as a result of food poising. It really is all a dream.
RAMI
RAMI