to look into your eyes and lose myself,
for you to be snug and warm with ourselves,
I long to feel your lips on mine as we kiss,
for us to be together no longer between us an abyss
I long for you (revised and renewed)
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Submitted by Ren-chan on Sun, 2010/11/21 - 2:10pm
Printer-friendly versionI long to gently caress your face,
to look into your eyes and lose myself,
I long for our arms wrapped around each other in our embrace,
for you to be snug and warm with ourselves,
I long to feel your lips on mine as we kiss,
for us to be together no longer between us an abyss
to look into your eyes and lose myself,
for you to be snug and warm with ourselves,
I long to feel your lips on mine as we kiss,
for us to be together no longer between us an abyss
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Nice!!!
jlattimer@neo.rr.com That's so close to what I feel for my Bailey that it's almost eerie. He knows that already, but thanks for reaffirming what my heart has been screaming to my brain.
Much Love,
Huge Hugs,
Your Friend, Jonelle-Elise
" If You don't create change, change will create you."
Albert Einstein.
jlattimer@neo.rr.com
I'm so with my girl on this
Your poem just kind of sings out exactly how we feel about each other and was so great to see it put to pen like this. I respect the heck out of poets. I find poetry really hard to write. Thank you for writing this.
Bailey Summers
to have a love like that
to have someone who misses me like that would be wonderful, and to long for their return a pain worth enduring for the joy of the reunion.
"Life isn't all butterflies and rainbows"
dorothycolleen
Dorothycolleen, member of Bailey's Angels