Renegade Dreams

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I'm exhausted, spent all night working on a manga-style comic book called "Renegade".

It was just a dream but since I've done everything in magazine production from coming up with a concept to writing, drawing, typesetting, running the press, binding, boxing, shipping, promotion, selling ads, selling the books themselves and attending the cons -- I was busier than a woman with four husbands and eight sons on Superbowl Sunday.

Renegade was a story about a long-haired blonde boy, Sandy, raised by Indians in the Old West who is sent back to the white people when he is about 12 after the Indians come to understand that they are going to be relocated to a desolate wilderness reservation. Either that or if they fight, they will be exterminated. Sandy isn't happy, he liked being an Indian but if he doesn't go willingly, the white soldiers will probably take him away from his home and his tribe, anyway.

So, off he goes to the area where the Indians found him when he was about five. He's really surprised when he discovers that he speaks English, he'd forgotten that, but he has a hard time fitting in. For one thing, the white people want him to cut his hair and he doesn't want to do that since in his tribe, braves have long hair and it is a disgrace to wear short hair. He stays with an army unit for a bit and then is sent to live with a rancher.

Some of the ranch hands think it is hilarious that he won't cut his hair and they decide that he must want to be a girl and they end up raping him. When he recovers in town with the doctor, they nearly killed him, he goes back and shoots them both, in the back. He's only a kid and they are grown men and this is tactics not cowardice. Then he runs away, planning to find his tribe and that's the end of the first manga arc.

Almost tempts me to try to write it. :)

In the second arc, he goes to another town where cousins of the doctor's family take him in but somehow in the introductory letter, the doctor mentioned the rape but not that Sandy is a boy. Sandy can't read so he did not know this. So they think he is a girl. He goes along with this, thinking at least they aren't trying to cut his hair. He doesn't know how to be a white girl but he doesn't know how to be a white boy either so it isn't any more difficult to do one than the other in a way. Also, he remembers his Indian aunt who was so nice to him back in the tribe. She'd been born a boy but after an injury had decided to be a girl instead.

The one problem is that people are incredibly protective of a girl. After finding a black haired wig in the attic while playing with his cousin, he decides to use it as a disguise and starts going out in the night time as a boy Indian, riding around in the dark and doing mischief to people he things aren't very nice.

There was more stuff but I don't remember it much except he gets wrapped up in a mystery about a murder in Tent Town where the Chinese live. And there's a werewolf or something. :)

Hugs,
Erin

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Wow, Erin, that's just screaming to be written!

Kris

{I leave a trail of Kudos as I browse the site. Be careful where you step!}

Kris

{I leave a trail of Kudos as I browse the site. Be careful where you step!}

Just your-

-summery is pretty interesting. I liked the part in the 2nd arc where he pulls the Zorro gig. It also seems to have kind of a Ransom of Red Chief vibe going, but darker with the rape scene.

hugs
Grover

You can see why it took me all night...

erin's picture

...to get the issue out. :)

And yeah, both of those things you mentioned, as well as Jack Kirby's Boys' Ranch and a couple of old movies were influences I was aware of.

The third arc was going to involve one of the rapists he shot not being dead yet.

I woke up a couple of times and did some thinking about the concept while I was half-awake then back to sleep and deal with production problems. But the cover was gorgeous! LOL!

Hugs,
Erin

= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.

= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.

Renegade Dreams

Sounds like a winner

    Stanman
May Your Light Forever Shine
    Stanman
May Your Light Forever Shine

You seem to have more interesting dreams

Angharad's picture

than I do, or what I remember about them after I've woken up and gone for a wee. Occasionally a plot line occurs but I always forget because I don't write them down. I did dream I won the lottery and woke myself up thinking how I could help different people--so far it hasn't happened in this world.

Angharad

Angharad

Self-hypnosis

erin's picture

Years ago, I used self-hypnosis to help me do lucid dreaming. The techniques stuck, I'm semi-lucid during most dreams and can remember them if I spend a little time thinking about them after I wake up.

Hugs,
Erin

= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.

= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.

whar's the dang kudos button?

laika's picture

Blog, schmog, the last bit about "a werewolf or something" at the end of a straightforward historical drama made me laugh; so consider this my KUDO. (I always wanted to see a perfectly normal genre film, not a comedy like Blazing Saddles, but totally engrossing for what it was, that ended with an inexplicable lurch into another genre....). I like all three parts. Chinese tent town sounds interesting. In what I've seen about old 19th century western mining towns (including the one just over the ridge from me) it's very telling that they tended to be at the bottom of the hill so that everyone else's shit ran down to them. I was sad when I got to the last episode of HBO's DEADWOOD and I'm ready for another smart gritty western with a touch of the bizarre. I could really see it as a graphic novel, but if it winds up a tv series please pitch it to a cable channel that won't try to bowlderize it.
~hugs, Veronica