Enjoy!
Cliff's blog
I found this really interesting
Too sorry
This isn't so much a problem as an annoyance. I have noticed recently that I say 'sorry'even when I don't need to, eg. yesterday a guy said we shoud meet at 12 to study. I got there on time and he wasn't there. I waited for him in the library for 30 min. and then went to do something else with an advisor.
I saw him later and he told me he had arrived at 1, but he seemed to be upset so I said 'sorry' even though I'd done nothing wrong. I am writing this more for myself so I can be aware not to apologise when I don't need to. Essentially I'm just venting. lol.
An amazing girl
I met a girl today who told me she started taking hormones when she was 10. She looks amazing an could pass as a supermodel.She's around 172cm maybe more. She dances and teaches dancing to kids. she's got a boyfriend- pity (for me)
My problematic rewrite
If you recall I posted "'New Message from sexydater' - chapter 2". I wasn't satisfied with it so I'm rewriting and adding on to it, the only thing is, I'm blocked. Maybe someone can help.
Here are a few keywords I may use them, I might not, tell me what comes into your mind when you see the words:
TERRORIST, THUG, CAPTURE
Thanks for your help. ;=)
Cliff
I went to see Sherlock Holmes today
It was very well done. For those who don't know European history leading up to ww1, I suggest you look into it before seeing this film to increase your enjoyment. However it isn't necessary to know this to enjoy this film. Robert Downey is excellent as always and Jude Law fills the part of Watson admirably.
To all of you wonderful people
I hope that you have a wonderful season of joy and Love. Merry Christmas, happy Hannukah and have an amazing new year!!!
S.P.A. Universe
Could someone please tell me what S.P.A. stands for.
sexydater83
I notice people have been reading my storybut leaving no comments. I agree with Enemyoffun about comments, please leave some so I know if my story has been enjoyed.
Same title as Roo... oops... didn't mean to
I didn't mean for my poem have the same title. Hope I didn't upset anyone.
A Date
I went out with this woman. She misread my text of when we would meet, so she was really angry with me for no good reason. When she saw that she had misread the text she kept face-palming herself.
The impression I got was that she was acting like a teenage girl.
What I would like to ask people is (I don't want to insult- this is a genuine question), are women who take hormones in a continual state of puberty or do you think she was imbalanced?
OMG- Can you believe this???
Who is this guy? Is he in the US congress or Senate?
http://www.addictinginfo.org/2011/10/21/dan-savage-offers-to...
Please excuse if my words came out wrong
In my last blog, it may have seemed I was saying something insulting, I sometimes have difficulty getting words out if I don't think them through fully. I did not intend to put anyone down if that's what it seemed like.
It doesn't seem possible to get a date
I want to meet a nice feminine t-woman, but don't like many of the people I see at the clubs and bars. Every site I look for on the net is a sex site. I don't know where to find a straightforward dating spot. MY GOD, I JUST WANT TO GO ON A DATE!!!
Where are you from?
I though it would be cool to find out where everyone is from, I think someone already did this but still...
Also I'm from Sydney, Australia and I was wondering if anyone from this site who lives nearby might want to meet face to face, if so PM me.
Open-minded
I found this on facebook!
http://a3.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc7/s320x320/2988...
Crystal hall
Does anyone know why crystal hall is down?
Preethi's statement
A friend of mine said,
"Our ability to change our circumstances is often woefully limited. However, each of us has an unlimited capability to choose the attitude with which we respond to those circumstances. We can look for joy in the smallest pleasures of life, while accepting the trials to which we have been subjected."
New religion for the disenfranchised?
At first I thought this was a joke.
http://www.venganza.org/
Crystal hall
I was just wondering if anyone know's when crystal hall will be back on line?
IMHO?
Does someone want to tell me what IMHO means?
Thanks to the Retcon folk
Thanks to everyone who has been patient with me while I figured out how to put my story in the retcon index. It's repeated in some places now but hopefully that will be sorted out.
Special thank go to Enemyoffun, Maggie Finson, those who gave ideas in the forum.
But most of all I thank Lilith Langtree for her patience and for not getting angry that I messed up her page.
Apologies ahead of time
To all the retcon readers I have been trying to get my story into the contents list and will continue to try. please forgive the mistake I have been and will (maybe) make until it's correct.
I will post the new chapters before I'm finished the index as well.
What Light character list and Act 3
"What Light Through Yonder Shadow" has 3 acts. I've finished two of them at the end of each act I put down the main characters of that act. Act 3 will be shorter and I might put the character list before I start.
I have said that I won't create new characters and I'm not although I am using a guest character with another author's permission.
I have taken a while to do act 3 as I have been unsure how to form the picture into words. Please be patient.
Plot line in 'What Light'
This is the end of act 2. Act 3 is the final act.
I realise the plot for this story is confusing because of the variety of characters. I did not intend it to be. What happened is that the story gave birth to characters without my intending it to.
It probably has 2 or 3 different characters for their own stories. I do believe it is not too confusing.
Everything shall become clearer in part 3.
Nitpicking
In many tales here at BCTS people go into great detail after the story why that wouldn't be possible. Now while I sometimes feel it ok to do this (and I have been known to do it as well on occasion). Some stories are picked apart too much. I mean who care if something is legal because of one little thing.
My word, it's only a story.
Don't tear it apart- enjoy it.
Dr. Phil meets Light and Shadows storyline
I was doing some research for my story and in one part I use the phrase 'bitch in heat'. While looking to see if the phrase makes sense in the story, I came accross this:
Title alterations to 'What Light through Yonder Shadow...'
This was always intended to be a play on words title in honour to Shakespeare's line, "What light throught yonder window breaks, it is the sun and Juliet is the East."
I recently thought of new directions for the plot and therefore am making it With acts and scenes.
Every scene will be a chapter or installment. Every act will be the beginning and end of a major aspect of the story.
Enjoy!
PS- I really would like some feedback about this.
I thought I did okay for a first retcon
When I first joined this site, I tried writing fan fiction it didn't go so well. I'm writing a retcon now but don't know if it's being received that well. I hope that it works so everyone enjoys it because I'm really putting a lot into it, listening to other authors and trying to take advice.
I expect my writing to be a little rough around the edges. But I hope it gets readers. And for any of those retconners out there who have trouble with my style, please give me time to learn. advice is always appreciated. Even if I don't follow all of it.
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